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Vignettes: Chapter 52
Do you love me?
Without a doubt. Bette smiled.
Then youre ready.
Tina yelled for Dakota and she came to eat, sopping wet. Bette threw her a towel. Dakota made herself comfy on a blanket in front of Bette and Tina so that she was facing them.
They started eating when Tina began to speak. Dakota, honey, Bette and I want to talk to you about something.
What?
Its important, ok?
Ok.
Its about before you were born. Tina said. When I used to live out here and knew Bette and Alice and Dana. Did you know that Bette and I used to live together?
Dakota shook her head.
We did. We loved each other very much.
Well I love Bette too. Dakota said.
I know you do and thats great. Tina said carefully. But I loved Bette in a different way.
What way?
Dakota, your mom and I were in love. Bette said after a while of silence.
In love? Dakotas eyes grew wide and she didnt finish her bite.
Every since Dakota was old enough to talk and comprehend what she was saying, Tina explained the different types of homes. Dakota knew all about ***** people and how two women could love each other just the same as a man and a woman. That was a relief during this conversation because Dakota already understood the meaning behind Tinas statement. And Tina was relieved it wouldnt elicit any questions regarding the fact that they were two women.
Yes, sweetie. I was in love with Bette. We lived together and loved each other for seven years. Thats longer than you are old. Tina said.
What happened?
We got into a fight and decided it would be best if we each did different things. I moved to New York City and your mom moved to a couple different places. Bette explained.
Why didnt you just make up?
We tried, honey. Some things just dont work out the way you want them to. And I wouldve never had you if Bette and I hadnt moved away from each other.
Dakota was silent for a minute. Tina swore she could see the wheels turning inside her little head, trying to comprehend everything that was just thrown at her.
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(40 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
nice! and the format’s all figured out too, to tell you the truth, format or not, i’ll never be deterred from reading this story :) i love it, what a nice progression and they’re alone next chapter..? wooo!
You have made my Friday with your great chapter… now off to drink some good wine. Happy weekend to all.
simply wonderful – your dialogue is always so great and this chapter was excellent. but how could you leave us hanging like that?? thanks, will be waiting.
i know dakota’s real name….it’s DAKOTA FANNING KENNARD and will soon be KENNARD-PORTER! lol
all i can say is WOW..
I cannot believe I missed this until today. I just love this story so much. Even more so now that Dakota is in the picture. Truly a loving wonderful story.
wonderful chapter… Dakota you go girl!!!! lol
Oh ya, thankyou Alice. Kids have it figured out, no backward thinking until it is instilled in them.
Great chapter Fareast. Much better layout, but i dont care how its layed out as long as you post, cos i will read it anyway.Now post soon don’t leave us hanging. thanx.
agh!!
can’t wait.
Fareast,
That was magnificent. Truly from the mouths of babes comes such honesty and genuine heartfelt emotions. Dakota took everything in her stride while Bette and Tina had agonized and struggled about how, when, where and what to tell Dakota.
You have shown how the simple truth is always the best policy. Brava!
I applaud your impressive dialogue; it just rolls of the page and keeps everything real and true.
Thank you for taking me over this vibrant and vivid voyage.
Post real soon,
Your Loyal Fan
Wonderful, as always. Glad to see Dakota figured it out, even if it’s taking B&T a little while longer.
great post soon
Hey I’d read this story if it were in another language. I’d have to get a whatever language to English dictionary of course but…you get my point. I can’t wait for the next chapter! Woo!
GREAT..dakota is soooo cute..i love her..i´m so happy for all these 3 and bring it on nc 17 thanks to Alice..lol..great chapter post real soon
you never disappoint- this was awesome!
K
Wonderful chapter. What a cute kid. Love this so much.
Truely amazing Fareast…keep going we want details in the next one. Uulllaaa a NC-17 perhaps. Post soon
Oh yeah! You go Alice! Thanks, this was really super, Fareast…I love how you write!
that was so cute, glad to see tina’s kid is smart, looks like she has raised her right.
Incredible as usual. The way you describe their emotions blows me away.
Thanks :)
Thanks for this chapter, very nicely written.
Haven’t commented in a while…still reading though…and loving every chapter. Beautiful story all round.