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Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 8
“One time I got really sick but everyone else had to keep hustling to get me some medicine so no one could stay with me. I was sitting under the pier one afternoon and this dog just comes walking up to me and starts licking my face and lying down in my lap. It stayed by me the whole time I was sick, it was crazy. I got the meds but I still thought it was the dog that made me better so I named her Remedy… and yeah.” She cleared her throat self-conscientiously and leaned her head back on the tree, focusing on the sounds around her.
Out of no where, she felt soft lips pressing against the palm of her hand causing a smile to cross her face.
“Thank you.” Carmen said quietly.
Shane was genuinely confused, “For what?”
“For sharing that piece of you. I know it wasn’t easy and I just want you to know that I appreciate everything you tell me about yourself.”
“It’s really not that special but,” she kissed the back of Carmen’s head, loving the feel of the silky smooth hair against her skin, “you’re welcome.”
The smaller woman sighed contentedly and pulled Shane’s arms tighter around her body, basking in the rays of light that were filtering through the branches above them.
“So now that I’ve said something about me, it’s your turn.” Shane offered in order to take the focus off of herself.
“I honestly don’t know what to tell you.”
“Tell me anything. Did you have any pets?”
“Yeah, I had a pet turtle once and his name was Alexander but my mother said he was to stinky so I had to give him away to my friend. And I had a hamster for a while and her name was Harriette.”
“Harriette?” Shane asked incredulously.
“Yes Harriette because she was hairy.” said with a sarcastic air to her voice.
A throaty chuckle erupted from Shane, “That’s original. How about… you’re first boyfriend.”
“You seriously want to hear about that?”
“Uh huh.”
“Okay. Well his name was Daniel and we were in the 6th grade and it was a huge deal because we were one of the first kids to start dating in my grade. He was really cute and I was really straight back then and he was my first kiss but we broke up do to irreconcilable differences.”
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NOOO… You left me hanging!! :) I loved the lastes update and can’t wait for the encounter to continue. Babysitting should be interesting.
Great update! lol i could really picture Shane in a daze with her pants unbuttoned and unzipped :P They are HOT toguether :D Post soon!.
okay, if i were shane i’d have killed the clerk, so much torture and no reward not fair man! great story, sooo wanting more action LoL
That was HOT! Very glad they bought that bathing suit :D This update was great. Can’t wait for the adventures in babysitting. Post soon.
HOT HOT HOT!! loved this chapter. btw, great song choice. i had it playing in my head as i read the whole fitting room scene. update as soon as u can.
Great stuff!!!! Please continue
OMFG….please curse at that wrinting book of yours again and soon dammit…you cant keep haing like that grrrrrrrrThat shop clerk should be fired hahaha
hey girl? What’s going on , where you’ve been???? You left us like that with your story unfinished?????Come on , it was such a great story!!!!! You have to post the rest!!! I know it’s been like 1 year and a half but it doesn’t matter you have to end it , you know. Come on please give us that pleasure!!! Waiting for you……
nice
I’m still waiting for that update. Please continue with the story.