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What is love? – Chapter 11
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Bette and Shane were both players, although Bette seemed to be retired from that since meeting Tina. And they were women who communicated best through ***** and were skilled and smooth love-makers. But both were clumsy with love and affection. And both, to be completely happy, would need women who were good with love and affection and who understood their lovers and were patient. These women would be rewarded for this patience with wonderful partners, but it wouldn’t be easy.
When Bette and Tina got up to dance so did Alice and Tammy. This left Shane and Dana at the table which now became quiet. Dana didn’t speak because she was shy and Shane was quiet because she that’s how she was. They watched the dancers and others in the club and, actually, that provided them with considerable entertainment.
Shane spotted a young woman she might approach later, depending on how things went. She had planned to spend this evening with her new friends and if she had to eschew romance, then so be it. Shane wanted to have friends like these who didn’t want anything from her but simple friendship. She permitted herself a small smile at the thought that these women would be ‘simple.’
As they sat there, it occurred to Shane that Dana might not be as comfortable as she was just sitting at the table and she decided to offer her help. Even though Shane was younger than Dana she felt responsible for the tennis player.
“I could find someone to dance with you if you want,” Shane volunteered. “I’ve seen some women looking at you and I could pick somebody nice.”
“No, thank you. There’s a lot to watch just sitting here.”
“Yes, there is.”
Dana was touched by Shane’s kindness and thought that maybe they could be friends if she could get over her nervousness. Shane’s reputation scared Dana.
After several dances Alice returned to the table when Tammy went to the bathroom.
“Why don’t you dance, tiger?” She said to Shane.
“I don’t dance.” was the calm reply.
Alice looked at her oddly, started to say something, thought better of it and closed her mouth. Al was a question-asker but she was quickly learning that Shane was not a question-answerer. And she wouldn’t duel with her verbally the way Bette would.
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Does Alice know Bette or what. This was a great update, and Tina was right in telling Bette how she really feels. They been patient enough so far, whats a bit more. Its been a big step for both of them. Was so starting to think Tina was gonna start giving some of those women a piece of her mind. Great update and can’t wait for more.
I love your writing style it’s so romantic, especially the way you drift into B&T’s stream of consciousness… Looking anxiosly forward to the next chappy…
Ugh Bette.Bette.Bette!!!!! Wake up lady someone should hit on Tina. See how she feels with that….Like love needs to jump up and bite her in the ass….OMG Great, fun loving story pancha…
first of all piranha???…lmao..priceless…for those who dosent know piranha means slut..lol..pancha who is teaching you those bad words?..lol..brb
LOL to your author’s comment that ‘Bette’s kinda dense’ ;-)
Wow, you remind me of my ex-bf. When he said ‘I love you’. I always answered ‘Me too’, avoiding saying ‘I love you’. It really sucks. =(
Tina,you go gal! it’s cool Tina share her feelings with Bette. Hmm..Bette need some soul-searchin of herself. She’s right in front of you,Bette. Open your heart!!
worse than say nothing is when the asnwer to i love you is “thank you”..lol..you know Tina is very patient to Bette but Bette need to do something and think about Tinas feelings too cuz Tina is going to start think if she is wasting her time with a none future relationship…Tina is one of those “family person” and she wants that with dumb Bette..lol..ok another great chapter psot soon thanks a lot :o)
I wanted to let you know that I have been reading your story from the beginning and I enjoy it a lot. Please continue with the excellence. Kiitos!
COOP – NANC – hey girls. love following ya around the board. such insight, such wit such intelligence. was i just describing myself. ahahahahaha. ;)
pancha – loving this story. keep it coming. and bette, dense, never heard of such a thing.
I love this story and the different approach to the B&T relationship. Here for a change we see Tina reeling in Bette, inch by inch. Yes, me thinks that the player is about to be played out. Tina is going to turn this Dog into a puppy, or should I say her puppy dog–he he. Slowly but surely Bett’s playing days are over. Instead of playing the field, she will be now playing in her play pin and happily so. Let Shane have a go at the field. Good stuff, please continue.
The first step is when Bette buys a larger bed. She doe have grocery in the kitchen, Then she will start seeing Tina more often. then comes the U-Haul but Bette will need to ask, Tina has made herself clear. thanks
Is it wrong to think that Alice was wrong by telling Tina that Bette was in love with her? what if Bette found out that she wasn’t IN love with Tina and that she only loved her..
It will be harder on Tina to get over Bette if any thing bad happened between them, esp after Alice getting Tina’s hopes up..
Well i don’t always comment but i always look forward to new chapters, love this story.. ;)
I agree with slipperynipple,someone should hit on Tina that might open up Bette’s eyes. Loving this story and thanks for the great chapter.
Wow, I don’t know how Tina can put up with Bette’s reticence. How much can she endure before she thinks ‘I need someone who can love me back’ (since she doesn’t know what Bette feels). I can’t wait to see where you take us. Great story!
Really enjoying your fic please post again soon!!!!
I read all your chapters in one sitting. If only TLW’s writing staff can come up with something half this good…if only… * sigh*
Will you marry me?
Good chapter. This is a little hard for them and hope time will help Bette to say “I love you” back to Tina and tell her how her feeling for her. Ok post soon please, thanks!
A freakin’ Yale graduate and can’t see she is in love. Oh..and some of those women approaching Bette should have gotten an ass whoopin’
was this the way bette felt when she first met tina even though she was with eric.bette is still in denial with her fellings for tina.
those feelings they can fuck you up.
aka carmen s2.