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What She Loved the Most
Story written on September 16, 2012 by kins40.
Her hair pinned up in a loose bun and her black rimmed glasses perched on the end of her nose, Tina sighed at the little black and white squares on the back page of the glossy magazine she held in front of her.
She was sitting up in bed, propped up against her oversized pillow, cosy and warm under the equally luxurious comforter, legs propped up in a make shift support to set down her crossword puzzle.
She scanned briefly the twenty clues across and twenty clues down and pondered for a second whether she should do the easy ones or opt for the cryptic clues.
Holding the brushed silver ball point pen between the index and middle fingers of her right hand she tapped it gently on her chin and pursed her lips in deep concentration.
She could hear the shower going in the adjoining bathroom and looking over the top of her glasses to the door hiding the person who was currently singing at the top of her voice under the warm spray of water, thought it better to choose the easy ones.
The reasoning behind her choice was twofold.
Bette had always been so much more perspicacious with the cryptic clues and Tina knew that she would not get her daily fix finished if Bette wasn’t going to be here to help her, as you see, Tina had the morning off but Bette was currently getting ready to go to work.
Which brought on the second reason for Tina’s choice of less challenging clues. The movie executive was about to indulge in a totally harmless if not slightly naughty little deviation which, she was not going to deny it, would completely devoid her of any rational thinking.
Her eyes left the squared puzzle one more time to look at the white panelled door of the shower room situated opposite her and to the right. She had just heard the water being turned off, shortly followed by the sliding open of the wet room glass door followed after that by the opposite manoeuvre.
Bette was out.
Tina’s heart instantly accelerated. She blew out her cheeks and centering back on her word teaser, deliberately brought the top of her pen to her lips to suck on its end gently, frowning for good measure to signify her focus. Any casual observer would undoubtedly testify to the fact that Tina looked the perfect picture of deep concentration.
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teegirl says
*THUD*…you should definitely self indulge more often ;-) That was…seriously…I have no words to describe that hotness you have painted on my canvas.
Dainty says
Sakes alive, that was so hot and steamy. Don’t know how I missed this the first time around. Wonderfully descriptive. Thanks.
talaula says
Oh K 😍 how do I love thee let count the ways. Loved it, thank you 😘
rocknchick57 says
Wow..incredible and sexy!!
iHeartHeart says
Hehe, well THAT was definitely steamy and “nothing” happened … yet ;) And I just love teegirl’s reaction – priceless! What can I say that hasn’t been said already? I love your writing and I especially enjoyed your voyeuristic take from Tina’s perspective (meow!). All I can say is that Tina is one lucky lady. As for your Numbers – I’ve enjoyed every last one of them and was happy to see you posted Infinity for all to enjoy as well. Once again, I raise my glass of Guinness to you Kins. I’ll look forward to seeing your next new offering. iHH xx
slntrdr says
I guess I have to echo iHH: nothing to say that hasn’t already been said! Even that! ;-) Brava!
escape4me says
That was incredibly sexy and fantasticly Mean! I think you should continue. We all want to find out what happens after a teasingly long day at work for our favorite couple. Loved it! Thank you for writing.
wkm says
Wonderful and so sexy
didi1956 says
WOW.Thank you.PPS
cvu says
One word….. AMAZING!
Merlion says
Uhm… Kins… I don’t know what to say!! … really!!! I always found your writing is mesmerizing, I just drown in the beauty of the words and then forcefully emerged when the story end. And this time, you add some X factor there and made me left my head in the clouds! ;-) … A bit sad to realized that it’s a one chapter story only.. And I wonder how steamy it would be when our favorite ladies indeed spend their night after this! Anyway, thanks again for sharing your amazing talent with us here! Maybe without you even realized, you actually made a day brighter for someone else! :-) brava Kins!! Brava!! :-)
ut says
Damn that was sexy and hot and sweet, love it. Thanks
bumsue says
Wow! You are simply an incredible artist with your words on the page. That was so moving and so hot! What a wonderful picture you left in our minds. Thank you!
mette hartmann says
Jesus woman!! The intrinsic power of words. I´m in awe of your ability to leave us…..almost at a loss for words and completely wrapped around your – well keyboard, waiting for the next update.
favcouple says
That was absolutely wonderful and oh so sexy. Thank you
favcouple says
That was absolutely wonderful and oh so sexy. Thank you
Tibetter24 says
Wow wow wow!!! I don’t know who’s the bigger tease, you or Bette. Lol made my night kins I love your work
Liah x Doll says
Omg ! I absolutely loved this. Tina has some restraint I’ll say that much .. I don’t know if I would have let Bette leave the
Liah x Doll says
Room oops sorry posted way too soon lol. Think that was my nerves from reading this post ! Its a little hot in here
tibettenation1 says
a lot of words to describe a scene, very nice
RobbieRob says
mercy
I’ve gotta go for a very long run now. WOW!
SassyGran says
Right … Well…. Really…OKay….!!!!! Better get Dinner ……!!!