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Vignettes: Chapter 43
Im just going to ask this… because I need to know. I just cant keep feeling like Im out in limbo. Alice began. Do you want us to work?
This question caught Danas full attention and she moved her body so that she was facing Alice. She took a deep breath and looked Alice in the eyes.
Honestly?
What have we got to lose?
In that case… no, Alice I dont.
There was silence for a couple of minutes and Dana glanced at Alice several times to make sure she was ok. After a while, Dana caught Alice smiling.
Whats so funny about that?
I am so glad you said that!
Dana furrowed her brows. You… er… are? She looked bewildered.
Alice rolled over and laid on the bed on her belly, her head propped up by her hands. I have something to tell you… Im seeing someone.
Danas jaw dropped. Really? She got down on the bed and lay like Alice, so that they were face to face like two teenage girls.
Are you mad?
Dana shook her head. Actually no. I have something to tell you… Ive been seeing someone, too.
Youre not serious? Alice gasped. Then why all the bickering all week? Acting like you hate me?
Well… I felt like I did hate you. I was in love with you, Alice for a long time. It was hard ending it the way we did, but afterwards… after some time, I knew it wasnt meant to be.
Its like you read my mind. I vowed the last time we got together that if it ended badly again, it was over for good. I stuck to that and I knew it wasnt right. Alice confessed.
I feel about a hundred pounds lighter.
Me too.
***
I cant hear a thing! Tina hissed. Bette was pressed against her, listening with her head shoved against the door just above her.
Me either.
Guys, let me listen. Shane pushed her way towards the door so that she was below Tina with her head jammed into Tinas armpit.
Wait! I think I hear something! Tina whispered excitedly. Oh… nevermind.
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(53 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
I just wanted to be the first to comment and say that your writing is so exquisite! Now if you’ll excuse me, I’ve got to go read this chapter!
OK I’ve been waiting forever for you to post. I was so excited… and you leave me hanging with… “No talking.†Bette said sleepily. “But we can dream.†Shamem shame, shame…. Gawd I sound like Gormer Pyle.. LMAO..
Love it…every chapter I love this a little bit more. Thanks!
It takes something pretty entertaining to get me to laugh out loud. Thanks! As usual, you never disappoint!
Great buildup. Can’t wait to see how it goes.
I love this, I do, but this is starting to feel like “The long way around the barn”.
I’m just sayin…
Spiritual delights, earthly delights, just get us over this hump.
That was an unfortunate choice of words…
Fareast, I really love this story.
I’m just suffering from fictus interruptus.
This was a very good chapter. Much was resolved.
Take your time.
Ok Fareast I really loved this chapter! Tina and Bette off in dreamland – what could be better!
now my favorite rating for you…. 5 Huge Heart Shaped Cookies! and a kajillion stars added in for good measure!
Have i said how much I love this story? I do, I do. Loved the Alice/Dana resolution. But the Bette/Tina sleeping together….you are such a tease! I eagerly await their date.
I’d prefer less talking but more action, if you know what i mean ;) Great chapter, been waiting for this all day. Thanks
huh huh huh…Techgal said “hump.” Speaking of which…still time to put in some early morning nookie … for a couple of couples. (No sex like sex with the ex, and all that.)
It looks like things might just be looking up for the 2 love birds
It looks like things might just be looking up for the 2 love birds
K
That was so perfect. Loved it.
Thank you for posted again fareast I’m been waiting for this too great Story next chapter post soon.
Wow, amazing…“It’s more than ok.â€
Fareast, I love your story! I love the pacing, I love the dialogue, I love it, I love it, I love it! You’re brilliant, as always.
Hack,
I adore the way you manage to twist the drama between all the characters and balance it with the humour.
All the characters are so well fleshed out that they positively live and breath in this story.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Awaiting the next chapter as I hope that Bette and Tina dream only of one another and forward to their date.
Your loyal fan.
Oh what a beautiful dream we will have too. This was so nice I love the way you worked Dana and Alice out it just seems so right. Thanks
Wow! That went better than I thought it would…I don’t mean your story, but the rooming thing between Alice and Dana…I’m thinking it’s going to be hard to just dream in Bette and Tina’s bed, huh? ;) Thanks, Fareast, this is such a great story- it always leaves me wanting more!
still right here with you. thanks for the update.
You really put a smile on my face with this one. Just love the last comment “but we can dream” – yes we can. Post soon
I love the humor it’s so fun. And you are such a tease ;)