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Cabin weekend – the talk
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Bette was busy with her friends and family all week, but spent most of her evenings alone at her West Hollywood home giving serious thought to her relationship with Tina. On Thursday night as she packed for the weekend she was anxious to know where they stood. She hadn’t seen or spoken to Tina all week and she missed her desperately.
Tina didn’t socialize much during the week as she too spent her evenings giving serious thought to her relationship with Bette. She saw Sam at work and she saw Valerie and Leigh at home occasionally but that was the extent of it. Bette had become a very important part of her life and she realized just how much after their week long separation.
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Bette arrived at Tina’s house at 8:50 on Friday morning. She parked the Lexus SUV in the driveway and sat in the car for a few minutes to steady her nerves. They hadn’t talked or texted or seen each other since Sunday and judging by the way they left things Bette wasn’t sure what kind of reception she was about to receive from her girlfriend. She’d missed Tina terribly but she hadn’t broken the silence Tina had imposed out of respect for her wishes. It wouldn’t help her cause to apply any undue pressure further stressing the already strained relationship.
Bette braced herself, got out of the car and walked the short distance up the driveway to the front door. She rang the doorbell and stood with her head down and her hands in the pockets of her cargo pants. Tina answered almost immediately and Bette slowly raised her head to find Tina’s smiling eyes searching hers. Hazel eyes meeting deep chocolate orbs reflected the same pain and uncertainty. Bette stood still waiting then noticeably relaxed when Tina made the first move bringing her into a close hug, and brushing her soft pink lips against mocha cheeks.
“Hey babe.”
Hearing Tina use the term of endearment that solely belonged to Bette gave her a little more confidence. She smiled and returned the greeting using Tina’s nickname bolstering the blonde’s confidence as well.
“Hey Tee. How are you?”
“I’m OK and you?”
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More! Loved it, thanks
BAT I think you saved your best writing for this chapter! Of course your writing is already superb!
Loved that Tina seemed to ease Bette’s insecurities and she called Bette out on inviting Sam when Bette was worried about Tina going further with Helena. Time for both to move forward trusting each other. Can’t wait for the date Tina has planned ; )
Loved it BAT!! Excellent!!
“…If they didn’t stop soon they would be making love on the grass in front of the beautiful lake.” What’s so wrong with that !
What a great chapter. You’re a talented writer. I love the way that you thoroughly develop the characters and explain their thinking and motivation.
My God! This chapter was excellent .for little
B & T almost make love on the lake,.
Very good they take your questions with this
conversation was very enlightening.
Bette and Tina beautiful movement sleep in the same
bed without clear sex, the best is yet to come.
And speaking of sleep is already 4:05 and
I’ll dormir.boa night
10 Stars.
To start your Author’s Notes with ‘Sorry to disappoint’ could not be more wrong! You do not ever ‘disappoint’!
This was a superb chapter, Thank you for not having any annoyed walking off scene.
The conversation by the Lake was great especially how you interwove some of the Show’s script but with the characters dialogue exchanged. Thanks also for the lovely explanation of ‘I know what I am and what to do with it’!
Loved it BAT and cannot wait for Weekend at the Cabin part 2!
As mscully says ’10 stars’!
Loved this chapter – like SG said, the interweaving of script with your storyline was genius. Thank you for posting.