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    What will she do next-Revised chapter 22

    Story written on October 20, 2005 by crushonlu.
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    Chapter 22 – Getting Better

    After she had feasted on Bette as though Bette were her last ever meal, Tina had passed out from exhaustion with her head on Bette’s thigh. Bette awoke in the early hours of the next morning from some dream where she had been laughing, and her own laughter had woken her up.
    Bette felt the loss of her leg and wondered what the cause was until she looked down and found Tina still asleep between her legs. Bette began to smile, but soon frowned when she felt the prickling of pins and needles in that very same leg. She had to move Tina, and quickly or else she would end up jumping up and throwing them both out of the bed.

    Bette was about to place her hands under Tina’s armpits and pull her up when suddenly Tina turned and her mouth landed squarely on Bette’s *****, where Tina, now awake, immediately began to suck. Needless to say Bette soon forgot about the pins and needless, and everything else for that matter.

    **

    Bette felt the soreness of a little too much activity down there when she was finally able to extricate herself from Tina’s limbs a couple of hours later. Quietly she walked to the kitchen to nibble at the leftovers of their dinner and to call Kit at the hospital. Although it was six thirty in the morning Bette new the reception desk would be able to call Kit or Shane out from Angelica’s room to take her call.

    “How’s she doing Kit?” Bette asked once the nurse handed the phone to her sister.

    “Ahh she’s beautiful baby sis, she’s alert and playing and laughing, and she even had some formula. The doc says if she keeps taking the formula they’re gonna take her off the fluids and they want to get Tina to restart breast feeding her when she comes in.”

    “Oh that’s so good to hear,” Bette sighed. “How are you holding up Kit? Is Shane still there with you? You know you could go home for a bit and leave Shane, we should be back in an hour or so as soon as Tina wakes up”

    “No, no Bette baby it’s okayI’m glad I’m here, and anyway I had a nap earlier. How is she? You know yesterday she was in a really bad way” Kit had interrupted.

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    1. finally..some good news..im so glad Angie is fine now her mamas have to help each to be fine again and for good..another great chappy as always..ohh im still waiting a nc-17..lol..thanks for the update :o)

    2. So happy to see the girls talking to and understanding each other and letting the love show. Shane is such a marvel and so wise for one so young. Thanks for the post.

    5. Crush are you feeling okay? This was such a happy chapter. Just the right balance and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for the shoutout at the beginning. Now that Tina is her “old” self, will Bette have a change of heart and stay or are you just lulling us into a false sense of security. I eagerly await your next chapter.

    6. Very nice C! It seems the girls finally get some peace that they deserve. So much better than forlorn drama that makes my heart ache. This post makes me happy – and your writing is so fluent and easy to read that it just makes it better!

    7. I think your love scene was fine, as it was invested with emotion. Really, when you get right down to it, the mechanics are pretty much the same from story to story: tab A goes in slot B, and so on… It’s the dialogue and depth of emotion that sets a scene apart. You accomplished your mission and I am satisfied with your result. NC-17 was not needed in this case!

      Thanks for bringing closure to some trying times for B&T. You had us up there, circling the field, and now you’ve brought us in for a safe landing!

      Thanks!

    8. Tina waking up ‘in situ’ and resuming her quest the next morning was hot. And novel!

      The drama is in the details! Those were great details!

      Thank you!

    9. You have done an excellent job with this story. You have shown the reality of an affair and it’s long term effect and how this couple had to communicate to over come it. Great job **clap clap clap**

    10. i can’t really remember any words thinking bout tina in a bikini.*lon pause* LOL!!!! beautiful chap without a doubt beautiful and romantic as usual. this chap and whole damn story is really *blank*!!!!!!!!! still at a loss for words. *MWAH*

      please post soon. PEACE.

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