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What will she do next? 8
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Tina sighed, and watched as the woman took Bette’s hand and led her to the dance floor.
They moved well together, and Tina wondered if that was how she and Bette used to look all those years ago when they slow danced.
Kit stood by the bar and silently watched Tina’s reactions quietly. ‘The woman is so in love with Betteif only she could figure that out.’ She had thought. ‘*****, someone has to do something or else these two are gonna self destruct!’ Kit walked purposefully over to where Tina sat and whispered in her ear, “Go ask her to dance, go claim your woman,” and gave her a little push in that direction.
Tina swallowed hard, licked her lips and made her way over to the couple, feeling as though she were about to interrupt something that she shouldn’t.
She gently touched Bette on her arm and spoke, “May I cut in?”
Tina watched as Bette’s face went from pleasure, to surprise to detachedness in milliseconds, and Tina thought that Bette was going to say no, so she prepared herself for the let down.
“Excuse me for a while Rebecca,” she said to the tall brunette as Bette turned and took her estranged partner into her arms.
They didn’t speak as the music changed to another slow track. Tina unconsciously felt her body melt into Bette’s familiar embrace and she felt Bette do the same. Within seconds Tina could feel herself responding to all of the places that were coming into contact with Bette’s skin and her arousal was instantaneous.
Tina inhaled slowly and deeply making herself dizzy in the process. Bette’s hand moved to find the small of Tina’s back and as she was wearing a short top, Bette’s hand came into contact with Tina’s skin, which was now on fire.
Tina gasped and hoped that Bette did not hear.
They moved in closer, held each other tighter and Bette pushed her thigh in between Tina’s legs. Tina drew back a little to look into Bette’s eyes and took another sharp intake of air when she saw what was written all over Bette’s face.
Bette wanted her, loved her, adored her completely. Tina could read Bette like an open book.
But for some inexplicable reason Tina had been unable to see it before, and now hoped that it wasn’t too late to try to reclaim the love that she had carelessly discarded.
As the song ended, Tina leaned in to give Bette a gentle but meaningful kiss on the lips and looked on sadly as Bette turned and walked back to her eagerly awaiting brunette.
‘How easily we complicate the simple things,’ Kit thought as she watched them on the floor, ‘they are so supposed to be together, if only they could see it for themselves’ she concluded sadly before turning to greet another of her well wishers.
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im so sad with this.. and you know why?..cuz they are losing hope and sometimes only love is not enough but i still have faith in your story i hope they find their way back together..post soon thanks
Hey it’s something. Nothing like loss to make you appreciate. Now reclaim your woman. I like that:)
I still say u go Bette, I hope everythings gonna be ok with Kit. And Tina has got some HARD work to do if she wants to get back her woman!!!!! LET THE WORK BEGIN!!!! OR MAYBE MORE DRAMA FIRST?????? LOL!!!! Any way I’m along 4 the ride…PLEASE DON’T TAKE SOOOO LONG B4 POSTING!!!!!!
I am seriously torn my friend should they or should they not be together. Of course Bette loves Tina and Tina loves Bette but come one they are kind of bad for each other..*wow I cant believe I wrote that* anywho’s great update Tina needs to step up to the plate….
This defines angst. Great job!
Wha Wha WHAAAT..lol Where did Bette go?? Who’s this Rebecca..I don’t like her..lol..so much drama my heart is in my throat! Keep it going sister, I am excited to see where you take us!
THIS STORY IS KILLING ME..Please let them work it out..WHO’S REBECCA????? KIT WILL MAKE IT THROUGH THIS???RIGHT????PLEASE PLEASE POST SOON…THANKS
Rebecca? Where did she come from so soon. Damn did Tina mess up.she is in a really big mess. The love is there,but no trust. Kit will be okay. thanks for posting.
I hope they can find their way back to one another, especially with Kit’s illness. Tina has got to prove her love. This chapter was really sad. Great update…please post soon!
Hope Bette will open her eyes…really !
Nice chapter tough
Rebecca needs to disappear… Tina needs to apologize and fix what she’s caused.. and Bette can’t give up what’s in her heart. Sigh this is sad, I hope they can get back together
way to go Bette! I say let Tina suffer longer. maybe if she sees with other women, she will know how dumb she was to suggest an open relationship in the first place. what a dumbass! anywho, great post and please don’t leave us hanging too long.
Yes crushonlu I think you have painted Bette correctly. I like the fact that even in Bette’s stance of not wanting contact she could not deny Tina’s request to cut in. Great writing. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Don’t like the unhappiness. When Tina told Bette she wanted to see other people I think she was testing herself as well as Bette, knowing in her heart what she wanted, and fearing what might not be in Bette’s heart. Why do people do these stupid things? JUST BE HONEST WITH YOURSELF AND OTHERS! Not liking where this story is right now – to close to how people act in non-fiction stories (a.k.a. reality). And poor Kit having to witness their stupidity is probably just making her sicker every second – literally.
SWT Angst.sad. very trajic how luv brakes..B&T have been together way 2 long 4 them 2 Fuk this up..they best fix this fukery…Post so0n..
Hold the Kleenex ladies, is it possible that Bette went to excuse herself from Rebecca so she could return to Tina? At this point, they haven’t really talked in 2 weeks…we are ready for the next chapter, bring it on.
Tina bought this nonsense on herself; now she better be prepared to get her woman back by BAMN!!
Damn this is sad and hurt. Bette and Tina need to talk and work thing out. Hope Kit will be ok. Post soon please, thanks!
I love this story and I actually think that you may be very close to what is gonna happen in S3. I think a lot of people are partly able to understand Tina in connecting with a man, since shé obviously falls in love with a person not the gender. Not that I think she ever stopped loving Bette – they just forgot to communicate. However it´s fairly evident that they still have an attraction between them so hopefully we´ll see them reconnect. For their own sake since they complete each other and for Angelica´s. Please post soon.
Bette is giving Tina a taste of her own medicine and Tina is getting the message loud and clear. These two need to do some communicating. I like how you are using Kit to let us know that there is love between these two if only they would realize it.
Whoa! It’s really SAD Story OMG! Please continue Post soon Thanks!