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Twisted Triangles ch. 22
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“After fainting or what you said?”
“Fainting. I know how you feel about the other thing.”
“You’re pretty certain about that aren’t you?”
“Well you said you loved me after you gained conscience.”
“It could be the impeding concussion, you know.” she chuckled a little.
“I meant it, I love you Bette. I do.”
“Did you always?”
“No, absolutely not.” I said pointedly. She looked at me utterly horrified.
“What don’t act so surprised.”
“Did you like me a little?”
“No, I didn’t…. Hey I’m trying to be honest here.”
She couldn’t believe it, she looked like she would cry. It was so adorable, her pouting. I reached and touched her arm lightly, craving her touch. I wanted her to understand.
“Bette, do you remember that night at all?”
“Of course. We came here, and we danced the ***** dance of love. Did you forget?” She looked like she was reaching the level of being a little pissed at me.
“Bette, we didn’t meet here. We met at Mel’ s remember?”
“Oh, right. That did suck. But not even a little?”
“I thought you were trying to hard.”
“What. Not possible. A Porter does not have to try hard at anything.”
“And arrogant as *****.”
“Whatever. You wanted me.”
“Yeah to go away.” she glared at moment, then smiled again, knowing she wasn’t going to win the argument.
“Yeah well you smell. Wanna dance?”
“After a comment like that. Not on your life.”
“Please. I promise to touch you in all of the right places.”
“See, arrogant.”
“That was not arrogant. That was romantic” She says grabbing the water bottle from my hand and leading me to crowed dance floor.
“Really? I wonder what your Hallmark greeting cards would say.”
“Wouldn’t you like to know.” she winks and I melt. Smiling the biggest and widest smile my mouth would allow.
“See. Romantic.”
“Ladies and gentlemen, the Planet is honored and humbled to have a very special guest with us tonight. Here to serenade us tonight is the lovely, magnificent, Kit Porter!!”
The crowd went nuts for a minute. I took this time to look up at Bette, who had tears in her eyes. But she was smiling.
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Sorry to hear you were late to work but if it helps it was soo worth it lol I was getting so into their dance and conversation that I forgot I was sitting in my room reading this and not actually there lol Kit is a savior here and Grace, well she’s still the devil. I hope Tina is ok and that she and Bette can continue with their plans for the evening. It’s going to be sad watching them part ways eventually :( Can’t wait for more!!
Gracie is acrazy B^&^&h She might be in a world of trouble,with BetteIf I knew someone didn’t love nor want me. It would b goodbye
wait !! ffreaking jezze what the hell happenes agggh lol ok well amazing as always please post soon thanx
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Shit what the hell have happen now, is Tina pass out or something, hope Tina ok. Damn Gracie is not a good friend and can’t beleive she throw the glass at Tina, what a crazy best friend. Post soon please, thanks!
Always were hanging, come on. Tina got hurt by the glass. I’m glad its kinda out in the open, but Grace just needs her ass kicked. What a friend, its not like she was with Bette. But it is hard when your friend ends up with the person your crazy about, trust me on that one. Looking for next posting.
Oh my God, what happened, did Tina get cut from the glass? Please post soon. I hate cliffhangers, but love this story thought, keep it up ;)
OMG! Gracie she is a F***! Bitch! I don’t think she is really good friend of Tina I’m gonna kick her Ass LOL! she not really Bette girlfriend yet but she think own her Whoa! that girl she is crazy on her head I’m gonna slap her LOL! Thanks Laurelite Please continue post soon Thanks!!!
Your subtitle should have been: ‘The truth is out there, and Grace can’t handle it!’
damn that bitch cut tina’s face didn’t she? I like Kit in this story. I am glad the cat is finally out of the bag.
you.are.evil. mawahahaha/ well its out of the bag and everyone, except tina is relatively unscathed. but the love is still there and you did good girl. soon please. need to see and hug or something. thanks.
I have spent a lot of time reading all of the wonderful stories on this site, but, I have to say yours is the first that compelled me to write and leave a comment. Firstly, your writing is amazing! You have created such believable characters. Yours is the story that I can not wait to read everyday. Well Done!!! I could go on and on… but please know that you are an incredible talent and I can’t wait to read the next chapter. Thank you for taking your time to share with us.
Way to go girl!! You have posted a few that I was trying to catch up reading to comment!! Great job, but of course now you have us in suspense!! Don’t wait too long too post.. Please! :) I am sick here.. damn people and their colds… Great Job and keep up the great writing.
AHHHH Is shw cut up? I don’t like Grace, she’s a beeeoch!! lol Thanks for posting so soon!!! More please!!
K
Wow, lots of drama. Excellent chapter, just love this. Grace needs to get over herself and fast.
Grace has got to go. I’m really confused how this story started the way it did, but I love it anyway. Oh yeah, someone needs to kick Grace’s ass but good.
Lauren, get your ass back here and post. I need to know today what happens BEFORE I go out! LOL
What!!!!!!!!!!! did the glass cut her bette is going to kill grace!!!!!!!!!!!!