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Unforgivable- Chapter 7
“I’m not doing anything to US. There is no US. You were the one who fucked up, not me.”
Sam stays quiet for a moment, taking it all in, but then a small smile creeps across her face.
“Carmen, do you really thing that your marriage is going to last. Everyone knows Shane is the most unattainable person in Hollywood, come on. You know she’ll just end up leaving you, just like her dad left his wife.”
Carmen looks at Sam with shock.
“What, you didn’t know I knew about that? I was there last night, I saw the whole thing.”
“No, Shane would never do that to me.”
“She wouldn’t? How can you be so sure? She already cheated on you didn’t she? Yup, I know about that too… Cherri Jaffe. So come on Carmen, you and I both know it’s not going to work out between you two.”
You’re not alone.
I know I’m far from home.
Do you remember me at all?
I’m leaving.
Do you wait for me again? I’m screaming.
No more days without you spent.
“No, I can’t do this to Shane, I wont”
“That’s a shame because I would hate for anything bad to happen to her.”
The Latina looked at Sam with fear in her eyes
“You know I’ll make sure of it, especially since I heard about this new kid in town- really good with torture. She never slips up, so Shane will be fucked and I’ll get away scott-free.
It hurts, wounds so sore.
Now I’m torn, now I’m torn.
I’ve been far away.
When I see your face my
Hearts burst into fire.
Hearts burst into fire.
End Flashback
“Shane, I’m sorry. I just didn’t want anything to happen to you. I’m so sorry.”
Carmen has tears in her eyes as she takes the tape from Shane’s mouth and wrists. The lanky woman immediately gets up and calls someone.
“Hello?” the voice on the other end starts off.
“Hey Jay, what exactly were you planning on doing to Sam?”
“I was thinking about just beating her around a little bit, why?”
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How does one have the stomach for this. I read because you do write it. but hope the whole story isn’t this cold blooded, thanks
I really loved this story in the beginning… I have to say though that excruciating and murdering Sam is something I just can’t understand. I don’t like it, sorry, and I don’t get why you would Sharmen relate to such an awful murder. Sorry!
i don’t get whats up with the violence.. this is way to extreme.. the torture is a bit to much.. I mean i can understand beaten the crap out the girl but the torture is way to much.
[walks in to the room whistling innocently] ……. [stops and looks around]…. [then shouts] I LIKED IT!!!! [and runs out]… YeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeH!