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Two for the Road, Final
Tina, along with Dana and Alice, shoved their bags in a cab and were headed to the Porter Estate. “Maybe it’s better if you two wait at a restaurant or something. I mean, how am I going to explain you?” Alice squinted and looking at Dana, said, “Do you hear this,” before looking back at Tina, “Have you even figured out how you’re going to explain yourself? Yeah, I didn’t think ya did. So, let’s baby-step it to the bus, Tina, shall we?”
Tina was about to ring the doorbell again when Thomas finally answered. “Hello, I don’t know if you remember me, I’m Tina Kennard, I was here about a month ago for a party. I was wondering if you could tell me if Bette was home?” Thomas simply said, “No,” before closing the door in Tina’s face. “Oh god…Tina, let me handle this. That was just rude and uncalled for.” Alice rang the bell about fifteen times in a row, and when Thomas finally answered again, she said, “Hi, there, Alice Pieszecki, Bette Porter’s best friend in the whole world, yeah, we were wondering if you could get her out here for us, like today, while we’re still young.” Tina put her hand over her eyes as Thomas said, “Madame, what is it you don’t understand. Ms. Porter is not here at the moment. Now I will be more than happy to take a message if you insist….”
“A message?” Alice turned to Dana and said, “Dane, he wants us to leave a message.” Dana snickered, “So I heard, Madame. Shall we leave her a message then?” Alice turned back and trying her best to push through Thomas, said, “Look, we’ll just wait by the pool, I mean I’m sure there’s a pool somewhere on this golf course.” Thomas forcefully broke free from Alice’s grip, knocking her back into Dana. “Ladies! I ask that you be civil. Ms Porter should be back later this evening, and I suggest you come back then.” With that, Thomas slammed the door, blowing Alice’s hair back in the process. “What a dick!” Tina let out a sigh and looking at Alice, said, “Nice. Real nice. Did you eat paint chips as a child or something?” Dana laughed as Alice said, “No…why?”
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(41 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
Ahhh so sweet! Thanks for another awesome chapter!
ok… now it all comes together… you have to excuse me i’m on too many MEDS… love this and i am glad you are continuing… thanks…
I’ve loved this story from the start. Perfect end to this part… and so happy you’re continuing on.
Girl, this was perfect as an ending to this part of the story. Of course now I can’t wait for you to post the start of your next one!
OK..this was a perfect ending…BUT I am begging for a sequel. Thanks!
What a beautiful ending. The ring was the secret So glad that Bette did remembered. thanks
Wow, that was beautiful! Now get on with that sequel girl.
Great story. I loved it. I also like the comedy of Alice and Dana…I miss those two together. Can’t wait for the next story. PPS
Wonderful story. I am so glad that they have found each other again. I can’t wait for the next part of the story to take place.
SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL!!!!!!
Great update. Looking forward to more.
That was great. I’m glad you are going to continue. Dana & Alice are to funny. Thanks for taking the time.
indeed another fabulous post, thank you for your work, thank you for tibette, and as others have noted, a rekindling of the great comedic relationship of Danish. Really look forward to your next chappy ;)
Girl. I love this story. I’m so glad you’re going to continue!
real twist on the tibette story. thank u. take them home to LA and let them begin their life. pps
Great story!
WOW, what a great story! Alice and dana are so funny! i agree sequel!!
That was a wonderful story. Really sweet.I look forward to your next one.
Absolutely beautiful…so glad that you’re continuing with the story. Thanks.
Now that explains it. Bette had memory loss. Bette & Tina as childhood sweethearts is quite interesting and unique. I’m joining the chorus that’s screaming out for a sequel! Thanks, girlporter, and don’t stay away too long. :>
A very sweet ending to this chapter. I look forward to the sequel.
Awesome story.