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    What will she do next? 10

    Story written on September 18, 2005 by crushonlu.
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    Chapter 10 – Washed out to sea

    Chapter 10 – Washed out to sea

    The rented beach house sat practically on top of the ocean, so close was it to the sea. Bette had been there for two days and in that short time her spirit had been rejuvenated.
    Bette loved to swim, especially in the sea, and relished in the fact that she could wake up and go for an early morning swim naked, as there was no one else around for at least a mile.

    Tina meanwhile, for all her wanting to see other people, had been spending the last few weeks alone in quiet contemplation, only venturing out when dragged by Alice. She had thought about Bette constantly, especially after seeing how easily she would pick up little bar things as a distraction.
    Tina wondered how she could swallow her pride and get back the love that she had so easily discarded.
    ‘Does she even want to be with me anymore? Is it too late?’ all these ramblings went through her head as she lay on her back looking at the reflection of the moonlight on the pool on the ceiling of their bedroom.
    She had put Angelica down for the evening hours ago and was having difficulties getting to sleep again for the umpteenth time that month.
    Tina turned her body to look at Bette’s side of the bed and began touching Bette’s pillow when her cell phone began vibrating violently on the bedside table.

    “God who can that be at two in the morning?” she said softly and a little panicked that it might be bad news.

    Looking at the caller id she took a nervous breath.

    “Are you okay?” Tina asked apprehensively.

    “I’m fine.” The voice said calmly, and then spoke again softly, “Do you remember that look you gave me?”

    “In the park? Yeah I do,” Tina had interrupted as she relaxed back into the bed, “it was very warm that day and you had your camera with you.”

    “You lay on your back, at first I thought you were sleeping, so I quietly grabbed my camera,” the voice continued softly.

    “And I opened my eyes and turned to look at you just as you clicked,”

    “But not before you arched your back and languidly stretched like a spoilt cat,” the sultry voice interrupted again.

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    2. can you please send that chapter to IC maybe that put some good sense in her mind..lol..im so happy now comunication is the hey to any good relationship and now they seems start to get the right path again.. a long road but when to people are made to each other nothing can break them only their own actions could and if they are open to try..then they will be fine..amazing chapter really was..please post as soon as you can thanks :o)

    4. Your story is one of the few stories that I actually read twice after every post. Your writing really captivates me. If I compare this chapter to the previous post there is almost this difference in tempo. The previous post was almost like quick flashes whereas this post really gave me an in depth look at the relationship between Bette and Tina. This form of writing is really refreshing and manages to continually grab my attention. I look forward to your posts and finding out what you have in store for this couple. *great job* bitter sweet love without the childish games….

    6. Thanks so much for letting them talk,sometimes when you are hurt and angry,all you can think of is bad things. Stop take a deep breath and think of just one good thing,it really makes a different, thanks

    8. So happy to see them talk about their past and not get upset about it. They need to do more of this and continually show the love they feel for each other and not be too shy to talk about any and everything that concerns them. Thank you. Post soon please. Can hardly wait for breakfast. Love this.

    16. You wrote this with such care and compassion. As if we were all there, watching it happen. Nicely done. They needed to feel each other again. I’m off the read your next post. :p

    17. K, that was a great chapter. I am so glad they each had fun strolling down memory lane. boy I just can’t understand how so many great authors on this site seem to get the importance of communication between these two, but IC and co. seems EFFING CLUELESS! ARRGH!! why is that?

      K, small tamtrum over. please post your story again soon. I can’t wait to see how these 2 reconnect in a ‘good’ way……..

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