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Twisted Triangles ch. 22
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“She’s beautiful.” she whispered to me, her eyes never leaving Kit’s
“Will you tell me someday? Why you two fell apart?”
“I’ll tell you everything, I promise.”
“Oh wow. I’m surprised you all know who my old ***** is. But it sure does my heart proud to see the love out there in the crowd. So, I like to dedicate the first song to a special couple I’ve been blessed to have been introduced to. Ladies you know who you two are.” she turns to the band to give them instructions on the next song, giving the crowd a minute to guess who the couple might be.
“Dance with me?”
“Is this from you?”
“Of course. I’m a Porter. I make things happen.”
“Is that you being romantic again?”
“More arrogant really.”
I sing these words, time and time again to express my life, of being your lover, and your friend and as the clouds, cry cry cry cry, high above, shed their tears I’ll embrace you, with love, from all your fear
“This was the first song Kit ever taught me.”
“Yeah.” I’m getting distracted by her breathe tickling my ear and her voice sending shocks throughout my body.
“Sure is. I told her I would play it one day for the woman I loved.”
“Wait. How old were you?”
“It was three weeks ago.” I sigh it into her shoulder while she confidently sways my body to the rhythm she created. Completely separate from the music.
“I see. Romantic.”
“No, just the right thing to do.”
“I hope this isn’t just tonight. You treating me like this.”
“No, it’s not. But I’m hoping a little later that I can show you another way I express my love.”
“Yeah? Your place or mine?”
“Well, unfortunately after tonight, neither will be the best option.” She smiles down at me and I chuckle softly.
am I the one, am I the one that you love am I the one ,hheeyy, am I the one that you think of am, am I, am I the one..
“Tina?”
“Yes, Bette? What’s with the formalities?”
“Do you want to forget about telling them? Can’t we have one night where there’s no drama. I’m actually enjoying myself”
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Sorry to hear you were late to work but if it helps it was soo worth it lol I was getting so into their dance and conversation that I forgot I was sitting in my room reading this and not actually there lol Kit is a savior here and Grace, well she’s still the devil. I hope Tina is ok and that she and Bette can continue with their plans for the evening. It’s going to be sad watching them part ways eventually :( Can’t wait for more!!
Gracie is acrazy B^&^&h She might be in a world of trouble,with BetteIf I knew someone didn’t love nor want me. It would b goodbye
wait !! ffreaking jezze what the hell happenes agggh lol ok well amazing as always please post soon thanx
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Shit what the hell have happen now, is Tina pass out or something, hope Tina ok. Damn Gracie is not a good friend and can’t beleive she throw the glass at Tina, what a crazy best friend. Post soon please, thanks!
Always were hanging, come on. Tina got hurt by the glass. I’m glad its kinda out in the open, but Grace just needs her ass kicked. What a friend, its not like she was with Bette. But it is hard when your friend ends up with the person your crazy about, trust me on that one. Looking for next posting.
Oh my God, what happened, did Tina get cut from the glass? Please post soon. I hate cliffhangers, but love this story thought, keep it up ;)
OMG! Gracie she is a F***! Bitch! I don’t think she is really good friend of Tina I’m gonna kick her Ass LOL! she not really Bette girlfriend yet but she think own her Whoa! that girl she is crazy on her head I’m gonna slap her LOL! Thanks Laurelite Please continue post soon Thanks!!!
Your subtitle should have been: ‘The truth is out there, and Grace can’t handle it!’
damn that bitch cut tina’s face didn’t she? I like Kit in this story. I am glad the cat is finally out of the bag.
you.are.evil. mawahahaha/ well its out of the bag and everyone, except tina is relatively unscathed. but the love is still there and you did good girl. soon please. need to see and hug or something. thanks.
I have spent a lot of time reading all of the wonderful stories on this site, but, I have to say yours is the first that compelled me to write and leave a comment. Firstly, your writing is amazing! You have created such believable characters. Yours is the story that I can not wait to read everyday. Well Done!!! I could go on and on… but please know that you are an incredible talent and I can’t wait to read the next chapter. Thank you for taking your time to share with us.
Way to go girl!! You have posted a few that I was trying to catch up reading to comment!! Great job, but of course now you have us in suspense!! Don’t wait too long too post.. Please! :) I am sick here.. damn people and their colds… Great Job and keep up the great writing.
AHHHH Is shw cut up? I don’t like Grace, she’s a beeeoch!! lol Thanks for posting so soon!!! More please!!
K
Wow, lots of drama. Excellent chapter, just love this. Grace needs to get over herself and fast.
Grace has got to go. I’m really confused how this story started the way it did, but I love it anyway. Oh yeah, someone needs to kick Grace’s ass but good.
Lauren, get your ass back here and post. I need to know today what happens BEFORE I go out! LOL
What!!!!!!!!!!! did the glass cut her bette is going to kill grace!!!!!!!!!!!!