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Chapter 12 – Push me, pull me
Tina breast-fed her angel before changing her and putting her down for the night. They had spent a wonderful morning with Bette and aunty Kit, and in the afternoon they had taken a stroll in the park. In the quiet time that followed, Tina was able to go over everything that had transpired between them.
‘Something was different,’ Tina thought and continued to wrack her brain to work out what it was. It also didn’t go amiss by her that just as Tina attempted to shut down, Bette checked her on it, forcing her to voice her gripes straight away.
‘Now if only we can deal with the ***** issue, we’ll get along swimmingly.’
Getting herself ready for bed, Tina checked that her cell phone was charged and on and that the house phone was within reach. She did not want to miss Bette’s call. Tina laid her body in the middle of their large comfortable just as her cell rang. She flipped the phone open and heard a voice speaking,
“You can call me, you know”
“I knowits just more romantic this waykinda like you’re chasing me,” Tina responded seductively.
“Chasing you?” Bette asked incredulously
“Alrightnot chasingmaybeermcourting?”
“Courting?” Bette asked with the same tone, “What century are you from?”
They both laughed before Tina spoke again. “Thank you for today, II really enjoyed itwe really enjoyed it.”
“You were both very welcome. It was also very nice to get through an entire day without getting upset about anything,” Bette added.
“Yes, yes it was,” Tina sounded thoughtful, as if something was troubling her.
“T? what’s wrong?” Bette asked concerned.
“Oh nothingumit just occurred to me that Kit said you were awayaway where?”
“Oh! I thought you knew, I leased that house that we liked so much on that secluded beach, remember?”
“Oh Bette, did you come in from there this morning? It’s such a long twisty drive”
“It’s not long baby, only thirty five minutes and I’m back there now.”
“You are?” Tina was surprised, “no wonder you’ve been so relaxed, I know how much you love the oceanI bet you’ve been swimming nude again haven’t you?”
Bette giggled her response.
“So” Bette sighed
“So” Tina responded softly.
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i read here alot of comments of people who say they don’t understand tina. it’s not that i find it a good thing she’s in a limbo but it can happen. it not beautiful but it is out there. and sometimes you can jeopardize the things you love for what ? at the end you realize you were so overwhelmed that you didn’t realize the consequences of what you have done or would do. just to say that i find it very interesting you brought up this issue. thanks and hope to read you soon.
Chrush – Thanks so much for this story. I am extremely impressed by comments that have been generated. So many different points of view; each with their own purpose. I enjoy anything that envokes such a community of thought. Please post soon. The agnst is enjoyable. :p
I hadn’t expected “the” conversation to be the next update you surprised me with that. But I don’t mind it at all. All true it was perfect I wished T could see the hurt in Bette’s eyes. The moment she silently cried as the ocean reflected there struggle of love. I still have this feeling T is trying to avoid the subject ok they have talked but she didn’t really told what happened…. she didn’t say she couldn’t not with Henry not with anyone other then Bette. The family day on the beach would so be a good time to let her out those feelings under the moonlight. It really was a great update I can’t wait for more.
It does seem so one sided. That Tina can but Bette can’t. Tina will find out that Bette doesn’t like to share ,Not with a man. Tina will lose Bette if she is not careful. thanks
Bette needs to kick Lady T to the curb….Maybe Henry will come along and pick her up…..
damn, why iz tina so damn hurtful. this shit iz heartbreakin they know damn well they still need each other, she needs to forgive and let the love wash over her. please post soon.
Good chapter. This is sad and hope they talking on the phone is will help them, and they will work thing out. Post soon, thanks!
I don’t know why Bette puts up with Tina.And Tina needs to chose either she choses Bette or a man.Post soon
what the hell is happening to Tina?? noone can love half way..or you love or you dont..but play like this is cruel and not even Bette with all her past mistakes deserve..at least Bette is trying..ok post soon
Poor Bette, she is like a YO YO…Great Job CRUSH….THANKS…
WTF Why is it always about sex. When are we going to allow society to view us like any other stable family unit? When we stop F’ing around and talk. Get on or get off Tina.
God, I just don’t know how to deal with the man and Tina thing, it hurts me so deeply, so personally, I just hope it’s not over the top in S3. I will always however, be committed and grateful to all things L. Bette and Tina (Jennifer and Laurel) are the most beautiful couple and individual women I have ever seen. Hope Springs Eternal…
It’s painful sometimes–seeing how much Bette loves Tina, while Tina can seem so indifferent at times. I think it was easier to take when she (Tina) hated her! I’m hoping Tina will be able to either commit to Bette only or let her go. Can’t wait to see what you post next! Thanks
O boy Crush I know you feel me when I say bitter sweet love. I like, no I love the fact that you incorporate some of our views into your story, really gives the impression that you hear us but also share them when it comes to this couple, especially looking at all aspects of s3.
Personally, and this is my opinion some times it’s so good it can be bad, I’ve been there and Bette and Tina seem to fit that same concept perfectly. Tina wants Bette to be that dominant, all encompassing force that she was in the beginning of their relationship but she seems to have forgotten where that got themin the end.
Bette has changed possibly to help heal some of the wounds that she has caused but Tina seems incapable of realising this. They both need to find that balance in their relationship but also in themselves. I love, love, love your story. Underlying emotions are quite difficult to capture but you do it so well in the compelling exchange between these two.
If I were a publisher I would be foremost impressed with you ability to achieve this, but instead I am just a humble fan…*CHEERS*