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Chapter 13
While they each ate, Angelica found herself laughing most of the time. The band was late in getting started so it was still quiet enough for the two of them to talk. It seemed that almost everyone knew Frankie. Or at least that’s the impression Angelica got from all the women who stopped at their table just to say hello. The girl behind the serving counter was particularly friendly, sending both of them Sloppy Joes and chips. When she came by she just said there was extra in the back so not to worry. All and all they stayed at the Planet into the band’s first set, leaving before it was over. The total bill was only five bucks.
Walking out into the clear night, Angelica felt happy. This day had been nothing she had experienced before and she was loving her independence. Walking along side by side with Frankie, there was a comfortable silence between them until Angelica broke it.
“You are the popular one.”
Frankie turned her head acknowledging Angie’s words but not making any verbal comment just letting a smirk on her face speak for her. It was expressive enough for Angelica to understand that all those girls didn’t really mean much to Frankie other than being friends. Frankie just had a lot of friends.
They continued along a few more blocks until they came upon a chain linked fence. Inside the fence was a well lit area, the lights showing off three different skateboard areas, a bowl, different ramps which seemed awfully steep to Angelica and various ledges, rails and quarter pipes. They continue a little more up the block until they come to a gate. Frankie walks up to the gate and opens it up.
“Well this is it, Sk8 Deck.” Frankie waves to Angelica to go first and then follows behind through the gate. “Over there are the tubes where we do our magic. This building over there sells the boards, wax, trucks and a bunch of other stuff we use. The other side has a little snack shop. On the other side over there is the new building which use to be offices but now have been converted to a shelter. We use those mostly to crash whenever anyone needs a place but they’ve started up programs and stuff. I usually stay away from these kind of places but this one is OK.”
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I’m so glad Shane’s on the ball! Good to see Angie’s got a friend in Frankie.
Jwet, I really like this chapter. I so thought that Kit would be the first to actually talk to Angelica, but it was SHANE!!! I love it, I love how she’s trying to sneak Bette in so she could see her daughter. I really hope that Angelica gets to see her other mother, but what about Tina?? Where is she exactly?? Is she still in San Diego or is she on her way back to LA?? Just wondering, can’t wait for the new chapter!! PPS!
jenny, jenny, jenny. you little cliffhanging queen!!! hope your posting soon my friend. that was great. thanks.
Well, I can see Bette letting Tina have it, but she should compartmentalize and not take it out on Angelica. I can see her being flustered at first, it’ll knock her socks off for sure, but the whup ass should be reserved for Tina. The new calm Bette with lots of perspective should take a mini vacation when she finds out who Angelica is and Tina finally makes her appearence… I’m sure you’ll figure out how to right the ship after the storm… : )
AAAAAHHHH,Jwet you really know hoe to build a moment! Your characterizations are right on target, that is exactly how I would picture Shane to react to Angelica. Post Soon!
You go girl with your writing…loving everything. Thank you for taking time out to entertain us. I’m falling in love with this story.
The time is getting close. I can only guess that Shane is about to come undone knowing that this is Tina’s child and most likely Bette’s also. This is so exciting.
it’s about time angie meets her family…thank you
Jwet….Please this is so freakin’ good that we need more soon. I am in awe of your ability to weave a complex story w/many parts. PPS.
That´s why I always loved Shane… :) thanks, dear! great chap!
Wednesday cannot come quickly enough! Just love the way you are weaving the connections…Kit catching a glimpse of Angelica, Shane recognizing Tina’s features, Angelica being captivated by Bette’s mural and the possibility of their working together…wonderful chapter. Can’t wait for Bette’s reaction upon seeing Angie. Thanks for a lovely read!
A great story, really complex plot which you handle very well.
Glad Angie meet Shane!
Yoda has eagle eyes. I knew it!
Great chapter, soon now, can´t wait how for everyone to “meet” again. Please post soon
Jewt, I haven’t commented before but I love this story and ur style of writing very much. I visited ur page n read ur other stories as well, they r all fantastically written very captivating. Well I hope u will post soon, I am looking forward to reading more of this story. :)PPS
Yay! At last! Shane is smart.. real smart. Hope that Bette would be the one to call Tina and tell that Angie is safe. Thanks for the great update Jwet. Looking forward to read the next chapter soon.
You know mate, I love all your technical terminology and skate descriptions, I now want to see you on that board giving some demo’s! Next time we’re over maybe!?! Grat story – loving the intricate web you so lovingly create and weave with every one of your stories. I’m getting excited to see if Bette recognised Angelica in the same way that Shane did! Just one request – can you type faster please? x
Crap, now I’m going to be sitting on the edge of my seat til your next post!!!!
Hey J – if you’re giving demonstrations to Jo I want a ticket too! LOL! I am smiling so freakin’ wide here! I am so excited that she finally hooked up with Shane. Why? One because quickly she will meet Bette and TIna will be on her way, so I KNOW that they will at least see each other. I don’t even have to mention, but I will, that it also gives Bette time to know her daughter and work closely with her, whether Angie knows who she is or not. I love that now that Shane knows, she can make sure Angie is taken care of and out of trouble. She damn near escaped a lot of bad stuff that could have happened to her if she hadn’t made the friened she did! I need, and I am not beyond begging, you to post soon! LOL! I know I haven’t been as good about it as I usually am and life takes over and all those things, but man I am on the edge of my seat here! Thanks for the post! Excellent as always!
Yeh!! This is getting so exciting. Can’t wait to see Bette’s reaction to Angie. PPS!!
great story! I admire your discipline as far as pacing the story and thereby prolonging the much awaited time of ‘the meeting’.I do admit that I can’t wait for it to happen and the sooner you post again the better:-) PPS
Hello JWet, Am blushing at your fine comments back at me. Thank you so much for those wonderful words. As you know, I just write it as I see it. I think that age and maturity come to the fore here. Only once you have lived a little can you really comment from personal experience. There is joy in the enthusiasm of youth but the majesty of maturity has its benefits. Now on to the story, holy moley that was perfection. It was awesome to read how Shane just instinctively knew that Angelica was Tina’s daughter. Yoda still has it all going on. Loved that she was quick on her feet and managed to arrange for Angelica to stay awhile and most importantly meet Bette. It was just one of those spine-tingling moments; lightning struck and then the earth shook. Shane is still the watcher of all those around her and her innate ability to see through the various veils people hide behind is legendary. Now Angelica just knew that Shane was there for her and had her best intentions in hand. I can’t wait to see if Tina phones Bette first or Bette meets her child first. Angelica is still a part of Bette if they were both unaware of the other’s existence. Tina may have a few questions to field in the near future. I am overwhelmed by your wonderful talent and ability to have things fall into place, just like dominoes; one falls and the rest follow suit until the image is revealed. JWet, thank you for continue to post these awesome adventures. I take so much enjoyment and pleasure from each one. Much gratitude from Your Loyal Fan.