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–“Welcome Back”– 4
Story written on November 8, 2005 by ShAiN.
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Carmen/Shane– “Sunny!!,”
Sunny- “What!?” ‘Again she was hit with pillows that ,made me feel alot better, but as well as she finally calling Jenny something else the dork,’
‘They leave anyhow telling us to hurry up, I shut the door behind me, and close my bathroom door for Alice, and turn back to Carmen who just so happen, to un zip my pants and dug around inside, “Are you still playing mind games,”
‘She purrs into my ear and bit down on my ear-lob, which caused me to shiver all over, i was pushed up against the wall, her lips trailing kisses down my to my abdomen, and further south, i couldn’t stop it, i wanted it, and at one point hated it, Tina wasn’t here, Tina wasn’t touching me, doing things to me that make my toes curl.’
‘When she got to her destined place, she blew on me soft then massaged my leg, i could hardly stand, the took me and , lavished my throbbing *****, my eyes shot open, my hand automatically going to her head, she held on to my thighs and sucked even harder, sooo good, but not her, why couldn’t i get her out of my mind,’
‘The room was getting hot by the minute as she nibbled on me and sucked, and teased me to she nearly had me in tears of exstacy, it has been awhile since i got ate out like this, and i can’t lie about not loving it.’
‘I held a hand over my mouth as it approached, and if you listening carefully you could have heard aTina’s name come out my mouth, luckily Carmen was to interested in making me come.’
‘I held on to her shoulders, with shaky limbs and legs, and reajusted myself as she wiped her mouth, “Mmm we’ll have to do that again sometime.” ‘It was going to be an akward moment around us if i don’t get my head together, what was i thinking,’
‘Sunny came back into the room, and announced that Tina was here, “Cool,” ‘That’s the person i needed to be close to right now.’
“Yeah and also Bette,” ‘Uh…what!’ ‘She moves aside so Bette and Tina could enter my room, their looks both yell out, what the ***** is Carmen doing, and who’s in the shower,’
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OMG..THNK U!..I was waiting 4 an update..It’s soo nice 2 b prt of ur lil fan club here..I wonder If Al has her chart in this strie?..GREEEATT chapter as alwayz btw..I LOVE this strie…the luv.xxxseXxxx.crushes.jelousy.the angst..drama..prtiez..It is sooo good..soo L-word gurlz..so0o0o highskool..remindz me of ‘Cruel Intentions’..I LUV it!..THNK U 4 writing such talented writing, dun stop PLEASE 4eva urz a dedicated fan..nst Post so0N!!!..
so yeah…im hooked. please update soon! this is getting interesting :)
you damn right i will update, :) you guys need this like a crackphen :P
Shane the young stud. Great update. Carmen really goes for what she wants. It was too funny how uncomfortable she made Shane. Love everyone’s mixed up lovelife. Post soon, we need our fix.
Ha funny this one. I like Shane. so cute. GO to read the last update.
Ok my eyes I can’t see lol. Good chapter, so everyone want Shane and this is driving everyone crazy, love it. Ok let see what’s next, thanks! Oh next time please no color is make my eyes blear, thank you!
great story but whats up with the high lighting of the words¿¿¿