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Twisted Triangles ch. 41
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“Just friends. Just fucking friends?” He nodded his head suspiciously, while he sucked his teeth. I knew he was about to say would be over the line.
“Friends don’t lie to their friends or relatives to cover up some fucked idea of a relationship. You and Bette are not friends. You’ll never be friends.” He stood his ground, I’ll give him that. But he’s standing too close to me and I felt the overwhelming need to kick him in the balls.
“Fuck you, Eric.” I simply told him. I turned out of his room and headed for my house.
“Tina, wait.”
“Let her go Eric.” I heard Bette say from their porch.
“Stay out of this Bette. None of this would have happened if it wasn’t for you.” He spat back. I paused and waited for her to say something, anything to him. But she never did. I’m not sure if it was because she didn’t want to make more trouble or if she just wasn’t going to take his bait.
“You always have to pick a fight with her, don’t you?” I yelled to him on my own front porch.
“What?” He asked more confused.
“Just….don’t bother, ok? Leave her out of this for once.”
“Fine….can I come over so we can at least talk about this?”
“No, you can’t.” I told him with finality in my own voice. “I’m going out to meet Shane!”
“Tina…wait.” But I had already slammed the door. I dare him to come over here.
“Jesus TK, what the hell? Some of us like the quiet.” I get from Gracie who was sitting watching her performance on TV.
“Sorry.” I say under my breath. “I’m going out. Do you need anything?” Instead of answering me, she turned the TV off and turned to me.
“Tina?”
“Yeah.” I answered a little tiredly. Suddenly after dealing with Eric, I didn’t feel like going anywhere.
“What happened out there?”
“I really don’t want to talk about it, Gracie.” She looked at me sadly before continuing.
“Tina. When did we stop talking to each other?” I’m not sure. It could be after you threw the glass at me head. Or the time you hit on Bette in New York before I arrived. Or it could have it might have been when you decided to have Bette for yourself. All those things came to mind. But none made it past my lips.
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I would love to read the whole story. Could you please post the first 40 chapters!?!!?
OMG! Welcome back Laurelite! I was so disappointed when you stopped posting chapters of Twisted Triangles. Imagine how shocked I was to see a NEW chapter after all these years. I haven’t even read it yet and I know it’s going to be great. For readers who haven’t read the first 40 chapters, do yourself a favor and pull up this author in the search and start from the beginning. I promise you will not be disappointed. This story has one of the most memorable chapters EVER, and I still think about this story any time I hear Fiona Apples’ song Criminal. So again, welcome back Laurelite, and I hope you will be sticking around for a long while to come.
Ok.. I’ve read and skimmed the back story.. It is good but there were a lot of twists and turns, sometimes hard to follow and a lot of build up in places with no payout, but with that said you have a great storyline and most of the time when I’ve just had with this story you write an amazingly sweet B&T chapter.. I hope they find their way through and actually work it out..
But I must say I love how you write Tina with so much edge and feistiness its so awesome.. Please keep that up.. I really do want to see how this turns out and plus I would to see Tina rip Grace a new one and tell Eric where to get off!!!
I complain but as you can see I’m still here reading so you must being something right..
Ironically I say.. PPS
I agree with LishaLove. As the writer please give us dialogue tags so we know who’s speaking, many times that’s not clear so I’m lost. There are good essays on fiction writer’s sites on using dialogue tags if you’d like to learn more. It would help us follow your storytelling which I agree has great energy but is all over the place.
I’m not saying that the dialogue is all over the place per say.. I’m just saying that it’s sometimes hard to follow when you do the POV’s right behind each other.. Sometimes not all the time..
I love your dialogue between characters and your character development and I was mostly talking about in the beginning.. I don’t want to sound overly critical because that’s not my intent.. You have a great story, it has humor, angst, heart and very well developed characters.. I’m just hopping that they can get past the angst, dropped their baggage, I.e. Eric and Grace and move toward having a great relationship, which you give us awesome glimpses of and then snatch away from us!!!
Please put them together soon and have them each rip their respective partners a new one before they leave them.. And I would not be opposed to Tina kicking Grace’s a-s either.. Lol I’m just saying!!!
As promised, can read all 40 chapters, which had
an entire afternoon, however conclude all, I confess that
I loved it! is an amazing story !!
Loved the kitchen scene where Bette comes ago
Tina when she was making the sauce, the scene
they were dancing to the music Fiona.
In short, I loved!
please do not take nine years
to leave the next rsrsrsrsrs chapters.
10 Stars.
Note: sorry my both in English as it is not my official language
I’m from Brazil.