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Unexpected: Part 5
“Hey, you guys took a while,” said Shane picking her drink. “Girl talk,” said Papi immediately before Shane could ask her anything. “Are you okay?” Tina asked Bette. “Yeah, fine,” said Bette taking a drink. She turned her eyes to the dance floor and saw a beautiful redhead, Bette smiled at the redhead and she smiled back. “Hey, I’ll be right back,” said Bette walking to the dance floor. Papi immediately turned to see Tina’s expression; it was like Bette just cheated on her right in front of her. Papi then knew that Tina felt the same for Bette, but she knew that they had to find their way to each other themselves.
Bette started to dance with her redhead very close, while Tina saw everything. Tina’s heart broke even more, when Bette and the redhead started making out. Papi knew that Bette was just trying to forget Tina, and it was working on also pushing Tina completely away. Tina couldn’t stand this, she got up and said:”Girls, I need to go. It’s a school night and I promised my parents I would come home early.”
“Didn’t Bette bring you?” asked Papi. She knew that Tina couldn’t stand seeing Bette with another woman anymore. She more than understood Tina.
“Oh, right. I forgot,” said Tina looking down to her purse. “Well, I’ll call a cab.”
“We could take you?” suggested Shane getting up.
“No, no. I don’t want to ruin your night. Please I’ll take a cab,” said Tina trying to convince Papi and Shane. “Okay,” both Shane and Papi answered. When Bette went back to the table Tina was already gone. “Where did Tina go?” asked Bette looking around for Tina.
“While you were dancing with that girl, she left,” answered Papi. Bette chuckled and said:”I’m her ride, she couldn’t have just left.”
“She left Bette; she told us that she would get a cab. She didn’t even want us to give her a ride,” answered Shane. Bette didn’t know what to think, she was mad that Tina just got up and left. Without telling her she was going. “Did she say why she went home?” asked Bette. “No, she didn’t,” answered Papi. By her tone Bette knew that she knew something, but decided not to say anything.
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(28 votes, average: 3.54 out of 5)
:) Ok Bette needs to hurry and step up before someone else scoops Tina up. PPS
I know that comments are good, but check out the number of people that actually read the story. That is a good indicator of how your story is received. Love how Bette handled the gang leader. I just hope that Tina is not caught up in this battle between wits. It seems that Tina and Bette have their own battle going on between them.
Poor Bette get hit. Hope Bette will talk to Tina and tell her how she feel!
I’m loving it, thanks for the post.
Bette is very good for Tina. Will Bette pursue Tina after she sees her with Amber. Gang members cannot seem to fight their own battles, they need help. Bette go after Tina. Great update. I love this story. PPS
just hate gangs…innocents always suffer the most…now Bette needs to stop putting herself down and catch up before she loose opportunity.
Gangs scare me. Who would have thought that Bette had such low self-esteem, of course she is good enough for Tina if she loves her. I hope they actually talk to each other before hurting each other more. Great story.
ok Bette really needs to get with Tina before Amber does because thats just wrong. why can’t they both just see that they like each other and get together. great update PPVS
It’s great deedee! :)