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What If – Chapter 11
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Denny’s waitress: Alright, ma’am here is your All American Slam as ordered. [she says placing her meal before her]
Dana: [in a somber tone] Thank you.
Denny’s waitress: Is there anything else I can get for you?
Dana: Uh, no thanks.
Denny’s waitress: Okay, well if you change your mind please let me know enjoy your meal. [she says before walking off]
Dana: Looking down at her plate staring at the three scrambled eggs with cheddar cheese, two bacon strips and two sausage links, plus hash browns and two slices of white toast under any other circumstance she would have inhaled her food in a matter of minutes. Picking up her fork she picked through her eggs placing a small scoop of them into her mouth. Once she felt the soft texture she immediately spit them out into her napkin. Her stomach was to queasy to hold any food down. Signaling for the waitress she asked to be bought a carry out container. Once she returned she placed her uneaten food in the container, paid for her food, then subconsciously drove herself to Lara’s sisters house.
Although, it had been years since she visited last gps was not needed in helping her locate her sisters home, she remembered how to get there like it was yesterday as she and Lara had spent plenty of time with her sisters family. Finally arriving she parked her car across the street and struggled with what to do next. Rolling up the windows then turning on the A/C she was thankful for the darkened tint and hoped to use it to her advantage. Looking around she was surprise to see not much in the neighborhood had changed. Lara’s sister still had the same neighbors and the little kids she remembered playing in the front yards and in the street were now grown themselves. Completely unaware of the time she unexpectedly dozed off it wasn’t until she hard a loud thud against the driver side window it startled her from her sleep. Frantically struggling to come too when she finally does she rolls down the window.
“She’s not here.” [a woman says]
Dana: [embarrassed clearing her throat] Oh.
The woman: Oh? You’ve been parked out here for the past 2 1/2 hours and all you’ve got to say is oh?
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Hi Skunk:
This is a great chapter, because things are reaching the point in which everybody is cornered by the circumstances, and in certain way by their feelings, and they have to take decision, Dana has to clarify if she really loves Lara, the chef has been a little egoistic, and Dana too, and it si same situation between Alice and Tasha, yeah this is really a very good chapter, (BTW have you sent Jenny to visit North Korea for free?) I hope Tina will resolve her problem in the studio, maybe she and Bette could travel together to China. Thanks so much for this beautiful chapter and I want to see how you deconvolute Dana’s and Alice’s situation, either way it could be wonderful; as I told before, for me Alice and Tasha is nice, but Dana and Alice is nicer and Dana and Lara is in third place, but whatever is the outcome it will be excellent to me, because your story is excellent. Thanks for the chapter and please post soon.
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Hey SkunkPU80,
I am so happy that you are back and what a amazing chapter!
Dana and Alice needs to think hard what they want with their relationships. They both pushed their woman away and are now jealous and insecue when their “spouses” get attention from other woman.
The scene with Bette and the teenagers, my god, hilarious ????
Tina quit her job, i totally understand that. What a assholes, going behind her back ????
But now she is able to move across the world with Bette.
I love your Bette, kind, funny, wise, haring, hot and so in love with her Tina????
Thank you so much for sharing this story with us !