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Wanna Date? Chapter 11
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Throwing off her jacket and kicking off her shoes swiftly, Bette pressed herself as close to Tina as she could while kissing her neck, and moving south. Tinas blouse was already half unbuttoned, which Bette didnt remember doing. Ah, who cares when that happened, as long as it was coming off.
Tina helped Bette undress her, watching Bettes eyes all the while. She knew Bette was nervous about hurting her or the baby, unwilling to put any pressure on her belly. Awkwardness was soon forgotten as they continued to disrobe until they lay, side by side facing each other, hands stroking, lips brushing, inarticulate moans escaping their lips. Was Bette humming a tune? Tina shook her head mentally. She must be imagining things. Bette often made little moaning noises when they kissed, it was something Tina found very arousing.
There was very little light in the room, but Bette paused for a moment to look at Tinas delightfully flushed cheeks. She always got like that when they made love. Hair mused and wild, colour suffusing her face and a wild and wanton look in her eyes. The sight of Tinas obvious arousal colouring her cheeks always captivated Bette. Tonight Tina looked especially turned on, and from the glint in her eye, Bette predicted Tina would be pushing her onto her back any moment and ravishing her. Oh goodie.
She wasnt to be disappointed. Tina leaned up on one elbow, kissing Bette, as her right hand caressed her stomach, making Bette shiver. The hand slid up to rub over her aching *****, squeezing her nipples gently, then more roughly as Bettes groans increased in volume. Tina slid down to the bed, moving her left arm under Bettes neck to pull her in closer for another searing kiss, as she moved her nimble fingers downwards once more. Bettes stomach twitched, as Tinas hand slid lightly onwards towards her lacy thong. Tina had insisted she kept it on. Bette had forgotten how much Tina loved her in ***** undies.
Tinas fingers toyed with the elastic for a few seconds, before sliding between skin and fabric, smoothing over the rough hairs, towards her ultimate goal.
Tina could feel the moisture on her fingers, could feel Bettes panting in her mouth as their tongues dueled madly. Bettes hips were undulating, reaching up for Tinas teasing fingertips desperately. Tina tantalized her for a few seconds, stroking the soaking flesh, before pulling back for a moment. Bettes moaning made her smile into her lovers mouth and withdraw slightly to smile seductively at her in the near darkness.
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You handled the scene extremely well. Tasteful, hot and very loving and pretty realistic with Tina dropping off to sleep. great story by the way, sure as hell wish IC had bothered to take on even some of this. Really good job – and again, no worries, you seem like you understand how to write about “it…”
good job!! this was wonderfull and soft I really like the way you wrote it.
very well done job..Bette was very kind with Tina..great chapter thanks
TINA&HELENA BOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!GREAT JOB WITH THIS CHAPTER….THANKS..POST SOON
Hey, you don’t have to be x rated graphic, if like your writing, it is sexy, tender, erotic and loving.
Very nice…you did a great job! I wish we had a scene like this in S2!
I don’t think there are any T & H fans..Yuck. You did a wonderful job with the love scene..no need to worry. post soon
Great job..they wre right when thye say this should be in S2. You wrote the love scene beautifully…POST SOON..you’re a good writer..i mean it!
That was so WONDERFUL SCENE WHOA! It’s really Beautiful as Always Great Story I’m Love it Thank you Please Continue.
Your writing is a gift… please keep sharing it with all us us!
Love this story so much and would have loved to see IC go down this path on the show.
Please post again soon and thanks!
FANFUCKINGTASIC!!!!!!!!!
Hey there, cogent! I’ve just finished reading all you’ve posted so far. Where do I sign up to join your fan club? ;) I love your nuanced writing style. Thank you so much! I’m eagerly awaiting your next chapter. :)
Well done. It was hot, loving, sexy, and sweet. This should have been a scene in S2…
awesome job on your first attemt on a NC-17. Very nice work cogent53. Keep it up. We do want more. post soon
If I were your editor, I would have advised you to end the chapter with that sentence. You said it all.
Maybe Dickens was a stretch…hey, it’s late, and I exaggerate, but that sentence of yours is still a good one.
And yes, you handled the intimacy well. I think it’s realistic that after all the preceeding emotional intensity, Bette wouldn’t last long. It’s a nice variation on the orgasm theme!
Thank you for not making their second time a marathon sex-fest. Not that there’s anything inherently wrong with a marathon – just it wouldn’t have been appropriate in this case. Your NC-17 was a gentle experience without the usual sexual high jinx!
And I agree – stick a fork in Helena, because she’s done. I’m okay with that!
Thanks!
“…and the feel of Tina in her arms again, her gentle snores drifting up from her adorable mouth reminded Bette of all that she had lost, but wanted to recapture and enjoy once again.”
That’s almost Dickensian – as though the long-lost hero has returned, back from her misfortunate adventures in penury to her former position of love and acceptance.
As usual, it’s the hero’s own choices that have caused her estrangement, and there’s a journey of self-discovery before she can return home.
Great!
Damn so fucking hot and awesome, love it. Can’t wait to see what’s next. Post soon, thanks!