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“Who will raise me now?” chpt. 9
Bette:"Shh. It’s okay…" She strokes her hair. "Hey…" She looks in to her eyes. "Our love doesn’t stop here. We have more years to come. I’ll write to you every moment I can."She brings her hand to her mouth and kisses her palm.
Tina:"Don’t do this…"
Bette: "Do what?"
Tina:"Say goodbye."
Bette:"What am I to say?"
Tina:"Say you’ll see me later…" She wipes the tears from Bette’s eyes.
Bette:"I’ll see you later." She cries more.
Tina: "Later…"Tina squeezes her tight.
Bette:"I wish there was something I could do…" The brunette whispers in her ear.
Tina:"Me too…"Tina’s father approaches them and pulls them apart.
Dad: "We have to go…"
Tina:"In a second."
Dad: "No, now!" He pulls her away and Bette tries to follow her, but Kit holds her back.
Bette:"LET ME GO!"
Kit:"It’s better this way…"
Bette:"NO! TINA!"
Kit:"Shh. It just hurts for now, but the pain will go away. I promise."
Bette:"TINA! GOD, GET OFF ME."She struggles and pushes Kit away. She ran outside just when the car was backing out of the drive way.
"TINA!"
Tina:"BETTE!"
Bette:"TINA!" She ran after the car. "TINA!!!!!!" The car continues down the road. Bette collapses in the dirt and buries her face in her hands. She sobs uncontrollaby."WHY?????????" She stares up at the clouds. "Why me?" Kit runs over with tears in her eyes.
Kit:"Come on…"
Bette:"NO!" Kit picks her up and carries her over to the car. Angus hops out and helps Kit place her inside.
Bette:"NO! TINA!" She began pulling her hair out.
Kit:"HOLD HER!"
Angus:"I AM! BETTE! CALM DOWN!"
Bette:"TINA!"
Kit: "Do you have her?"
Angus: "Yeah, lets go."Kit starts the car and backs out of the driveway. She heads down the road.
Kit’s house…
Bette’s cries non stop in the back seat. The display of a red nose and red eyes shows this. Kit feels sorry for her. She cuts the car off and relaxes in her chair. The brunette continues to cry. She cries harder when she sees the house that Tina once lived in.
Kit:"Bette…"
Bette:"Just leave me be, please."
Kit:"Okay…" Kit gazes over at Angus. "Lets go inside."
Angus:"I’ll grab her things…"
Bette:"Don’t touch my stuff. Leave everything the way it is."
Kit:"Okay…" Kit bows her head. "Come on baby…"
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(10 votes, average: 4.40 out of 5)
love this story… and i also vote for a sequel… now keep them safe and in the sequel fast forward enough years so they can be together… please continue
At least they get to spend the night together. I could see a sequel to this story. Tina and Bette meet as adults and fall deeply in love all over again. Only this time Bette is the Alpha one and Tina is the one who again steals Bette’s heart. This time to never give it back ever (do you hear IC never).
Definately you need to write a sequel! lol..man, you can’t just separate them like this. please post soon
wow, what a drama…post soon
Juliet and Juliet…true love will find a way! Thanks!
Damn they need each other and hope you not let them apart like this. Damn drama coming and please post soon, thanks!
i love that Angus
oh my god I have to know what happens. Please Post Ch 10 soon. Very Soon.;)
Yes, you need to write a sequel. lol The story can’t end with them apart like that.