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–“Welcome Back”– 4
Story written on November 8, 2005 by ShAiN.
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‘The sights where dazzling, Sunny blasted some cool hits from the radio and we all jamed and sanged along, Jenny even was singing. Sunny nearly kiled us by trying to race this black Mustang, she got yelled at the most by Tina who promised to kill her own are way back.
‘Carmen kept to herself what she was thinking, but stole glances at me every chance she got, don’t think that i want screw her,’
‘We made it to are destined plac,e cars, teens every where, even beer, the fireworks where about to start, this is like homecoming, this city has a reputation for those going back to schol, ‘The Last Days Of Summer’
‘Anyone was welcomed and that meaned us, we all hopped out, i stuck around with Jenny and Sunny while, Al lead the newbies to fun and beer,’
“Remind me to keep an eye on T, she does get wild when drunk,” ‘Sunny nods and i lead Jenny to the best sight she’ll ever see, Sunny runs off to go get a drink for me, and surprisingly J as well, good she’s warming up to her,’
‘She smiles up at the sky and nudges me, “I’ve never been kissed before,”
“I find that hard to believe,” ‘She leans on me and i give her a hug, “Well tonight is your night,” ‘Just as i turned around Sunny walked up behind me, “Ah Sunny, you remeber that favor i did for you,” ‘Iwalk away from Jenny a bit with Sunny in tow, she nods and scratches her shoulder.’
“Yeah, what about it,”
“You said that you’d pay me back some how, right” ‘She brushed her hair out of her face and gave me a quizzling look, “Right…”
“Fine, then I order you, to kiss Jenny tonight,” ‘The laughter flows from her mouth,she points at me nad smiles,”Good one, no really what you want me to do,”
‘I give her the ‘Shane‘ stern look, her smiles drops and her eyes squinch up, “Your seriouse,”
“Of cousre, she said she never been kissed, come on Sunny no one’s looking at you,” I nugde her over, and watch from a distance, she looks back at me, her face looking shell shocked.’
‘I quickly hide behind the closet vehicle that their in front of, Sunny scratches her neck and looks down at Jenny who i know has gotten a bit closer to Sunny, she closes her eyes, and just goes for it, Jenny was taken out of the blue and had to hold on to Sunny’s shoulders, as i expected it was a long kiss, so she does like her, haha, Jenny pulled back and hid her face in her hands, Sunny was still dazed and didn’t know what she was really feeling and walked off,’
‘I immediately came out of my hiding space and bumped up against a beat red Jenny who looked at me and laughed, ”Why’d you do that,”
“Because i know something you don’t know,” ‘ I teased and looked over to the car to see a very confused Sunny, with Al.’
“Well…thanks, it was very nice,”
“Likewise,”
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‘Tina and I hung out the rest of the night and showed her more of Barbsville, she sanged along with my ‘Chicago tape, “I love that song,” she turns it up and hugs my shoulder, begging me to sing along with her, the fireworks still blasting off into the night sky, everything seemed just about right at that very moment, i leaned over and planted a kiss on the cheek, she looked ant me in shock, and turned down the music, ”Why did you do that.”
‘Oh *****, oh *****, i knew, i knew it!’
“I…i-…i ju-”
“You know you could have kissed me on the lips,” ‘Tins pulled me closer and met my lips with hers, massaging my neck and giggling when she pulled back and saw me turn into the ‘big red’, “Your cute when you do that,”
‘Damn and all this time I thought Carmen could only do that, by the way is that her looking at me and T, pissed’
‘***** not again.’
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OMG..THNK U!..I was waiting 4 an update..It’s soo nice 2 b prt of ur lil fan club here..I wonder If Al has her chart in this strie?..GREEEATT chapter as alwayz btw..I LOVE this strie…the luv.xxxseXxxx.crushes.jelousy.the angst..drama..prtiez..It is sooo good..soo L-word gurlz..so0o0o highskool..remindz me of ‘Cruel Intentions’..I LUV it!..THNK U 4 writing such talented writing, dun stop PLEASE 4eva urz a dedicated fan..nst Post so0N!!!..
so yeah…im hooked. please update soon! this is getting interesting :)
you damn right i will update, :) you guys need this like a crackphen :P
Shane the young stud. Great update. Carmen really goes for what she wants. It was too funny how uncomfortable she made Shane. Love everyone’s mixed up lovelife. Post soon, we need our fix.
Ha funny this one. I like Shane. so cute. GO to read the last update.
Ok my eyes I can’t see lol. Good chapter, so everyone want Shane and this is driving everyone crazy, love it. Ok let see what’s next, thanks! Oh next time please no color is make my eyes blear, thank you!
great story but whats up with the high lighting of the words¿¿¿