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“Well” Bette sighed.
“Yeah,” Tina replied.
“I thought that the phone thing would work,” Bette began again.
“No, it is workingit was, is a great idea. At least we have aired things that we didn’t know about each other, yes?”
“You have voiced your concerns, Tina.” Bette clarified.
“WellI can probably guess what bothers you about usis there anything else other that what we’ve just talked about?” Tina sounded a bit blas.
Bette exhaled sharply, “there is one thing that I have noticed.”
“What’s that?” Tina asked.
“You know how I feel about youeven though you don’t believe me since the affair, nothing has changed for me in all of these years. You still excite as much as you did that very first day that I saw you. Your touch can still excite me as much as our very first night together”
“Oh Bette” Tina whispered.
“and it doesn’t matter where we are, when I see you I am still fascinated by your beautyand just one look from you causes my stomach to flip. It has always been you, always. I know deep down that you know this, but what concerns me is that it seems that lately you use this knowledge to manipulate me”
Tina was thoughtful and silent. She hadn’t figured Bette would have worked it out that quickly, but then again she shouldn’t have played Bette for a fool.
“I’m sorry.” There was nothing else to say.
Bette spoke again, “Maybe we should just have another day together as a family unit, without any distractionswhat do you think? How about a day down here before I return to kit’sI could pick you and Angie up?”
“I think that’s a great idea, what day?” Tina asked.
“Well I have three more days left so how about Friday?
“Will we still have our telephone sessions in between?”
“Do you want to?” Bette asked thoughtfully.
“I I think it might help me get to the root of my indecision.” Tina answered honestly.
“Okay. So why don’t you call me tomorrow night?” Bette sounded tired.
“Are you alright baby?” Bette smiled at the spontaneous endearment.
Like when they slept together, it was always plainly apparent as to how Tina felt about Bette, as Tina’s body was always as close as she could possibly get to Bette in their bed.
It was an involuntary and subconscious actionher body knew that it loved Bette, now if only Bette could convince Tina’s heart.
“I’m fine, I’m just a little worn out now.”
“Okaysleep well and I’ll call you tomorrow night?”
“Yeah.”
“Okay.” They both hesitated for a moment, until Tina relented.
“I love you Bette.”
“I love you too, T.”
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i read here alot of comments of people who say they don’t understand tina. it’s not that i find it a good thing she’s in a limbo but it can happen. it not beautiful but it is out there. and sometimes you can jeopardize the things you love for what ? at the end you realize you were so overwhelmed that you didn’t realize the consequences of what you have done or would do. just to say that i find it very interesting you brought up this issue. thanks and hope to read you soon.
Chrush – Thanks so much for this story. I am extremely impressed by comments that have been generated. So many different points of view; each with their own purpose. I enjoy anything that envokes such a community of thought. Please post soon. The agnst is enjoyable. :p
I hadn’t expected “the” conversation to be the next update you surprised me with that. But I don’t mind it at all. All true it was perfect I wished T could see the hurt in Bette’s eyes. The moment she silently cried as the ocean reflected there struggle of love. I still have this feeling T is trying to avoid the subject ok they have talked but she didn’t really told what happened…. she didn’t say she couldn’t not with Henry not with anyone other then Bette. The family day on the beach would so be a good time to let her out those feelings under the moonlight. It really was a great update I can’t wait for more.
It does seem so one sided. That Tina can but Bette can’t. Tina will find out that Bette doesn’t like to share ,Not with a man. Tina will lose Bette if she is not careful. thanks
Bette needs to kick Lady T to the curb….Maybe Henry will come along and pick her up…..
damn, why iz tina so damn hurtful. this shit iz heartbreakin they know damn well they still need each other, she needs to forgive and let the love wash over her. please post soon.
Good chapter. This is sad and hope they talking on the phone is will help them, and they will work thing out. Post soon, thanks!
I don’t know why Bette puts up with Tina.And Tina needs to chose either she choses Bette or a man.Post soon
what the hell is happening to Tina?? noone can love half way..or you love or you dont..but play like this is cruel and not even Bette with all her past mistakes deserve..at least Bette is trying..ok post soon
Poor Bette, she is like a YO YO…Great Job CRUSH….THANKS…
WTF Why is it always about sex. When are we going to allow society to view us like any other stable family unit? When we stop F’ing around and talk. Get on or get off Tina.
God, I just don’t know how to deal with the man and Tina thing, it hurts me so deeply, so personally, I just hope it’s not over the top in S3. I will always however, be committed and grateful to all things L. Bette and Tina (Jennifer and Laurel) are the most beautiful couple and individual women I have ever seen. Hope Springs Eternal…
It’s painful sometimes–seeing how much Bette loves Tina, while Tina can seem so indifferent at times. I think it was easier to take when she (Tina) hated her! I’m hoping Tina will be able to either commit to Bette only or let her go. Can’t wait to see what you post next! Thanks
O boy Crush I know you feel me when I say bitter sweet love. I like, no I love the fact that you incorporate some of our views into your story, really gives the impression that you hear us but also share them when it comes to this couple, especially looking at all aspects of s3.
Personally, and this is my opinion some times it’s so good it can be bad, I’ve been there and Bette and Tina seem to fit that same concept perfectly. Tina wants Bette to be that dominant, all encompassing force that she was in the beginning of their relationship but she seems to have forgotten where that got themin the end.
Bette has changed possibly to help heal some of the wounds that she has caused but Tina seems incapable of realising this. They both need to find that balance in their relationship but also in themselves. I love, love, love your story. Underlying emotions are quite difficult to capture but you do it so well in the compelling exchange between these two.
If I were a publisher I would be foremost impressed with you ability to achieve this, but instead I am just a humble fan…*CHEERS*