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    Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 8

    Shane shrugged lightly and enjoyed the feeling of Carmen’s full lips against her skin. ‘It’s all worth it now that I’ve got you.’ The need to feel more skin became more insistent as her Latina lover’s kisses evolved from simply lips, to light nibbling and sucking.

    “Hey, no hickies.” Shane said chuckling. After giving a quick glance around her to make sure they were alone, the green-eyed woman maneuvered her hand’s underneath Carmen’s long-sleeve shirt and began rubbing her fingers along the smooth skin of her taut stomach.

    Carmen gasped lightly when the pads of Shane’s fingers made contact. A warm sensation rippled from that point to every erogenous zone on her body and made her tingle all over. It amazed her how a simple touch could cause her to react in such a way.

    Shane brought her lips to the top of Carmen’s head, leaving a lingering kiss. She looked into the eyes of the woman who had pushed her to look inside herself, to see
    their potential, and to realize that life without love was just no life at all.


    Knowing what this relationship was, this connection she held with Carmen, she knew that she had to tell her certain things that she would usually keep locked inside of her. Things about her past relationships and about her life. She had to tell her about Cherie.


    “You okay?” Carmen asked with a concerned look.


    Shane nodded, “I’m so good right now.” and rubbed her nose against Carmen’s own then tilted her head and brushed her lips against the Latina’s. Her hands slowly began their ascent, blindly seeking out their prize.


    Carmen could feel herself getting hotter, she wanted her to touch her so much but also knew that a public park wasn’t the best of places. She broke the kiss and stopped the hands just that were just bellow her breasts. “If you keep this up we’ll never get anything done today.”


    “Can’t we do it tomorrow?”


    “No sugar, we’re going to my mom’s house for dinner remember?”


    “Right! Shit, I completely forgot.”


    “Yeah, besides, you can’t go feeling me up in public.”


    “Why not? It’s kind of kinky.” Shane gave a devilish grin and raised her eyebrows suggestively.


    “There are other ways to be kinky without putting on a show for 50 people.” Carmen replied.

    “Like what?”

    “Like handcuffs, blindfolds, food, toys, and other things.”


    Shane’s seductive grin went to a surprised smile, “And you’ve done all this?”

    “Maybe.”


    “Maybe? Don’t be a tease, tell me. Please?” Shane used her tried and true puppy dog pout to get the information out of her stubborn lover.


    Carmen laughed and shut her eyes tight, “No! God not the look! I can never resist that. That’s cheating.”


    “
    Having certain talents is not cheating. Now tell me or else.”
    “Alright fine. Yes I have done some of those things.”

    “
    Like what?”
    “What is this, an inquiry into my past sex life?”

    “Yes. Now spill.” Shane’s fingers went into a frenzy as she mercilessly tickled Carmen’s stomach.

    Thrashing and flopping around like a fish, Carmen laughed until her insides hurt, “Stop! Please I’m gonna die!” She breathed out between fits of giggles, her eyes tearing.

    “As long as you promise to tell me.”


    “I promise!”


    Shane ceased her torture and watched as Carmen huffed and puffed to regain her breath. The green-eyed woman couldn’t help but smile at how red the golden skin had turned on her face.

    Carmen, sitting up on her knees and facing Shane, put on her best ‘I’m playfully pissed face’ while her hands were on her hips, “You’re in so much trouble when I come up something to get you back with.”


    “I’ll believe it when I see it. Now tell me.”


    She bit her lower lip seductively and scooted herself between Shane’s legs, placing her hands on either side of Shane’s head against the tree trunk. She leaned in close, so close that she could feel Shane’s breath on her lips. The urge to kiss her nearly took over but she held it at bay. She watched as Shane’s eyes stayed focus on her lips as she started talking, “I’ve been hand cuffed naked to a bed while someone licked chocolate syrup off my body. I’ve been blindfolded while they ran ice around my nipples. I’ve been fucked with a strap-on until I screamed.”


    Shane didn’t blink once as she watched Carmen’s full lips utter the most erotic and delicious actions she had ever fathomed her taking part in. The powerful throbbing between her legs had intensified with each punctuated syllable, doubling over itself until it matched the quickened pace of her heart.


    “And what’s been done to me, I’ve done to others. Now let’s go shopping.” Carmen said as she stood up and offered a hand.


    Shane gave an amused smile and took her hand, standing up right and draping an arm over Carmen’s shoulder as they made their way back to the car.
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    “I think you’d look great in polka dots.” Carmen jested as she held up a pink and yellow polka dotted bikini up to a less then amused looking Shane.


    “Not happening.”


    Carmen sighed in mock disappointment and put the bikini back on the rack. She gathered a bunch of bathing suits she had accumulated and made her way towards the changing rooms with Shane in tow.


    As she entered the room, she felt a presence behind her. She turned around to see Shane standing in front of her, waiting. “Out.” Carmen commanded.


    “I thought you wanted my opinion?”


    “Yeah I do. A real opinion not just a compliment to see me naked. Now out!” She reiterated by placing her hand on Shane’s shoulder and moving her backwards until she plopped down on a chair.


    Shane gave an angry ‘hmph’ and crossed her arms.


    “I promise I’ll make this worth it after.” Carmen said with a seductive wink as she closed the door behind her.


    A self satisfied smirk settled on Shane’s lips. The song the store was playing switched to an old rap song that she hadn’t heard in a while. “To all the ladies in the place with style and grace….”


    “I love this song!” Carmen yelled from inside the changing room.


    Shane really liked it as well, she just couldn’t put her finger on the name of it. “Who sings it?”


    “The Notorious B.I.G. It’s called ‘Big Poppa’” She answered as she emerged from the room.


    Shane had seen Carmen half clothed or naked dozens of times, but she hadn’t once seen her in a bathing suit. Her breath caught in her throat as she beheld the sight before her.


    Carmen’s golden skin glowed under the lights and it reminded Shane of staring at a Goddess, radiating with power. Her eyes shamelessly roamed over every inch of exposed skin, appreciating each curve and contour. The tattoo that encircled her waist was mostly exposed. Shane could almost feel the black lines under her finger tips and had to grab onto the leg of her pants to keep from reaching out.


    “So, how is it?”


    Her calm and cool demeanor remained fully intact the entire time even though she felt like melting right there, “Looks good.”


    “You’re not just saying that are you?”


    “No, it really looks good.”


    “Great!” she said as she turned around and walked back inside the room.

    Shane exhaled whatever was left of the breath that she was holding and looked around the room a bit. Her eyes settled on a guy who was staring back at her with a smile. The man looked towards the dressing room Carmen was in and then back at Shane, giving her the thumbs-up. She smiled and nodded at him in response and went back to staring at the door, her cheeks blushing slightly.


    And so it went on like that for the next several minutes with Carmen donning new outfits while Shane’s thoughts kept becoming more intense with each bikini.
    ‘Up against the wall, on the floor, on the chair, in the dressing room.’ To her, it was absolutely ridiculous how worked up she was getting. She maintained her composure and made it look like this was nothing special but if Carmen had x-ray vision, she would know this whole thing was a front.


    But Carmen did know. She knew exactly what she was doing to Shane and was loving every second of it. Playing seductress had always come easily to the Latina and she knew just how powerful this asset was. She was pulling Shane’s strings in all the right ways, she could see it in those dark green eyes that she was in store for some hot and passionate love making soon.

    Staring at the mirror, she looked herself over and then towards the pile of bathing suits in the corner. Just as she was about to open the door again her phone started ringing with that obnoxious tone her sister had put on. She quickly rifled through her bag and flipped it open, “Hello?”


    “Carmen it’s your mama.” Ms. Morales answered in Spanish.


    “Hey mami what’s up?”


    “I’m going over to Aunt Ilana’s house for a bit to visit the kids.”


    “Don’t you mean to play poker with the girls?”


    “That too, now I need to you stay home and watch Isabella when she gets back home.”


    “Ma, she’s 17 she can take care of herself.”


    “Yes yes I know but she’s bringing over her friends and I don’t want them tearing down the house.”


    “Why can’t Ricky or Maria play babysitter?”


    “Because they have children of their own to worry about and I asked you, not them.”


    Carmen sighed in defeat, “Alright fine, when are they gonna be home?”

    “She said around 8 but I want you to be there when I leave.”

    “Which is when?”


    “An hour.”


    “Fine but I’m bringing Shane to keep me company.”


    “Oh really? Does she have a boyfriend yet? Vivian’s son Cesar is such a good boy, I should introduce them.”


    “Ma don’t go setting my friends up. She’s fully capable of finding someone on her own.” she stated with a hint of annoyance in her voice.


    “Alright! I won’t do anything. You just be here in an hour and you better feed that girl. She’s all skin and bones.”


    “I will. Bye mami, love you.”


    “You too darling.”


    Carmen exhaled in frustration.
    ‘Fuck. I have to babysit a bunch of teenagers when I could be having hot passionate sex with the most beautiful woman on the planet.’ She checked her watch to find it was around 4:30 and opened the door of the changing room.


    Before she realized it, she was being pushed back into the stall by hands on her waist. She looked up to find Shane with emerald green eyes filled with desperate lust and willed herself not to shudder.


    Shane shut the door behind her and pressed Carmen against the wall, their lips crashed in an exquisite display of intense desire. She needed to feel her so badly, those walls closing on her fingers, those nails digging into her back, those fingers inside of her, it made every muscle in her body ache.


    She felt as Carmen’s hands went from around her neck, down to the button of her pants, frantically undoing it and pulling down the zipper. Shane broke the kiss, leaving both of them panting for air and latched her lips unto Carmen’s throat, eliciting a sharp gasp.


    Her fingers trembled as she brought them to the front of Carmen’s bikini and felt the searing heat of Carmen’s breath on her neck as she let out a quiet, muffled groan. A hand reached into her own pants and pressed against her throbbing pussy through her boy briefs. Her knee’s nearly buckled as a jolt of electricity coursed through her body and she bit back a moan of her own.

    Her hand reached into the offending bikini bottoms and began circling the Latina’s clit, “Oh fuck.” Carmen breathed out. Her own hand slipped past the waistband of Shane’s underwear and started matching the talented fingers stroke for stroke. The hairs on her arms were standing on end as pulses of energy made her feel lightheaded.


    “Hey! Hey damn it I know you two are in there!” an inexplicably annoying voice yelled from the other side of the door.


    Carmen froze in place but Shane carried on, not caring if it was the pope knocking on that door.


    “You better not be fucking in there or I’ll call security.” the voice yelled again.


    “Baby,” Carmen said in a breathless whisper, her body still reeling from Shane’s continuous assault, “Fuck, Shane, you gotta stop, we have to go.”
    Shane responded by slipping a finger into Carmen, tearing a ragged groan that was muffled by her shoulder. “I don’t care, I want to see you come.” her voice rough and husky with desire.

    “That’s it! I’m calling security.”


    “No!” Carmen yelled. “I’ll be out in a second!”


    “It’s a fucking conspiracy I swear.” Shane groaned as she hung her head and slid her finger out of Carmen’s slick hole.


    Carmen let out a soft whimper at the feel of the exiting appendage and in a flash took Shane’s hand in hers, brought it to her kiss bruised lips, and placed the wet digit in her mouth.

    Her eyes opened wide, it was impossible to describe the feeling. That talented tongue against her skin, sucking her finger, the finger that was just inside of her… Shane placed her other hand on the wall to steady herself. A deep throated growl resonated in the back of her throat as continued to watch.


    Carmen hadn’t taken her eyes off of Shane’s in the entire time, telling her everything she wanted to say with her burning stare. The taste of herself on her girlfriend was a turn on that she hadn’t expected but what she wanted more was the taste of Shane. She was officially on a mission and come hell or high water it was going to be completed.


    Satisfied that all her juices were cleaned off, she slid the finger out of her mouth slowly. Looking thoughtfully at a speechless Shane, she tilted her head and brought her hand up to trace the well defined jaw. “I said I’d make it worth it and I keep my promises.”


    Reaching towards the knob of the door, she pressed herself completely onto the ivory skinned woman’s body and twisted it open. “I’ll be out in a moment.” Her hand going to up to Shane’s chest and gently pushing her out the door.


    She was in a daze. It was like being drunk, the entire room was moving and she felt as if she were standing on a cloud. Shaking her head slightly, she ran her fingers through her messy tresses and turned around to find a very pissed-off looking sales clerk staring at her from behind the counter. What was even more uncomfortable was that she was staring at her crotch. Shane looked down to find her pants unbuttoned and unzipped, revealing her white boy-briefs. She quickly turned around and fixed the problem.
    ‘We’re definitely gonna have to buy that last bathing suit.’

    Comments

    1. HOT HOT HOT!! loved this chapter. btw, great song choice. i had it playing in my head as i read the whole fitting room scene. update as soon as u can.

    2. OMFG….please curse at that wrinting book of yours again and soon dammit…you cant keep haing like that grrrrrrrrThat shop clerk should be fired hahaha

    3. hey girl? What’s going on , where you’ve been???? You left us like that with your story unfinished?????Come on , it was such a great story!!!!! You have to post the rest!!! I know it’s been like 1 year and a half but it doesn’t matter you have to end it , you know. Come on please give us that pleasure!!! Waiting for you……

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