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What if you’re stuck in that place? part 6
“Room service” And then she shut the door. I wasn’t going to give up that quickly so….. I dialed Alice
“Yea?”
“I need your help” right there I had this feeling that I was going to regret this….
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knock knock
“Room service” Alice said and started running away with Dana not long behind…. I couldn’t help but laugh at that…. Then I find myself Carmen not to open the door…. This is so embarrassing. She opened the door and when she saw me, she started laughing at me. Seeing her laugh I couldn’t help my self.
“Why are you dressed like that?”
“Well I though you ordered room service?”
“Well I did”
“Well… I brought it”
She opened the door so I could bring the stray I had behind me with the food. I got in and dropped the food on the table
“I ordered one not two chicken lasagnas”
“One is for me” I said smiling. We sat down in her table. She started laughing and got up and went to the dresser. Then I saw her room… it was a mess and it looked kind of dark.
“Put this on” she threw me a t-shirt and some sweats.
“Why? you don’t like my outfit?”
“You’re dressed like a door man Shane…. “
“No… I’m the guy who… bring.. the food…. To the rooms” she laughed
“Change NOW” I got up and went to the bathroom. When I got there…. I saw… like… pills all over… panties and bras which I don’t mind. i got dressed and when I turn over to look at my self at the door mirror… well… lets just ay I couldn’t… it was broken. Anyways I got out and sat down on the table. She was already eating
“Hungry?”
“Starving” she looks at me while eating “I’m sorry for the bathroom, I know it’s a mess”
“It was?…. I must have been distracted bye all the panties and bras hanging all over” she laughs. Then it was silence for 5 minutes.
“Do you want to talk about it?” I asked
“Talk about what?” I gave her a look.
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(33 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
niiiiiiiiiiice update cant wait 4 more
i love that you are updating your stories again!! I missed you!! :)
greaaaaaaaaat can’t wait for more. it surely was hot XD
Nice work. Need to go back and update myself on the earlier chapters now, lol. PPS.
awesome!!!!!!!! hopefully Shane can help Carm get through her shit
i like i like the update! dig deeper into carmen’s past & may shane make everything all right! happy vday btw!
i love love love love love love love love love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!finaly carmen sort of admitted her feelings. I cant wait for her to open up tp Shane. I didnt get that first flashback……
wow!
seriously cant wait for update!
OMFG!!!!!!!