Fan Fiction
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===”Welcome Back”===
I’m guessing she’s pissed for that summer… i cut my eyes and focus on someone else behind me, Sunny, aka Sly, one of the baddest bullies known to the Jocks. She looked at me with her honey colored brown eyes and smiled.
A note was passed to me to give to her, which i did and begged her to let me read as well, she read it quickly and groaned and gave it to me.
‘How was she, good, bad, i hope she was cause I’ll be better- signed Cheri Jaffe. A stiffen an barfing sound and ball the letter up. Sunny cringed, “The ***** lady needs to move on.”
“Here here.”
‘I here someone say my name, i turn quickly to the side, and look down to the front, there right there, it’s the chick, my mind yelled, and i knew i had to meet her, she was grinning at one of the boys who was trying to talk to her in his lame macho way, figures.
Sunny gave me a look and winked, “Don’t embarrass yourself.”
“I have it all planned out.” I took her dark orange lenses cop glasses and put them on and snuck down over to the middle row, ducking every time I thought Dooshbag was looking at me.
She wasn’t that far from me and wouldn’t you know it she moved so the guy would get the point, she moved three rows back and settled in a seat near mine. I rushed quickly back to mine, ducking again and getting my ***** touched by someone.
I made a wooshing sound as i sat down and gained her attention she took two quick glances at me and smiled.
‘Ch-Ching!’
‘Alice woke up and rubbed her nose and eyes and looked at her watch,then at me and almost yelped.’
‘She pulled me down to her face and whispered’ “Shane…please tell me your not hitting on my cousin.”
‘Hello’
Shane-”That’s the ‘***** of The West’ you where telling me about.”
Alice- “Shhh, yes that’s her, i thought she’d be her around nine at night.”
‘I see no faimly trait except for the blonde hair, then i think of Alice’s real color. Guess it’s just one of those scenes that should have been in ‘Different Strokes’.
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You’ve captured my attention already, can’t wait for the next chapter. I like that you have so many mix ups of the couples. Good Job.
Well, I’m intrigued. :D This was awesome! I don’t know if I’ve seen, or read, any TLW fics where they are all in high school. Coolness! I’ve been whishing that there were some, and now we have one right here. Yay!
My favorite characters on The L Word are Shane and Carmen, so I definately loved that it this was from Shane’s perspective. And this being in high school and all – it has the potential for lots of newish situations that probably haven’t been explored yet. So I’m looking forward to reading more of this, and find out how things develope between Shane, Carmen, Alice, Sly, Dana, Bette, and Tina. And being a Sharmen fan I hope we get to see more of Carmen. :D
On a side note: You do have some grammatical mistakes, which is okay, but if you want a beta reader to check and correct any grammar mistakes and such, just lemme know. :)
Hi,
Nice fan fic – though it did get a little confusing at times, just setting out wise. But good – keep it up.
Ah, Shane I totally loved it. I really want more. It that the story you’d taked about few month ago. It’s just a great idea. I.m gonna wait for the next chapter. patiently, but I still need my fix soon. ~wink~
Oh, I’m very interested in your new twisted story. All characters’ve caught my eyes. Great!
This is interesting start and like it. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!