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Wanna Date? Chapter 11
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As Tinas hands moved over her back, sliding down to her *****, Bette found herself imagining something pounding and trance-like. Portisheads Roads maybe? It was dreamy and heavenly, but with a passionate pulse. Yep, definitely Portishead.
Tina pulling her towards the bedroom dragged her thoughts away from anything but Tina Kennard. God, she was irresistible.
They continued to kiss, carrying on from their passionate reunion of last week. Neither of them could get enough of the other, after the tantalizing taste of their true love.
I love you T, Bette couldnt help but say, as she was pushed down onto the bed by an equally aroused Tina. They stopped for a moment, looking deep into each others eyes.
I love you too babe.
That was the something that was missing from the almost perfection of their love making the other day. Words. Sometimes over rated, but always an essential for true communication. They had let their bodies do the talking before, but it wasnt sufficient tonight. Tonight there was no Helena, no Candace, no lawyers or therapists. It was just them. Bette and Tina. Just like the first time they had made love.
They smiled at each other, before Tina leaned in once more, kissing Bette slowly, first with lips closed. Gentle kisses of love all around her mouth, down her cheek to her neck. Tina had always loved Bettes neck. She nibbled up to an ear, sucking the lobe in the way she knew drove Bette wild. It worked, as usual. She could feel her pulse under her lips as she returned to her elegant smooth neck, licking her jugular and feeling the blood pounding.
***** T, I want you so much, Bette gasped, pulling her pregnant love gently down to the bed to lie beside her. Bette knelt over her, gazing into Tinas eyes. She smoothed Tinas hair back, cupping her face as she bent over her, kissing her like it was going out of fashion. Bettes experience of making love to a pregnant woman was limited. Limited to just the once, and that had been last week. It all went swimmingly then, but right now, her brain didnt seem to be functioning within normal parameters. She couldnt decide where to begin.
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You handled the scene extremely well. Tasteful, hot and very loving and pretty realistic with Tina dropping off to sleep. great story by the way, sure as hell wish IC had bothered to take on even some of this. Really good job – and again, no worries, you seem like you understand how to write about “it…”
good job!! this was wonderfull and soft I really like the way you wrote it.
very well done job..Bette was very kind with Tina..great chapter thanks
TINA&HELENA BOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!GREAT JOB WITH THIS CHAPTER….THANKS..POST SOON
Hey, you don’t have to be x rated graphic, if like your writing, it is sexy, tender, erotic and loving.
Very nice…you did a great job! I wish we had a scene like this in S2!
I don’t think there are any T & H fans..Yuck. You did a wonderful job with the love scene..no need to worry. post soon
Great job..they wre right when thye say this should be in S2. You wrote the love scene beautifully…POST SOON..you’re a good writer..i mean it!
That was so WONDERFUL SCENE WHOA! It’s really Beautiful as Always Great Story I’m Love it Thank you Please Continue.
Your writing is a gift… please keep sharing it with all us us!
Love this story so much and would have loved to see IC go down this path on the show.
Please post again soon and thanks!
FANFUCKINGTASIC!!!!!!!!!
Hey there, cogent! I’ve just finished reading all you’ve posted so far. Where do I sign up to join your fan club? ;) I love your nuanced writing style. Thank you so much! I’m eagerly awaiting your next chapter. :)
Well done. It was hot, loving, sexy, and sweet. This should have been a scene in S2…
awesome job on your first attemt on a NC-17. Very nice work cogent53. Keep it up. We do want more. post soon
If I were your editor, I would have advised you to end the chapter with that sentence. You said it all.
Maybe Dickens was a stretch…hey, it’s late, and I exaggerate, but that sentence of yours is still a good one.
And yes, you handled the intimacy well. I think it’s realistic that after all the preceeding emotional intensity, Bette wouldn’t last long. It’s a nice variation on the orgasm theme!
Thank you for not making their second time a marathon sex-fest. Not that there’s anything inherently wrong with a marathon – just it wouldn’t have been appropriate in this case. Your NC-17 was a gentle experience without the usual sexual high jinx!
And I agree – stick a fork in Helena, because she’s done. I’m okay with that!
Thanks!
“…and the feel of Tina in her arms again, her gentle snores drifting up from her adorable mouth reminded Bette of all that she had lost, but wanted to recapture and enjoy once again.”
That’s almost Dickensian – as though the long-lost hero has returned, back from her misfortunate adventures in penury to her former position of love and acceptance.
As usual, it’s the hero’s own choices that have caused her estrangement, and there’s a journey of self-discovery before she can return home.
Great!
Damn so fucking hot and awesome, love it. Can’t wait to see what’s next. Post soon, thanks!