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    What will she do next? 10

    Story written on September 18, 2005 by crushonlu.
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    Chapter 10 – Washed out to sea

    “I I love that picture I keep a copy with meyou managed to capture exactly what I was feeling for you at the timeand still do,” Tina had said the last part in a near whisper.

    Bette lay silent on her back listening to the waves on the ocean.

    “Bette” Tina spoke softly into the telephone. “Bette did you hear me? I mean itI do love you…so much that it hurts me sometimes.”

    Bette sighed. She wanted to say so much, ask so much, but at the moment the rhythmic sounds of the waves and Tina’s dulcet tones in her ear was making it impossible to focus.
    Instead memories washed over her like the waves outside of her open windows.

    Tina felt Bette’s angst but wanted to keep her in the moment of their earlier happy reveries.

    “The first time you gave me your look in public I thought that I would pass out. Can you remember when that was?” Tina asked seductively.

    “Umm, I dunnothere have been so manyI love looking at you from a distanceyou move soso”
    Bette sighed, she was rendered speechless by her recollection of Tina’s body and the way she sometimes appeared to Bette to glide effortlessly towards her.

    “Okay,” Tina teased gently, “I’ll give you a clue it was at that gallery off Sunset.”

    Bette sighed again but then quickly regained her composure, “you were wearing blackwas it Stella? I’m not surebut the dress was designed for you and only you, and you wore your hair up, revealing your gorgeous neckline and leading to umm other things,” Bette stuttered.

    Tina giggled softly, “yesbut do you remember your look?”

    “I can only remember the image that was before meI cannot remember what might have been upon my face,” Bette answered softly and with humour.

    “Well do you remember what you were thinking at the very instant that you laid eyes on me?”
    Tina’s voice had become husky, the way it did whenever she was highly aroused.

    Bette exhaled slowly as she felt the subtle shift. “I remember wanting to ravish you”

    “Ravish me?” Tina laughed, a throaty sexual laugh that sent a charge through Bette that ended in her stomach as she felt butterflies flutter excitedly.

    “Where are you fromye olde England?” Tina teased.

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    2. can you please send that chapter to IC maybe that put some good sense in her mind..lol..im so happy now comunication is the hey to any good relationship and now they seems start to get the right path again.. a long road but when to people are made to each other nothing can break them only their own actions could and if they are open to try..then they will be fine..amazing chapter really was..please post as soon as you can thanks :o)

    4. Your story is one of the few stories that I actually read twice after every post. Your writing really captivates me. If I compare this chapter to the previous post there is almost this difference in tempo. The previous post was almost like quick flashes whereas this post really gave me an in depth look at the relationship between Bette and Tina. This form of writing is really refreshing and manages to continually grab my attention. I look forward to your posts and finding out what you have in store for this couple. *great job* bitter sweet love without the childish games….

    6. Thanks so much for letting them talk,sometimes when you are hurt and angry,all you can think of is bad things. Stop take a deep breath and think of just one good thing,it really makes a different, thanks

    8. So happy to see them talk about their past and not get upset about it. They need to do more of this and continually show the love they feel for each other and not be too shy to talk about any and everything that concerns them. Thank you. Post soon please. Can hardly wait for breakfast. Love this.

    16. You wrote this with such care and compassion. As if we were all there, watching it happen. Nicely done. They needed to feel each other again. I’m off the read your next post. :p

    17. K, that was a great chapter. I am so glad they each had fun strolling down memory lane. boy I just can’t understand how so many great authors on this site seem to get the importance of communication between these two, but IC and co. seems EFFING CLUELESS! ARRGH!! why is that?

      K, small tamtrum over. please post your story again soon. I can’t wait to see how these 2 reconnect in a ‘good’ way……..

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