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Vignettes: Chapter 52
When was this? What is it?
Dakota pointed to a picture of a sonogram and another picture of Bette and Tina all aglow at the excitement of their new pregnancy. Bette closed her eyes for a moment, trying to find the right words, frustrated that she forgot to remove those pictures before Dakota found them.
Sweetie, Bette and I were going to have a baby together. In this picture a little baby boy was inside of my belly, just like you were once. And this is a picture of the baby.
Dakota scrunched up her face and looked at her mother. Where is he then?
Well… hes in heaven. God decided he should be in heaven instead of down here so he took him away before he came out of my belly.
Did you ever see him?
Tina shook her head. No, I didnt.
Were you sad?
We were very sad. Bette replied, noticing Tinas sadness. But everything happens for a reason. And then your mom had you!
Dakota smiled and cuddled close to her mom. Tina ran her fingers through her knotted hair, enjoying the warmth and smell of a five year old. All three were quiet for a while and Dakota closed the photo album. She dug her hands in the sand, burying them then digging them out over and over again.
Are you in love with my mom now? Dakota looked at Bette as she asked the question, breaking the silence. Bette looked like a deer caught in the headlights. She never knew a child could catch her so completely off guard with such an emotional question.
Um… er… well… I love your mom very much.
I love my mom, too. But do you love her in… different ways?
Bette couldnt believe how quick Dakota was. She looked into the little girls eyes and melted. It was time to tell the whole truth. Yes, I do. Your mom and I are more than friends. And we wanted you to know that.
Tina nodded when Dakota looked at her. Sweetie, I know Bettes been around a lot lately and we wanted you to know why. What do you think about all this?
Dakota looked from Tina to Bette then back to Tina. She shrugged. I like Bette. I like it when she comes over. Can I go swimming now?
Tina laughed and Bette finally let out a breath she had been holding in ever since the beginning of the conversation. You dont have any more questions?
No…. well maybe one.
What is it? Tina asked bracing herself.
When are we going home?
I thought you wanted to swim? Why do you want to go home already? Tina asked confused.
I want to swim but I want to go home soon too. Aunt Alice said I get to have a sleep over at her house.
Tina quickly looked at Bette who was obviously just as confused as she was. Are you sure?
Dakota nodded. Yes, only I was supposed to keep it a secret. I forgot. Can I go swimming now?
Tina let her go to the water. She arched an eyebrow at Bette once they were alone.
Dont look at me, I had nothing to do with this. Bette said.
Why would Alice not tell us she was taking Dakota for the night and why would she take her…. Tinas face flushed as she realized the answer to her own question. She glanced at Bette who had a smile creeping on her face.
Figure it out yet? Bette asked as she slowly slid a hand up Tinas bare thigh.
I think so. Tina replied.
Well, what are you going to do in that house all by yourself? Bette whispered in Tinas ear.
Im sure I can think of something.
Mind if I stop by?
Tina could feel her heart slamming against her chest as her body tingled with excitement. Only if you want to. Tina coyly responded.
I want to more than you know.
I think I know. Tina barely whispered.
You have no idea. But I promise Ill show you tonight.
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(40 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
nice! and the format’s all figured out too, to tell you the truth, format or not, i’ll never be deterred from reading this story :) i love it, what a nice progression and they’re alone next chapter..? wooo!
You have made my Friday with your great chapter… now off to drink some good wine. Happy weekend to all.
simply wonderful – your dialogue is always so great and this chapter was excellent. but how could you leave us hanging like that?? thanks, will be waiting.
i know dakota’s real name….it’s DAKOTA FANNING KENNARD and will soon be KENNARD-PORTER! lol
all i can say is WOW..
I cannot believe I missed this until today. I just love this story so much. Even more so now that Dakota is in the picture. Truly a loving wonderful story.
wonderful chapter… Dakota you go girl!!!! lol
Oh ya, thankyou Alice. Kids have it figured out, no backward thinking until it is instilled in them.
Great chapter Fareast. Much better layout, but i dont care how its layed out as long as you post, cos i will read it anyway.Now post soon don’t leave us hanging. thanx.
agh!!
can’t wait.
Fareast,
That was magnificent. Truly from the mouths of babes comes such honesty and genuine heartfelt emotions. Dakota took everything in her stride while Bette and Tina had agonized and struggled about how, when, where and what to tell Dakota.
You have shown how the simple truth is always the best policy. Brava!
I applaud your impressive dialogue; it just rolls of the page and keeps everything real and true.
Thank you for taking me over this vibrant and vivid voyage.
Post real soon,
Your Loyal Fan
Wonderful, as always. Glad to see Dakota figured it out, even if it’s taking B&T a little while longer.
great post soon
Hey I’d read this story if it were in another language. I’d have to get a whatever language to English dictionary of course but…you get my point. I can’t wait for the next chapter! Woo!
GREAT..dakota is soooo cute..i love her..i´m so happy for all these 3 and bring it on nc 17 thanks to Alice..lol..great chapter post real soon
you never disappoint- this was awesome!
K
Wonderful chapter. What a cute kid. Love this so much.
Truely amazing Fareast…keep going we want details in the next one. Uulllaaa a NC-17 perhaps. Post soon
Oh yeah! You go Alice! Thanks, this was really super, Fareast…I love how you write!
that was so cute, glad to see tina’s kid is smart, looks like she has raised her right.
Incredible as usual. The way you describe their emotions blows me away.
Thanks :)
Thanks for this chapter, very nicely written.
Haven’t commented in a while…still reading though…and loving every chapter. Beautiful story all round.