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What will she do next-Revised chapter 22
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Tina brought the little playpen out to the shaded side of the pool so that everyone could fawn over Angie, but mostly so that she could keep an eye on her. Alice helped Bette out in the kitchen, and was currently ferrying food and drinks out to the guests by the pool.
Bette had to laugh at Tina a little because as nervous as she was about Angie’s well being it didn’t stop Tina from showing off her swimming prowess when Shane had challenged her to a race in the pool. Tina was an excellent swimmer, Bette sometimes forgot, as Tina burned so easily and would usually avoid the sun and water whenever she wore a swimsuit.
For some reason today, however, Tina was wearing a skimpy tight red two piece bikini that hugged her newly reacquired gorgeous figure.
Bette found herself drooling over the sight, but continued to watch from the kitchen as Alice, Carmen and Kit egged both women on as they leaped into the water and began their clean strokes up and down the length of the pool. Bette had no doubt who the victor would be, and thought that Shane had been a little foolish to taunt Tina. But when Bette watched as Tina, the clear winner, gracefully hoisted herself out of the water and briskly walked breathlessly and excitedly over to where Bette stood so that she could kiss her, Bette had been thankful to Shane.
“Are you gonna come in babe?” Tina asked with that certain twinkle in her eyes while dripping all over Bette’s clothes. Bette recognized this Tina, this excited, happy and sexually playful Tina and knew that she couldn’t say no to her.
“As soon as I finish up here I’ll come join you,” Bette said lightly smacking Tina’s soggy butt.
Shane all dripping and breathing hard dragged herself from the pool into Carmen’s waiting arms.
Alice saw this as an opportunity to make a little fun of her friend.
“Well that was a foolish challengedid you forget that Tina was the pool queen?”
Shane took a moment to catch her breath before speaking,
“I didn’t forget Al,” Shane answered plainly.
“So why then?” Alice continued, “Seemed like a pointless thing to do to me”
Shane wasn’t really listening to Alice anymore as she let her gaze fall upon her favourite couple who were currently engaged in some major lip locking in the kitchen.
“It wasn’t pointless Aljust look” Shane spoke again nodding her head towards Bette and Tina.
Alice looked at them and then back to Shane. ” You’re just a hopeless romantic aren’t you?” and then she shouted her favourite phrase,
“You two! Get a room!”
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finally..some good news..im so glad Angie is fine now her mamas have to help each to be fine again and for good..another great chappy as always..ohh im still waiting a nc-17..lol..thanks for the update :o)
So happy to see the girls talking to and understanding each other and letting the love show. Shane is such a marvel and so wise for one so young. Thanks for the post.
Wish you were writing for the show as this s/l is much better than the sprack about Season 3.
Everything seems okay, just waiting for the other shoe to drop. Either Henry or Helene. thanks
Crush are you feeling okay? This was such a happy chapter. Just the right balance and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for the shoutout at the beginning. Now that Tina is her “old” self, will Bette have a change of heart and stay or are you just lulling us into a false sense of security. I eagerly await your next chapter.
Very nice C! It seems the girls finally get some peace that they deserve. So much better than forlorn drama that makes my heart ache. This post makes me happy – and your writing is so fluent and easy to read that it just makes it better!
I think your love scene was fine, as it was invested with emotion. Really, when you get right down to it, the mechanics are pretty much the same from story to story: tab A goes in slot B, and so on… It’s the dialogue and depth of emotion that sets a scene apart. You accomplished your mission and I am satisfied with your result. NC-17 was not needed in this case!
Thanks for bringing closure to some trying times for B&T. You had us up there, circling the field, and now you’ve brought us in for a safe landing!
Thanks!
Tina waking up ‘in situ’ and resuming her quest the next morning was hot. And novel!
The drama is in the details! Those were great details!
Thank you!
You have done an excellent job with this story. You have shown the reality of an affair and it’s long term effect and how this couple had to communicate to over come it. Great job **clap clap clap**
i can’t really remember any words thinking bout tina in a bikini.*lon pause* LOL!!!! beautiful chap without a doubt beautiful and romantic as usual. this chap and whole damn story is really *blank*!!!!!!!!! still at a loss for words. *MWAH*
please post soon. PEACE.
Yes Bette and Tina happy and so happy for them!