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    When We Were Young

     

    Tina blushed at Mark’s palpable excitement. My cheeks, however, flushed bright red with jealousy.

     

    “You’re the new girl right? What’s your name?” Mark inquired, apparently mesmerized by the girl’s accent too. For the moment, I set aside the urge to give the precious birthday boy an accidental knee to the groin. I was dying to know the answer to his question.

     

    “Tina.” She says with a bashful smile. There was a hint of a blush again. Not good.. for me, that is.

     

    So.. Tina, huh? I knew another Tina in my school, but she was nowhere near as pretty as this one. Actually, my classmate Tina was downright ugly that she basically sullied and destroyed the name Tina for me; so much so that I began associating that particular name to ugliness. Now, I stand corrected, not all Tina’s are pudgy, have huge gaps between their front teeth and are obscenely annoying. This pink-clad blonde before me managed to change my opinion. My classmate Tina was a fluke; this Tina was the real deal.

     

    “Do you want to play jump with me?” Mark invited, pointing a thumb at the giant trampoline that my father bought for us during Christmas. Even though she was wearing a dress, Tina readily agreed. Come to think of it, she was always quick to say yes to everything Mark proposed that day. I pegged it to the fact that it was his birthday and she was only being gracious; but when it continued for days on end, I grew worried.

     

    “Tina.. watch this!” Mark exclaimed in between jumps a while later. With a powerful heave, he jumped higher than usual and attempted to perform the blackflip that Roger, Kit’s boyfriend, taught us how to do. I coughed on a fist and hid a snicker when he landed awkwardly on his butt. He tried to do that stunt everyday, but not once was he able to pull it off.

     

    “Are you alright?” Tina hopped over to his side instantly.

     

    “I’m ‘kay.” Mark mumbled shamefully, jumping quickly to his feet to alleviate some of his embarrassment.

     

    “That was cool, though.” Tina consoled.

     

    At the side lines, my brown eyes flickered green with envy. And before I knew it, I had climbed up the trampoline and joined them.

    Comments

    1. Wow.. It was a long post. But am I greedy if I tell you I want more? :P Thanks much for sharing this sweet and fantastic story with us. You have portrayed Bette’s thoughts and feelings so well and articulately. Look forward to your next post ^^

    2. Nice to hacve you back with this one. I love the long postso I am already enjoying the reading before even starting reading it lol. Okay going to read now!!

    3. Thoroughly enjoyed this story. It capatured all the feelings and nuances of first love. All that one feels, the heightened feelings of joy just seeing her, being in her presence and the misery when she wouldn’t acknowledge you. Great story. Thanks for sharing and posting.

    4. Dearest Alchemy10, you always write very mesmerizing stories. Bette becomes very human, clumsy, cute but nevertheless attractive under your pen. Thank you for the entertaining story, I hope you will continue to spin more tales.

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