Fan Fiction
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===”Welcome Back”===
Alice and Sunny come out of know where grinning like mad idiots, while Dana and i wait with are class, who is scattered across the school yard, so we begin to form a circle and talk.
“Hows theater Sunny.”
Sunny-”Sucked ***** , we have a new student from Texas and she kept ***** up my parts,”
Dana- “Did you get her name.” ‘Sunny caught my attention by grabbing Dana’s ear’
‘The girl we where talking about had a brown complexion and a dazzling smile.
She stopped by Sunny and hugged her, both Alice and I awed.
Sunny, once again rolled her eyes. “So what was that about messing up your lines.”
She playfully hit Sunny who yelped, “Nothing! God!”
She cast her eyes at me and Alice, but mostly at Dana,
“Introduce me wont you,” Sunny seethed and grumbled, “Shane, Alice, Dana this is Carmen, Carmen Shane, Alice, and Dana.”
“Hey” we all said, she was something knew to this school, she had this sashay look that demanded attention and at the same time supplied it.
“So is this your normal click.” Carmen looked at us all, as if saying could she join.
“As normal as it gets.” Carmen hugged tightly on Sunny and gave us a full description of her, and her faimly, and what type of guys she likes.
“Specially…this ***** dude right here.” She jokingly poked Sunny who kept her mouth zipped the whole time, Alice shook her head.
“Welcome to the group then, we’ll tell you about us a bit after this fiasco’s over.”
Dana cringed when the noise returned, signaling for all of us to head back into class.
“Wished they’d let us go home, i got P.E. ” Carmen pouted, and nearly made my jaw drop, she begged Sunny to save her from their P.E. instructor, “That dude is old.”
“Too old, he’s been here longer than Shane‘s di-”
“Get to class ladies!” Just in time. i smack Al over the head. “Clear they garbage of a brain of yours, a mind is a terrible thing to waste.”
‘She stuck her tongue out at me and hid behind Dana.’ Carmen smiled at us and tugged on Sunny’s arm, “We’ll nice meeting guys, I’ll see you later,” Sunny sent a sos signal with her face.
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You’ve captured my attention already, can’t wait for the next chapter. I like that you have so many mix ups of the couples. Good Job.
Well, I’m intrigued. :D This was awesome! I don’t know if I’ve seen, or read, any TLW fics where they are all in high school. Coolness! I’ve been whishing that there were some, and now we have one right here. Yay!
My favorite characters on The L Word are Shane and Carmen, so I definately loved that it this was from Shane’s perspective. And this being in high school and all – it has the potential for lots of newish situations that probably haven’t been explored yet. So I’m looking forward to reading more of this, and find out how things develope between Shane, Carmen, Alice, Sly, Dana, Bette, and Tina. And being a Sharmen fan I hope we get to see more of Carmen. :D
On a side note: You do have some grammatical mistakes, which is okay, but if you want a beta reader to check and correct any grammar mistakes and such, just lemme know. :)
Hi,
Nice fan fic – though it did get a little confusing at times, just setting out wise. But good – keep it up.
Ah, Shane I totally loved it. I really want more. It that the story you’d taked about few month ago. It’s just a great idea. I.m gonna wait for the next chapter. patiently, but I still need my fix soon. ~wink~
Oh, I’m very interested in your new twisted story. All characters’ve caught my eyes. Great!
This is interesting start and like it. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!