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Bette couldn’t figure out what was the blonde thinking. And she was too exhausted to do any more thinking today. So she decided to leave. Walking the several feet of distance between themselves, she stood next to Tina, and parted her lips. “I’m keeping my eyes on you.” It was a sentence spoken like a breeze on the waters, not a threat, not a warning, but more like a promise.
All of a sudden, Tina again forgot what she was struggling about and nearly lost her stance. At that moment, she wanted to hold Bette, she wanted to be held by Bette.
But then, a moment later, the brunette discreetly slid out of her room, and gently closed the door.
Tina walked to the sofa, and fell into the luxury it provided. It still had the brunette’s warmth and she snuggled into it, pretending it was a strong embrace. All the while she replayed their conversation, again and again. She analyzed every single gesture, every single word from the brunette, not because she had to, but because she had to. She was compulsively obsessed. And the theory Bette presented, it made her chuckle. Such a silly theory. Bette was intelligent, and very observant, but she was wrong, hilariously wrong.
But wait a second… If there was no logical errors in the deduction, what was the link that led her to a wrong conclusion. Tina suddenly shot up from the couch.
Bette said… Henry was taking up a lot more deals than the usual. Three solo deals this month. But why… why would he do something like that?
The next day, Tina went to the drug store, and saw detective Sweeney behind the counter dressed as a pharmacist. She came up to her for the assignment.
“Thursday two of the representatives from an Iowa cartel came into town. It’s highly possible they’re going to be discussing some business with Pulpo. These are the pictures.” Max discreetly handed the blonde a medicine instruction with couple of photos wrapped in it. Tina took a long look and memorized their faces.
“Sir, I have some concerns, regarding Henry.” She hesitantly asked.
Max looked around them and pretended to weigh some pills for the blonde. “Yes?”
“Has he been reporting about the deals he made this month?”
“No, he said Pulpo was lying low for a while.” Max looked at the blonde closely. “Why what’s wrong?”
“I don’t know, sir, but I will find out.” Tina took the bottle of pills. “Oh, and sir, could you help me search someone?”
“Ok what’s the name?”
“Bette Porter.”
Max shook a little, not recognizing the name and waiting for an explanation.
“We went to high school together and she is sort of involved here. Could be a liability.”
“Tina, if there’s an issue regarding your safety, you withdraw from the operation immedi—”
“It’s not an issue, sir.” “Not now, not that I have so many problems to solve.” Tina grabbed the pill bottle and walked out of the drug store.
TBC soon I promise!
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SO to the ladies who just broke my freaking twitter in the morning! You all crazy! But I still love you guys.
SassyGran, promise I’ll post very quickly. See? I’m staying up all night writing now.
Doc, haha Bette is not a tranny. That’ll be weird won’t it? Well, she has a guy’s name for some reason which I’ll explain later into the story.
LishaLove, hey thanks for the ideas! I’ll definitely think about them. And I’m so glad that you liked Round n Round We Go. I’ll try my best to not disappoint.
TN1, wkm, simonem, cellphone, bibi, mscully, I’m continuing! Thank you guys for the support! Don’t forget to leave me some comments and love. I’d love me some comments *batting eye lashes*
Peace :)
Ok, you now have me totally hooked on this story and this Tibette! Not to the extent that I will not keep reminding you of Lover in the Dark but ….
Please burn the midnight and post soon.
My twitter broke too!
SG,
I think the riot on twitter has affected you here in LesFan. LOL! Lover in the Dark is Phacey’s work. (Now I just suddenly remembered the scenes in TN1’s “The Dysfunctional..” Hi hi hi
Hahajahhahahha took the words out my mouth Scribe…ummm SG I think you had just about too many Cuppas lol
Oh sweety, here is a little love and hug for you;)
If it makes you update more and faster, i will give it to you freely and a lot more.
I think Eric/Henry is in big trouble and will be out before he knows what hit him.
Jodi, i didn’t like her in the show and she will give Tina a lot off trouble.
Bette, i can’t wait to hear more about her past and how she became ” Vincent”.
I am totally hooked.
Thanky you for the update.
I hope Bette is also under cover, love your story Thx
GM! Great post! I think Bette is either under cover or she is the Big Boss! Why would Bette say you are at the wrong person? Eric/Henry has being lying to the police force. He’s either starting his own side business(which he will be dead also) or he’s double crossing Pulpo. Something just ain’t right! I pray Tina and Bette stay safe. That damn Jobi has being faking all these years. I dislike that bitch so much. She’s going to be MAJOR trouble for Tina. Please keep her safe when she’s around her. PPS
I think it is also bette undercover cop and has better range than kennard
RT,
Yes we miss your “the lucky one” but when you are posting a story we know that we are not just settling for less coz u always make it a worthy one.
Congrats on this new story of your! Cheers!
Love,
Scribe
I too think Bette is undercover and that’s why she knows so much..but the part with Jodi digging her nails into Tina’s arm aarrgghh I was so ready to jump through this screen..and can we all say ewww Chlamydia just nasty Jodi tsk tsk
I am in agreement with the others…doesn’t matter the story, as long as it is from you, it’s a great one! I, too, am really hooked!!! I’m glad that Bette is still all woman (*sighing*)…yes, please explain the name. SG definitely added something special to her cuppa!
it really was a quick update, and I just now catching up to this story. but I loved it!
I’m glad that Bette no tranny, it would has been really bad. I’m sorry that Jodie is ill, but still doesn’t like her. I think she will be a great danger Tina.
I have so many questions, but I don’t want to bomb them to you :D
but please you give me more background Bette past.
I’m looking forward to the sequel!
The plot thickens. I decided Henry/Eric is up to no good and somehow Bette is a good guy. Loved it, thanks
you know I thought the original was pretty good itself, but your adaptation is amazing , more description of their emotions , that’s good,hope you can give us some NC -17,haha,coz it’s a pity the original skipped that.
So good, loving it
I sincerely hope that Bette is not really a criminal.
do not delay with new chapter.
5 stars .