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Wasting Time- Chapter Five
Automatically, Dana began to stroke the top of
“Al, are you awake,” whispered Dana.
“If I say I am, does that mean we have to move,”
“No,” whispered Dana, pressing her lips to the top of the writer’s messy blonde head.
“Ok then, I’m awake. But I’m definitely not moving, and there’s nothing you can do about it.”
“Nothing?”
“Nothing.”
As much as Dana loved
“So Al,” said Dana triumphantly, “NOTHING can get you to move. Hmm, you sure about that?”
“Oh, shut it Dane. You know that’s not fair”
“You never said anything was off-limits. Now, will you admit that I won?”
“If you admit that you just wanted to make me stand in the middle of the room totally naked,” said
Dana looked up, suddenly realizing that yes, she had gotten
“Hey Al,” she began tentatively, “Can you put some clothes on? I need to talk to you about something, and I can’t do it if you’re dressed like that”
“Or not dressed, as the case may be,” cracked
“Sure Al, no problem.” Dana reached in to her dresser, pulling out a yellow shirt that said “Tennis, Anyone” and a pair of black jogging pants that she knew
“Ok, Dane. What’s going on,” asked
“Well, Al.I think you’re right about a lot of things. I think that there are things wrong with our relationship, things that we need to fix before they ruin what is, without a doubt, the most amazing thing I have ever been a part of. But I don’t think that the solution is to break up.”
“What do you mean, Dana?” asked
“Well.,” began Dana “I think that-”
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You can’t stop there. Come on write fast. Good chapter keep it up we need a more Danish around here.
You’re back! *gives big hug* We missed you! Great update but like Deb said, you can’t stop there. I’m going to apply a little pressure, post soon ok?
yay! you’re back – and you leave us like that? That is sooo wrong!! great update – loved the thing about the clothes as a breadcrumbs leading her away from what she wants…welcome back!
Torture..Post so0N..
Great that you’re back. As I said on the Danish board, you’re forgiven the cliffhanger provided you post again really soon!
Everybody is such a tease! why did you stop! good post though, but post, again, SOON
do i have to say “you’re a tease” too..? great update, i can’t wait what’s Dana’s solution.
Yay!!!! You’re back!! What a cliffhanger to leave us with you tease. Post soon…