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Uncharted Territory
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‘It’s not about if I do or not, it’s about what you believe.’
‘I believe you did, but now I don’t know.’
I can appreciate her honesty as much as I want, but that doesn’t mean I like hearing what she says. Hearing that even my love for her is in question is more than saddening. I can understand it, but facing it is something else entirely. The thing with love is that instead of saying it, it’s most important that you show it and the person you love actually feels it. If she doesn’t, the words itself loose any value. Just like the word sorry.
When I leave it without further comment while shifting in my seat she looks down at her hands before moving on to the next question. ‘If you could see into the future, what would you want to know?’
‘I would like to know where we will be.’
‘I would like to have that ability.’
‘I’m not so sure about that, depending on what I would see.’ I say while turning the next card around in my hands, hoping it will be a lighter question and thinking how I would love to see us ten years older and wiser but as happy as we were two-three years ago. When I read the question I wonder if maybe this game didn’t come too early. It feels like falling from one trap into another, so I read the question in one exhale without looking at her. ‘How do you define great sex?’
‘Jesus.’ She hisses between her teeth while abruptly getting up. ‘Do you mind if I turn the heating down or are you cold?’
‘No by all means.’ I chuckle when I recognize the same uneasiness in her as well. ‘I told you that this game was a great idea right?’
‘I’m not so sure anymore.’
‘But you still have to answer the question and to be honest.’
‘Do you mind if I pass?’
‘You said no skipping.’
‘Arggg ok, ok fine.’ Sighing she sits back down, resting her head on her hand, her eyes find mine, before she licks her lips and starts. ‘It’s slow, it’s sensual, it’s when every touch, every caress, every kiss has a purpose, when it speaks. And then when you take time to listen and feel every reaction, every goosebump and every moan, when you understand it, when you crave for more, when you need more and then take more and you get even more in return. When it’s passionate. Daring. Enticing. Inspiring. When you want it to last till the point of stopping time, so you can just be in the moment and you can’t stop thinking about it for days after.’
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Thank you for the chapter!
Honestly i don’t see how all their talks and meeting with each other can help to fix something between them if all of the ending the same – one of them leaving in anger.
Maybe therapy?
I don’t comment much on this story but wow what a emotinal hard chapter was this for them.
Bette made a attemp to communicate by using cards with deep questions on it that they had to give honest answers to it. It broke my heart to see how Bette is deeply hurt by the betrayel of Tina, how she had that meltdown but she gave honest anwers. Maybe this really opens Tina’s eye on how deeply hurt Bette is by her infidelity. Maybe this meltdown was needed so they can really try to repair their relationship. Give Bette some space, she will come back or contact Tina. It seems hopeless but i have faith they will come back stronger than ever as a couple, it just take time, time they have to take both, don’t rush things.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
I haven’t commented much as I don’t know what to say as my feelings and emotions are always a little raw but I am still reading.
Thanks for the post
SG
Tough chapter. They keep getting stuck in a never-ending loop when they DONT go and capture, tackle if necessary the one who is running.
Dang. Bette’s intentions were good, but may I suggest Twister next time? That Bette chose to hide the cards with questions about cheating should tell Tina all she needs to know about the way forward. She has to step up and own it. Say she is sorry again and again until Bette believes her. Say she will spend the rest of her life making amends if she has to. She needs to be on her knees, ugly crying, listening to the pain she caused kind of sorry. It’s time Kennard. Own it. Bette’s behavior, no matter how awful, does not justify her cheating. And for the love, they both need to stop running. I love this story. It’s intriguing in its heartbreak. Bette clearly knows her part in the demise of the relationship, she has suffered enough…
There are very few stories in all my fandom years that have wrecked me so bad after each chapter. This story is marvelous, heartbreaking but so beautiful. I created an account here just to tell you that I hope you will find it in yourself to give it an ending someday. Thanks a lot for sharing it with us.