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What Time Reveals Part 4
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Then…
“Oh! So it’s Ok for you to fuck this dragon, this vampire?!” Tina exclaimed.
“Did someone say they were fucking Uta?” a voice suddenly said from around the corner. A body soon followed. It was Alice and Lara. They both looked like that they had gone 2 rounds with a heavy weight boxer and barely made it out of the ring
Now…
“Who, the bloody hell is Uta? Oh! That’s right you’re vampire friend that you had me look up.” Helena remembered, and thought not for the first time that things just seem to continue to get out of control. Bette got a confused look on her face.
“When did you date a vampire?”
“When you went away at that silent retreat thingy. I was always meaning to ask you how you handled not talking for days at end.”
“oh. I..what?”
“Why is everybody standing in the hallway?” Lara asked.
“Bette kidnapped Angel.” Henry forcefully stated, trying to get the topic back on track.
Alice looked at Henry as if he had developed another head.
“Why would Bette kidnap her own kid?” Alice inquired with a raised eyebrow and crossing her arms over her breasts, trying to figure out the problem. Lara followed in Alice’s stance, looking just as curious to the answer.
“Angelica is not her kid.” Henry snapped, getting sick of all of the meddling friends Tina had and was ready to put his foot down and make his woman do what he wants.
Lara and Alice both looked shocked at that statement. Meanwhile Tina was again arguing with her two inner selves. ‘Even Lara and Alice know that Bette is right see!’ ‘No Henry is right. Angel is mine!’ Alice, who has no problem speaking her mind, spoke…
“That’s fucking funny. Lara did you hear that? Hank here, said that Angel, my Earth daughter, wasn’t Bette’s.” Alice looked at Lara with a crazed look on her face. A crazed look that Lara has had the misfortune to be on the other side of when she had been with Dana this last time. Lara began to worry, she nodded her head to indicate she had heard Henry.
“Let’s see….” Alice looked Henry dead in the eyes “Were you part of the planning of the insemination? No. Did you help pick out the sperm donor? No. Did you donate the sperm? Not for Angelica! Did you rub Tee’s feet when she was tired? No. Were you the one that lied to her and tell her she didn’t look fat and bloated! No.”
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Now I want to kick both Hellry AND Tina’s a$$… I love Alice, haha. She’s nice AND funny.
Tina is so upset,she can’t think for herself. The baby is not going to be quite,just take her to Bette,Helena is one happy camper right now. When you get angry you say a lot of thing that would never come out of your mouth,your mind doesnt hear the good that someone is doing Henry is a big part of Tinas trouble. thanks
Tina needs to sit down and examine HER thoughts and feelings, not Henry’s… sorry, little misdirected anti-former-lebians-turned-hetero rage… love the chapter, like where you’re taking the story, look forward to more.
Your good P your not too harsh on Tina so dont even worry about it .I am glad you bring Alice into it .I like her .Dont worry about ppls our my comments just wright whats on your heart
great chapter.. please post again soon..
wonderful chappie. don’t you just want to shake tina by the shoulders when she’s left alone with her thoughts?
Hopefully Tina’s thoughts will lead her to Bette. Fun story
I just caught up with your story, I’m glad that I didn’t miss it. Spot on Alice, well spoken! What did the Henryass think he is? Man, want to bitch slap him. I dislike this Tina, she’s unreasonable…this women has been with her for 8 years, the one she has been in loved with 8 years. Can’t she at least be less mean and think it over. Hatred isn’t getting you anywhere Tina. Love it, please continue.
Another good chapter Hun =)Don’t worry I know U will read mine when U can. =)
It’s incredible isn’t it how much our anger can take over our thoughts, and make us totally vulnerable to those around us. When we are angry we just react, and that’s what Tina is doing. She isn’t following her heart, she is angry so she is allowing herself to be pulled along by other’s (Henry) thoughts, grabing onto them and making them her own…when in reality, she doesn’t feel that way at all. I read the last three chapters all at once, and was so into the story, I felt anxious when I realized there wasn’t another chapter!! Really well done, thanks!!
great chapter…post soon, i’m seeing a love connection between b&h….hot, hot, hot…
Wow Pands, that’s the best you’ve done so far! Loved it, loved it, loved it and can’t wait for more!!!
Tina’s anger makes her so irrational. Alice is so logical and thoughtful. What a great friend. Henry is such a jerk and a wimp. What did Tina ever see in him besides the obvious. Bette didn’t fight hard enough for her woman even on the show. Sometimes she is aggressive when not necessary and the same with being passive.
It is very touching. Tina seems a little confused. You potrayed it extremely well. She seems to be flowing between 2 extreme emotions. As for Bette, the last part when she curled into a ball felt really sad. How would Helena comfort Bette? I’ll really want to read teh continuation of this story. Thank you for writing.
Still not liking Tina…what mother rips her sleeping daughter up just to prove a point. Was hoping Alice would kick Henry in the ass. Did crack up at the poking she was doing. Loved the sweetness of Helena with Bette. Awesome chappy, can’t wait for the next.
yeah i fell but no cuts or bruises jk :) really starting not to like tina though. Post soon though because i cant wait to read it
yup i sure am loving this..and the pace you’re going at too! thanks pands