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Vignettes: Chapter 43
You dont think you bit yourself in the butt making that bet?
Dana didnt move her eyes from her clothes she was packing into a bag. She dropped some of her make up and hair things by the dresser across the room. Her pillows were thrown on the pull out bed next to Alices bed.
No. Why?
Alice picked at the stitches on her comforter and rolled off the bed to straighten Danas things.
Its just that I figured spending two nights in the same room as me was the last thing youd want to do.
I could think of other things Id prefer, but I wont lose any sleep over it… literally. A smile tugged at the corners of her mouth, but she did her best to hide it from Alice.
I guess its worth it if Bette and Tina are forced to sleep in such confined quarters. Alice let out a full smile thinking about her friends close by in the other room. And Tina fixing her things just as Dana was doing, but careful not to unpack too much because the week was almost over.
Its definitely worth it. Dana fell onto the bed and blew some hair out of her face that came free from her pony tail. Whew! Glad thats all done.
Alice continued to mess with the things by the dresser, nervously and fidgety.
Alice, what is wrong with you?
What do you mean? She knocked over Danas bottle of perfume yet stared at Dana as if she was clueless to Danas reasoning behind her question.
Youre all over the place. What are you so nervous for?
Nothing. Its nothing. She picked up the perfume and placed it by the mirror.
I havent seen you act this bad since the first time you kissed me. For days after that you were a total spazz!
Alice sighed and resumed her post on the bed, picking at the stitching on the fabric once again.
Maybe we should talk… before we have to spend the night together.
Talk? Dana raised an eyebrow and scowled. About what?
Us.
***
I dont understand why we had to change rooms. I liked sleeping with Alice. We had fun. Tina whined as she dragged her bags into the spare room. Bette and Shane were sitting on one of the beds, feet sticking out over the end of the mattress.
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(53 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
I just wanted to be the first to comment and say that your writing is so exquisite! Now if you’ll excuse me, I’ve got to go read this chapter!
OK I’ve been waiting forever for you to post. I was so excited… and you leave me hanging with… “No talking.†Bette said sleepily. “But we can dream.†Shamem shame, shame…. Gawd I sound like Gormer Pyle.. LMAO..
Love it…every chapter I love this a little bit more. Thanks!
It takes something pretty entertaining to get me to laugh out loud. Thanks! As usual, you never disappoint!
Great buildup. Can’t wait to see how it goes.
I love this, I do, but this is starting to feel like “The long way around the barn”.
I’m just sayin…
Spiritual delights, earthly delights, just get us over this hump.
That was an unfortunate choice of words…
Fareast, I really love this story.
I’m just suffering from fictus interruptus.
This was a very good chapter. Much was resolved.
Take your time.
Ok Fareast I really loved this chapter! Tina and Bette off in dreamland – what could be better!
now my favorite rating for you…. 5 Huge Heart Shaped Cookies! and a kajillion stars added in for good measure!
Have i said how much I love this story? I do, I do. Loved the Alice/Dana resolution. But the Bette/Tina sleeping together….you are such a tease! I eagerly await their date.
I’d prefer less talking but more action, if you know what i mean ;) Great chapter, been waiting for this all day. Thanks
huh huh huh…Techgal said “hump.” Speaking of which…still time to put in some early morning nookie … for a couple of couples. (No sex like sex with the ex, and all that.)
It looks like things might just be looking up for the 2 love birds
It looks like things might just be looking up for the 2 love birds
K
That was so perfect. Loved it.
Thank you for posted again fareast I’m been waiting for this too great Story next chapter post soon.
Wow, amazing…“It’s more than ok.â€
Fareast, I love your story! I love the pacing, I love the dialogue, I love it, I love it, I love it! You’re brilliant, as always.
Hack,
I adore the way you manage to twist the drama between all the characters and balance it with the humour.
All the characters are so well fleshed out that they positively live and breath in this story.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Awaiting the next chapter as I hope that Bette and Tina dream only of one another and forward to their date.
Your loyal fan.
Oh what a beautiful dream we will have too. This was so nice I love the way you worked Dana and Alice out it just seems so right. Thanks
Wow! That went better than I thought it would…I don’t mean your story, but the rooming thing between Alice and Dana…I’m thinking it’s going to be hard to just dream in Bette and Tina’s bed, huh? ;) Thanks, Fareast, this is such a great story- it always leaves me wanting more!
still right here with you. thanks for the update.
You really put a smile on my face with this one. Just love the last comment “but we can dream” – yes we can. Post soon
I love the humor it’s so fun. And you are such a tease ;)