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“Who will raise me now?” chpt.6
Bette: (Anxious) “So did he?”
Shane: (She looks the brunette in the eye) “No. He said he was coming and he never showed up.” Bette bowed her head. She was silent for the remainder of the ride
An hour later
Shane pulled up in front of Tina’s aunt’s house. Shane cut the ignition off. She gazed over at Bette. She looked sorry and desperate. She could tell that she was in love with her friend, although she had never told her. By taking the ride displayed this.
Shane: “Look, I really like you. I do. But, before you go in there. I have to ask you something.”
Bette: “What?”
Shane: “Do you love my friend?”
Bette: “Yes.” She gazed over at the house. She wondered what Tina was doing at the moment. “I’m in love with her too.” Shane smiled and bowed her head. ‘Yes’ She thought. “Do you think that she’ll want to see me?”
Shane: “Yes. She sent you that letter for a reason Bette. Need I mention with the address on the bottom.” Bette chuckled and so did Shane. “This will be one experience she’ll never forget. Hey, look at it this way, at least you didn’t do what asshole did. And then he wonders why he can’t get her back. What a fuck up?”
Bette: (Nervous) “You’re right…” She rubbed her eyes. “I’m so nervous. I can’t stop shaking.” Her knees knocked together.
Shane: “Hey, don’t worry about it. You’ll do fine. Now go…” She reached over and opened the door for her. Bette steps out and stands. Shane then reaches in the back seat and retrieves the dozen roses that the brunette asked her to pick up for her. “Here, you don’t want to forgive these.” Bette takes them and holds them close with both hands.
Bette: “Okay, bye.” She closes the door and walks up to the porch. Her heart beat heavidly. She’s never been this nervous before. Suddenly, she gazed back and looked over at Shane. She smiled and lip synched ‘Thank you.’ Shane bowed her head and lip synched back ‘You’re welcome.’ Shane urged her to ring the bell. Bette nod her head and turned back to the door. She placed her hand on the button and pressed it. ‘DING! DONG!’
To be continued…
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What you can’t stop there! Come on you have to give us more. Today hopefully. Please Post Soon. ;)
wao! you enjoy do it this finish in that paragraph isn’t it? i hope Bette can open her feelings with Tina. I can’t wait for the next chapter
Way to go Bette. You go and get your woman. I hope that Tina realizes how much that Bette cares for her. Bette has been so sheltered that she needs for Tina to step in and help her out instead of running. Now, unblock those words from your brain and place them on the paper.
You did not just stop it there. Don’t give us you ran out of things to write. Come on, get those fingers moving,(on the keyboard), and get back to us with another chapter.
NOOOO…….NOT…..TO BE CONTINUED….YOU HAVE TO POST ANOTHER CHAPTER NOW….PLEASE…..IM BEGGIN
Not nice to leave us like this. This is getting good and love it. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Ran out of things to write, my butt! LOL So Bette was blasting Brandy? If I wanted to blast music it would be something fast and loud, not Brandy. lol
Lamentamini-you are so crazy girl…lol. And for your information I did run out of something to write. I swear. I’m trying to think of how will I bring Tina in here. I’m still deciding, but I won’t disappoint you if that’s what you’re thinking. No way. Thanks for your comment.
oh no you didn’t just do that
I’m sorry Jackiee1, but I had too. Besides, I ran out of things to write. Sorry…lol.
LMAO! Great CFTW! that took a lot of guts for Bette to do, ring the bell… Tina has to stop running away from her problems but hey, at least this ‘problem’is following her around LMAO
Oh the tension. This is a lot of fun!!!