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Twisted Triangles ch. 41
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“I don’t know, Grace. I’ve just had a lot on my mind.”
“I know. You’ve been saying that for a while now. Which is why I’m asking what’s wrong now.”
“It’s complicated. It’s about Eric. And you can’t help.” No one can.
“Still I can listen you know. I am your best friend.” She added a little hurt that I would forget that.
“I know. But no one can help me with this ok? I have to figure it out on my own.”
“Tina, no offense, but your version of figuring things out is running as far from the problem as possible.”
“Ok. I deserve that.”
“I know.”
“But as I recall my only problem wasn’t just Bette. It was also the best friend that threw a fucking glass at me.” I tell her quietly, but coldly.
“Tina I have apologized for that.”
“I know, but it still contributed to why I left Gracie. So don’t discount my feelings about leaving here, ok?”
“I didn’t mean…”
“You never do.” I throw back while walking back to my room.
“Tina, we got to get past all this if we’re going to keep living together.” She said after I came back out a few minutes later with my car keys.
“I’ll be back in a couple of hours alright.” I say rushing past her. God this whole trip back is kind of wearing me down. It’s only been a couple of weeks.
“So I’m doing the right thing though, right?”
“Can’t answer that for you TK, you know that.”
“Shane please, I need help here. And this whole Zen non answer thing is not helping me out at all.”
“Ok you want to know what I think?”
“Yes. Please.” God I hope that she doesn’t say ‘follow your heart’ or some sentimental crap like that.
“I think that without a doubt that you and Bette belong to only each other.”
“Really?” I ask surprised.
“It’s not like that’s new information Tina.” She says resuming her inspection of every girl that walked through the Planet’s door.
“Ok, right. So now what?” I ask aloud, though I only meant for me to hear it.
“That’s up to you and Bette to figure out.” She says true to form. With her aviator glasses nonchalantly twirling in her hand, she takes her attention away from me for a minute and checks out the latest girl to walk in. My guess by the way Shane is checking her out, she must be new to the neighborhood.
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I would love to read the whole story. Could you please post the first 40 chapters!?!!?
OMG! Welcome back Laurelite! I was so disappointed when you stopped posting chapters of Twisted Triangles. Imagine how shocked I was to see a NEW chapter after all these years. I haven’t even read it yet and I know it’s going to be great. For readers who haven’t read the first 40 chapters, do yourself a favor and pull up this author in the search and start from the beginning. I promise you will not be disappointed. This story has one of the most memorable chapters EVER, and I still think about this story any time I hear Fiona Apples’ song Criminal. So again, welcome back Laurelite, and I hope you will be sticking around for a long while to come.
Ok.. I’ve read and skimmed the back story.. It is good but there were a lot of twists and turns, sometimes hard to follow and a lot of build up in places with no payout, but with that said you have a great storyline and most of the time when I’ve just had with this story you write an amazingly sweet B&T chapter.. I hope they find their way through and actually work it out..
But I must say I love how you write Tina with so much edge and feistiness its so awesome.. Please keep that up.. I really do want to see how this turns out and plus I would to see Tina rip Grace a new one and tell Eric where to get off!!!
I complain but as you can see I’m still here reading so you must being something right..
Ironically I say.. PPS
I agree with LishaLove. As the writer please give us dialogue tags so we know who’s speaking, many times that’s not clear so I’m lost. There are good essays on fiction writer’s sites on using dialogue tags if you’d like to learn more. It would help us follow your storytelling which I agree has great energy but is all over the place.
I’m not saying that the dialogue is all over the place per say.. I’m just saying that it’s sometimes hard to follow when you do the POV’s right behind each other.. Sometimes not all the time..
I love your dialogue between characters and your character development and I was mostly talking about in the beginning.. I don’t want to sound overly critical because that’s not my intent.. You have a great story, it has humor, angst, heart and very well developed characters.. I’m just hopping that they can get past the angst, dropped their baggage, I.e. Eric and Grace and move toward having a great relationship, which you give us awesome glimpses of and then snatch away from us!!!
Please put them together soon and have them each rip their respective partners a new one before they leave them.. And I would not be opposed to Tina kicking Grace’s a-s either.. Lol I’m just saying!!!
As promised, can read all 40 chapters, which had
an entire afternoon, however conclude all, I confess that
I loved it! is an amazing story !!
Loved the kitchen scene where Bette comes ago
Tina when she was making the sauce, the scene
they were dancing to the music Fiona.
In short, I loved!
please do not take nine years
to leave the next rsrsrsrsrs chapters.
10 Stars.
Note: sorry my both in English as it is not my official language
I’m from Brazil.