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When We Were Young
My brown eyes flashed red with murder. If only she knew why I was feeling so ‘spoil-sporty’ today. Although like always, I’m sure she’d never understand. She angered me so much that I told her that I would rather shave my head than ever play another game with them again. Of course, that threat was far from serious; but at that time, my temper was urging me to play the part of the scorned woman to the full. I walked away from her and Mark in a childish huff, held head high and lips pursed firmly shut in contempt. When I was a safe distance away, curiosity got a hold of me and I took a quick glance at their direction. I bet they were standing there dejected, full of remorse for losing their playmate. But I guess that was only wishful thinking from my end. Tina and my cousin were having the time of their lives at the slide, paying my departure no mind. My heart dropped in disappointment. My head soon followed, and I dragged myself home with my teary brown eyes planted firmly on the ground, my head hung dejectedly.
Three’s a crowd. And it sucks to be the odd one out.
I bawled my eyes out as soon as I got home, and if not for my mother’s consoling arms and soothing words, I would’ve cried myself to sleep that night.
The next day, despite bold claims to the contrary, I found myself at the playground again. I didn’t know what I was doing there, or what prompted me to go. All I know was, I was thinking of her all day, and before my pride could talk some sense into me, my feet were already moving on their own and tracing a path where my blonde tormentor held court. I could always proclaim otherwise, but I could never stay away. That girl had roped me in from the very beginning, and I was just the puppet at the end of her string – going anywhere and doing anything she willed. Yeah, I was hopeless. I was a glutton for punishment. Tina was more than an addiction now, I think she had made herself such a significant part of my life that she could very well be the very air I breathe. I was in trouble, that much is certain. When I joined her and Mark at the monkey bars, she didn’t question my return. Somehow, I felt that she knew I wasn’t going to keep my word anyway. Did she really know me that well or am I just predictable when it comes to her? Honestly, I don’t know the answer. But sometimes I daydream about what she’ll do or how she’ll react on the off-chance that I do follow through with my threats and stay away. Will she woo me back into the group? I certainly hope so.
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Gosh….that was phenomenon!!
A new story,nice surprise.
I really really enjoyed reading it even if it was hard somtime to feel Bette pain.Thank you for this fantastic story. Wow wow wow!!!
Great story. Your depiction of Bette’s feelings were so clear – her love, her pain, her happiness. Just wonderful.
Oh my Goodness!! That was the sweetest, funniest and greatest story! Made my day. Thank you so very much!
Brilliant! You captured beautifully the awkward, crazy pain of a first/forever love! Thanks for sharing!
A very gorgeous story. Thank you for sharing it with us. “You’re it, Curly tops!” So charming.
Wonderful. Thank you enjoyed every word. Thank you for giving us another story.
This, was perfect. Yet, if you decided to rewrite the phone book, I would read it.
Wow…I’m speechless–this was great! I’ll take your long one-offs anytime! Working on the sequel for JTG 2.0 yet? :)
Seeing this post just made my day loved it what a nice surprise thanks
Wow.. It was a long post. But am I greedy if I tell you I want more? :P Thanks much for sharing this sweet and fantastic story with us. You have portrayed Bette’s thoughts and feelings so well and articulately. Look forward to your next post ^^
This is just as “AMAZING” the second time through as it was the first time. Thank for this incredibly well written story.
oh so cute I love the way they find each other every time in Ur storys
Nice to hacve you back with this one. I love the long postso I am already enjoying the reading before even starting reading it lol. Okay going to read now!!
Really enjoyed reading this
Thoroughly enjoyed this story. It capatured all the feelings and nuances of first love. All that one feels, the heightened feelings of joy just seeing her, being in her presence and the misery when she wouldn’t acknowledge you. Great story. Thanks for sharing and posting.
Dearest Alchemy10, you always write very mesmerizing stories. Bette becomes very human, clumsy, cute but nevertheless attractive under your pen. Thank you for the entertaining story, I hope you will continue to spin more tales.
love stories like this.. a nice look into tibette love….great!
Pure genius
I’ve just joined this site and here is a short I wrote about Bette’s thoughts during Jenny’s Lez Girls party. Please let me know your take on it. I’d be grateful. https://lesfan.com/?p=83822