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Twisted Triangles ch. 40
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“Can I you a question, T?”
“Sure.” She asked licking her lips at me. This is where I wanted the conversation to go, but my breathing quickly told me that I wasn’t as prepared.
“Would it have worked?” My voice is an octave below where it normally is. A product of our close proximity and Tina staring right at me.
She leans in closer, before she licked her lips again. this time grazing my bottom lip with her tongue.
“Bette, it definitely would have worked.” Her voice was just as husky and full of want as mine. I was sure that she was going to tell me to take her away from her driveway. However I would proved to be the played party, she moved away from my lips and kissed me softly on the cheek. I’ll take it. Damn, Tina welcome home and let the games please come to an end.
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Ok, so that went a little better than I thought.
“Two Minutes and ten seconds, Porter.” Alice says behind me. I throw my head back in frustration. I know what she is talking about. It’s the same thing Eric just yelled at me about. Tina and the airport.
“Two Minutes and ten seconds.”
“I know Al, what do you want me to do? I can’t take it back.”
“I can’t believe it took both of you two minutes to find each other like that. It was like the movies.”
“I know. It was…. It was just incredible, but then again Tina is pretty special.”
“Yeah, yeah whatever.” She side waving her hand dismissive.
“What did Captain Testosterone say when you got in the house?”
“Don’t ask.” I tell her while I take a seat and let out a long breathe at the same time.
“That bad, huh?” I just nod.
“Well, I’ll say one thing…”
“Just one?” I ask. She gasps in mock horror and I throw a pillow at her.
“Hey no hitting with the pillows. Save the kinky stuff for Tina.”
“Ha ha. Now what were you saying?”
“Oh right. I’ll say one thing about today. And Eric himself can’t even deny it.”
“Well what?” I ask impatiently because Alice has taken this moment to zone out.
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TARA LIVES. please post soon. PEACE.
please to continue, some time.
well finally you’re back…don’t let s3 and other stories to take you away from your plan…bring B&T together, they belong together…i really liked all the talks between alice and bette and eric..realy funny..i hope B&T will find the way to be together…btw, i’m going to SF ;)
Eric and Gracie must be idiots. Why pursue someone you know is inlove with your best friend/sister. Tina and Bette are stupid too they should never got involved with Eric and Gracie. T&B should just dump them, they don’t need to jump into a relationship with eachother but they need to leave their respective relationships.
jeez the drama its so so damn addicting
“”Al, why do you have to provoke him like that?””Because it’s fun for me.”And for us. Great job with this chapter, Laurelite!
oh man!…i barely leave comments but i jus ave to with this story its tooo good!!!! Al is funny as hell…keep up the good work and post soon PLEASE!!!
They’re torturing themselves and the others. They all know who and who should be together. Then why continue? Tina should make up her mind now, or she just enjoys the awkward and vague situation?
wow i was just thinking about you and your story and wondering what happened to one of my favorites, and here you are (i am doing my happy dance) cant wait for more…luv this story!!!!!!!!!!
This is what we need, pls more of this story!!!
Glad to see you back, Laurelite. That was terrific on many levels: character, dialog, interior monologue; all with a wry sense of humor. But that Eric’s a butthole. How’d he A. get born into the Porter family and B. get Tina at all interested when he is in fact a humorless, short tempered, insecure butthole?
you’re back! have you watched ‘imagine me & you’? well, if you really love somebody, you’ll be able to let them go knowing that it’ll make them happy and it wld be pointless to keep them by your side. that is exactly ehat eric and gracie must do! instead of holding on selfishly to Bette and Tina, making their lives miserable….pls post soon=)PS: are you a Buffy fan?!
Laurelite, I love the relationship that Bette and Tina have in this story as it conveys the emotional journey each of our heroines are on. There is such a wonderful and easy banter between. Such honesty only comes from like safe and secure with someone. Keeping on writing your versions of all the character because I will be here to comment and enjoy their company particularly given the upsetting twists and turns that S3 is taken. This is the beauty of this site. Freedom of choice to post your story and freedom of the reader to view them. But you must get Bette and Tina back together as their unions with Grace and Eric will only hurt everyone and result in a bunch of four very unhappy campers. Please continue soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Man I missed thiis story. I always liked it but when U start adding ‘Buffy” quotes. Yhat moves it right up the list. Welcome back and thanks for taking the time to write.
Eric and Grace is driving me crazy and want to kick their ass and tell them to stop bother Bette and Tina. Bette and Tina need to talk more and they need to break up with Eric and Grace soon and be together again. Ok post soon please, thanks!