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Truly, Madly, Deeply
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“*****”
That short simple word carried through-out the house but no one was in it to listen to the frustrated being who said it.
“*****, *****, *****, GODDAMNIT”
Shane was yelling profanities for the sole purpose of getting the tension out of her. It had been 2 days since Jenny was admitted to the hospital for her self-inflicted wounds and 3 days since baby Angelica had made her grand entrance into the world.
‘And what a grand ***** world it is’ she thought to herself. Mark was still living with her and was currently at work. ‘*****’. His presence hadn’t made life any easier except in not having to worry about his portion of the rent. Constantly avoiding him and keeping their conversations to a minimum, Shane was not ready to forgive him for what he’d done, maybe she never would. What she didn’t understand though, was why Jenny wanted him to stay. She talked it over with the troubled writer but she didn’t argue with her decision, much to her own surprise.
It had also been 3 days since she told Carmen (or Caramel Goddess as she liked to call her in her mind) that she loved her. Shane had since berated herself repeatedly, not only for letting those 3 soul consuming words slip from her lips, but also for letting her heart free from its cage a second time in 2 years. In all honesty, Shane had no clue just how hard she fell in love until the night they consummated their relationship.
‘Love just crept up on me and whacked me from behind’ she mused to herself as she exhaled the blue gray smoke of her cigarette.
Beer in one hand and a smoke in the other, Shane couldn’t help but shake her head at herself. ‘It’s not like this doesn’t feel good, like it doesn’t feel right, I just never expected this to happen to me. After Cherie I thought I was done, player for life from that moment on. Then all this ***** with Jenny and Carmen happens and I end up falling head over heals in love with the chick.’
She rubbed her eyes with the palm of her hand, she hoped to clear her thoughts by clearing her eyes but to no avail. Still absolutely frustrated, she promptly downed her beer and stubbed out her cigarette. Walking over to the kitchen, she opened the fridge to find that it was as barren as the arctic, “*****”. She reached into her pocket to check how much money she had on her. Combined with the money she had in the bank, it happened to be enough to fill the fridge up with a good weeks supply of food. She was reaching for her jacket and car keys when she remembered something, or rather someone.
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You did an excellent job of getting inside Shane’s mind. How you wrote it really captured my attention right away. Kudos. And ending it where you did, really has me craving more of this. :DAnd as for criticisms – I can’t think of any. Have you thought about getting inside Carmen’s head too by the way? Could be interesting to see how their relationship is looked at from her POV as well; see both their thoughts and insecurities.I agree with the other comments here: we need more Shane & Carmen stories. :D I like this one, and I hope you continue on it.
Great chapter, If you hadn’t told I would have never guessed this was your first attempt at writing. Good job and keep it going. We need more Shane/Carmen stories.
If this really was your first story it was damn good!!!Hope you´ll go on soon!!
Great story! Sharmen fics are the best. and yours is a very good one!
VIRGIN? VIRGIN MY ASS!!! IF THIS WAS YOUR FIRST TIME IT WAS VERY GOOD.I’ VE BEEN DYING FOR SOME SHANE CARMEN STORIES.PLEASE CONTINUE THIS WAS GREAT!!!!!!PEACE.
well i know EXACTLY how you feel cos i just posted for the first time as well. I haven’t stood up yet because i’m not sure if i can. I like your story — you seem to have captured Shane which isn’t easy. Hope it goes well.
Great start. Love Sharmen fics. Love how you’re writing from Shane’s p.o.v. Post soon.
yay another Shane story! Good job and keep posting :)
Fabulous. I could totally see this whole scene in my head. Thanks!
Wow! 1st time for you? Doesnt seem so to me. And yes!! I agree with debs21221 that this place needs more Shane & Carmen stories, please.
Bring it on girl!! totally hooked here =) Shane / Carmen story = much needed ;)
wow…wow…i have nothing else to say. well, i agree with livvy82 about getting carmen’s pov. and yeah there needs to be more shane/carmen stories. as much as i love danish, there are just too many of their stories. post soon please!