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Wanted Chapter 6
Bette couldn’t maintain her silence as Helena’s skill brought her to a powerful end.
The beautiful sweet fucking noises they were making, along with Bette’s verbalized praise for Helena’s technique, drowned out the sound of a key scraping in the lock of the front door.
Helena sat up with a look of sheer happiness before she caught movement out of the corner of her eye.
"Mommy?"
"Helena darling, I see you’re entertaining," Peggy said simply. "Don’t mind me, I’ll just be making my way to the office, I have some papers I need to pick up. Anyone I know?"
She moved into the living room to greet Helena’s guest.
"Well. Bette Porter," It was a wonder she was able to articulate the words considering the size of the smile on her face.
Bette reached for her top in order to cover what little she could in Peggy’s presence.
"I’ll give you girls a minute," Peggy said. "I certainly didn’t mean to interrupt. But I’m looking forward to hearing the story of how this came to be." She waved her hand between the two of them as she turned away.
She left the room and strode toward the back of the house.
"Jesus Bette, I’m so sorry," Helena apologized. "I didn’t even know she was in Los Angeles. I talked to her two days ago and she was planning on staying in New York until at least the end of the week."
"I can honestly say I’ve never been caught in such a compromising position before," Bette said, unsure of whether she should be concerned at Peggy’s discovery or merely amused by the turn of events. They both put their clothes on quickly and sat like guilty school children awaiting the principal.
Bette reached again for her glass of wine.
"I’ll be needing more of this," she said as she tilted the glass in Helena’s direction before taking a healthy sip.
"I’m so sorry," Helena repeated as she shook her head.
"Helena. I’m not upset at you for something you had no control over. Instead I’m going to focus on what you just did for me that made me feel so very good."
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hot and freakin comedy..peggy and her answers wow..good times JKS
Thanks, it seems at every turn you know just where to take this story..I love Peggy and she def adds her own twist…at least something good before E4….tks JKS
That was excellent. Having the articulate Peggy Peabody drop by was simply sterling.Tina who?
I love Bette and Helena together, please continue.
You’re right, this story is most definitely stricking a cord. I am trying to figure out exactly what draws me to this story, other than your expert writing…and I think it is because I truly do want to like Helena and to think that she is a good person who wasn’t really out to destroy Bette…and I also think it is because with Tina seemingly being so unresponsive to Bette this season, it is nice to see that she is loved by someone, especially knowing that Tina is “entertaining” a man in her own home. (That really threw me for a loop, and struggle with how I can be a Tina fan in this story.) So far, I am rooting for Helena and Bette whole heartedly. Thank you for this…this is the story I watch for every time I log on.
cant explain it, but i just love this story!!
If all it takes are more comments to goad you further, then by all means, I’ll comment more often. Perfect. And Peggy’s appearance was brilliant. Thanks for writing a story that I never knew I wanted to see. It’s a pleasant distraction and a wonderful change of pace. :)
Great as always. Loved the interaction with Peggy. Can’t wait to read more.
Very interesting. Looking forward to reading more of this.
Just watched Bette turn down the senator and this is just what I needed. I truly want our girls together and happy but Tina is driving me crazy….if you can’t forgive…move on and out.
i love this — its like a guilty secret —
love your story
Nothing like mom’s seal of approval! This is THE story, Swim. And I’m lovin’ every second of it. This story…the way you write it…is fire! You definitely know where to find the heat. And oh my gawd, they’re headed for the kitchen! You are so bad…and THIS is so good!
Peggy you’re timing sucks, LOL. Eww your mom catching you having sex, no matter how old you are its embarrassing. Loved Peggy’s comments. She’s so funny especially funny when B & H were sitting on the couch like guilty teenagers.
Love Peggy.I can hear her say Well Bette Porter. How are they going to keep this quite? They are going to get caught and Tina will really throw a big fit. thanks
“Helena darling, I see you’re entertaining,” LOL! one of my favourite fanfic lines of all time.
You gotta give it to Peggy, always the character!REALLY, enjoying this story although I’m a TiBette fan. Give me more!!!!!!!!!!!
Gee, looks like I came late to the ball. Well, like they all said. Glad that A. Peggy barged in and B. Peggy was so cool about it. I get the impression she may not have been the best mother while Helena was growing up, but with her now grown daughter (& company) she was pretty cool.
JKS, it doesn’t get any better than this! Well, ok, maybe when Tina finds out except she won’t care so it doesn’t matter, but it would be fun if she did care… anyway, this pairing could prove so awkward if not handled as deftly and intelligently and beautifully as you handle it. Instead, it’s lyrical, almost sweet with a sharpness to it that is seductive, not harsh. Awesome.
Simply brilliant! Peggy walking in, how much fun, at first, I thought it was Winnie and the kids. I like that Peggy is pulling for this pairing. I am also curious what Tina is going to say…who is going to be the first to figure it out…will they be caught in the bathroom at the Planet? Will Bette tell Tina in a fit of rage? Come on Fins, don’t make us wait too long before the next post.
Oh too funny. Peggy has always put Bette ahead of Helena. I have always felt that because of that Helena has gone out of her way to displease both Bette and Peggy. Only on her way to hating Bette did she realize that she was falling in love with Bette. I really like both stories this one just makes me feel like we are getting revenge on IC.
OOh! This is fantastic! I mean, At first I almost thought I’d get ill at even the suggestion of a liason between Bette and Helena, but seeing as how I’m already beyond tossing my cookies with Tina getting all freaky over a guy,
Oops! Guess I should have finished before I spazzed out and hit the send button! I’m actually feeling like “Yeah! This is great!” Bette and Helena? What could be better than to see Bette soften that hard-ass edge of Helena’s and turn her into the likeable character I’d like to see her become. Something that Tina couldn’t pull off last season. And don’t get me started with this S3 Tina! There isn’t enough space on the entire site.
You possibly can’t imagine how much I am enjoying Helebette, especially the scenarios that you put them in. Peggy, Peggy, Peggy…what can I say, she’s a trip, but I think you managed to grasp her character completely.
ok my veiw on all posty of this story…lol the first tim ei saw it i was like GASPS helena and bette?!!? no no no ..then i watched the three episodes of season three and i fell in love with helanna casue she was sweet and everythign this season and now tinas a mean bitch and needs to give bette a break….so now i l voe this story lol and omg the thing with peggy..hahaha amazing i love it please post soon thanx..
Nice (although I admit somewhat of a surprise) how you wove Peggy into the mix thereby confirming Helena’s admission of feeling for Bette. Love your detail re: cooking. More? Thanks for writing.
this is great. please keep them coming. you have the characters down so well!!
While watching the episode tonite I wanted Tina to stop being such a bitch and when that didn’t work, I wanted Helena to come in and for this to be the story line I was seeing. Keep it up. I long for the next chapter.
Damn so hot and funny about Peggy. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
Tina, who? Thank you for creating this story and continuing with it, JKS. I can’t wait to see what’s next for Helena and Bette…and the ice queen that was slowly sucking the life from Bette.
Somehow the idea of Helena f**king both Tina and Bette is making me a bit ill. …Peggy is always like seltzer, fizzy and refreshing…
The lovely Peggy… I love her though personally I would hate to have her as my mother. Great chapter again.
i do love your writing, but after tonight’s episode can’t get into bette being with someone else, even if in your story tina is a bitch…sorry, love your writing, but i can’t give up on B&T
that was great, what a way to get caught, great job with this story!!!!
I’m really enjoying this story. You write it so well but I also have always thought Helena and Bette could be a very hot pairing. I couldn’t really picture them as a long term thing but you are showing us how it could happen. Thanks for giving us an appearance by Peggy P. I love me some Peggy P.
I don’t just love this story, I lurve it! More, more, more! Please?
good job
I wasn’t expecting to see Peggy enter the picture so quickly. Funny to hear Peggy admit to Helena’s crush on Bette. Actually the way this season’s going it’s good to see Bette getting it from someone who cares about her…
Wow…I felt vicariously humiliated for Bette & Helena when Peggy walked in. That was perfect timing. ha! Great stuff…keep it up! :)
This story, your writing…simply amazing. It definitely is striking a chord with your audience. All a tribute to your writing skill. The characters, their actions, their dialogue just so intriguing. It is a pure delight to read your words. It is my guilty pleasure, guilty b/c I am a huge TiBette fan. I feel that I am betraying my girls but it is so excruciatingly pleasurable that I have to read it.
I am enjoying every second of this story. It’s amazing and I want more! I love the new couple of Helena and Bette. I don’t even know who Tina is? Please continue!!!
I am atill interested…at this point Fuck Tina..sorry!!
This is superb…I think all of us B&T fans are liking BeLena just because it gives us some sort of comfort for Bette when Tina is being such a flippin unresponsive jerk. I hope for a new chapter on this one every time I log in. This season so far leaves me constantly pissed and it makes me feel good to read your story. Can’t wait to hear more!
Oh My Freaking God! That was sensual, erotic and completely comical. I think Bette and Helena could have a really good thing going for them. As Peggy pointed out they’re intelligent and unique in their own way. I truly think they could bring a lot to a relationship, should that be where they want to go. I like seeing this side of loving from Helena…not to mention the vunerability that Bette is exposing. Post soon…PLEASE
perfectly done!
Peggy is just excellent….you gotta love her and the more I read about this new Helena she is hard not too like :o)) Great stuff Swimmie….keep going please…
I cant believe I´m saying this but I love the Bette Helena s/l. Your story was recommended on TWoP, and since this season has sinked my TiBette ship, I said “Why not” so thank you for sharing this story. I´m loving it!!!! PLEASE MOREEEEEEEEEEE
Pegy has the best timing ever. I love the way she enters a room and just says I’ll give you ladies a minute. This pairing of Bette and Helena is quite enjoyable and i can’t wait to see where the relationship goes from here. And the more Peggy Peaboy the better–she’s so funny (and hot for an older lady….lol).