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Unexpected: Part 5
King High:
The weekend had gone and Bette hadn’t heard from Tina. Monday Bette decided to go to school early incase Tina arrived early, so she can ask her why she left last night so early. Tina was the last one to arrive. When she walked to the gang, she ignored Bette and went to talk to Alice; Bette didn’t notice this she thought that Tina had to talk to Alice about the school paper assignment. But it wasn’t so. The entire day Tina ignored Bette, in Math, in Literature, in history and even in pottery class. Bette knew officially that Tina was mad at her, but every time she tried to go sit next to her in class; someone was already sitting next to her. Bette didn’t know what to do.
Bette house:
When Bette got home Isabel sensed immediately that something was wrong. While they were eating lunch Isabel decided to talk to her. “Everything alright honey?”Isabel asked Bette. Bette looked up from eating at her mother and said:”Yeah, why?” “You seem sad,” answered Isabel,” Did something happen at school?” Bette didn’t know if she should tell her mother, but she decided to trust her. “I think that Tina is mad at me,” said Bette looking at her mother.
“How do you know that?’ asked Isabel. “She ignored me the whole day today,” answered Bette playing with her food. “That doesn’t mean anything, she has other friends.”
“No, you don’t get it mom. Last night we went to Milk and she left without saying goodbye. Today she didn’t even acknowledge my presence; she basically did as if I didn’t exist,” said Bette very sad.
“I’m sure it will be alright. Why don’t you go to the basketball court in town, where you and Papi used to go?”
“Yeah, that is a great idea. I’ll invite the girls to see if they want to come. Just like old times,” said Bette already feeling better. Bette immediately went to her room and called the girls, Isabel was relieved that her daughter felt better.
Basketball court (town):
This is the basketball court where all the people from the ghetto came. They are Bette and Papi’s friends; they would all play against the other in teams. Bette was the best player among them; she had a natural talent for basket ball. After a while everybody was there, Alice had managed to invite everybody, even Tina was there.
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(28 votes, average: 3.54 out of 5)
:) Ok Bette needs to hurry and step up before someone else scoops Tina up. PPS
I know that comments are good, but check out the number of people that actually read the story. That is a good indicator of how your story is received. Love how Bette handled the gang leader. I just hope that Tina is not caught up in this battle between wits. It seems that Tina and Bette have their own battle going on between them.
Poor Bette get hit. Hope Bette will talk to Tina and tell her how she feel!
I’m loving it, thanks for the post.
Bette is very good for Tina. Will Bette pursue Tina after she sees her with Amber. Gang members cannot seem to fight their own battles, they need help. Bette go after Tina. Great update. I love this story. PPS
just hate gangs…innocents always suffer the most…now Bette needs to stop putting herself down and catch up before she loose opportunity.
Gangs scare me. Who would have thought that Bette had such low self-esteem, of course she is good enough for Tina if she loves her. I hope they actually talk to each other before hurting each other more. Great story.
ok Bette really needs to get with Tina before Amber does because thats just wrong. why can’t they both just see that they like each other and get together. great update PPVS
It’s great deedee! :)