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“We, are in a business.” So the brunette decided to humor her. She rested her elbow on the armrest and leaned her chin on her palm, an act strangely elegant and attractive in this given situation.“And it’s a business you know all too well, don’t you. Nobody uses their real name, honey. I, for instance, lost mine years ago. But you, I don’t get it, why do you need to change your name? You’re a nurse…unless you’re not.”
“I am a nurse.”
“Then what were you discussing with Eric not too long ago? He didn’t seem very happy.” Bette switched a position and crossed her legs again, not at all uncomfortable with this conversation.
“I don’t even know him.”
“There, bullshit. You’re not very good at this.” Bette sighed and shook her head. “I have a theory. You’re Eric’s backup, aren’t you.”
Hearing this, Tina’s heart almost stopped beating and she instantly turned pale. It was something she physically couldn’t control.
“I knew it.” Bette seemed content about her own ability to interrogate. “He’s thinking about running away, isn’t he? I noticed he’s been trying to get on more deals lately, heck he did three, solo, this month, and you’re here to help him transfer the money… but… you’re robbing the wrong person.”
“Wait what?” Tina did not anticipate this turn of event. She was completely surprised by the conclusion Bette just drew. It all seemed logic, but it was wrong. And she even laughed a little at the ridiculousness of this perfectly logical plan. Wow, that was…really?
The blonde’s reaction was something Bette didn’t foresee. She frowned and quickly went through every step of her theory again and everything checked out. But if they were not planning on running with the money, what were they talking about? “Then why don’t you tell me what was that about?”
“Ok, Eric likes me. He came on too strong so I shut him down.”
“That’s it?”
“That’s it.”
Suddenly a relieved expression appeared on the stunning face. Bette couldn’t express how relieved she was. Yet still, there was no explanation for the name changing. And upon that thought, her face dimmed again. She had to think it through, very very carefully and thoroughly before she came to another conclusion.
Tina was observing her. One minute her face lit up and it was the most beautiful thing she’d ever seen, and then another minute she was frowning again. It gave her an urge to smooth her finger on the tightly twisted brows, and make all the concerns go away. Bette already had small vertical lines in between her brows, for worrying too much. She was too young, too beautiful to be having those lines. “Whoa whoa what am I thinking? She just interrogated me and accused me for being a criminal! And she is a criminal herself! What am I doing? How could I think of her that way? What’s happening to me?” Tina widened her eyes as the thoughts again popped in her head. She was so preoccupied in that struggle that she didn’t see the brunette stood up and was about to leave.
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SO to the ladies who just broke my freaking twitter in the morning! You all crazy! But I still love you guys.
SassyGran, promise I’ll post very quickly. See? I’m staying up all night writing now.
Doc, haha Bette is not a tranny. That’ll be weird won’t it? Well, she has a guy’s name for some reason which I’ll explain later into the story.
LishaLove, hey thanks for the ideas! I’ll definitely think about them. And I’m so glad that you liked Round n Round We Go. I’ll try my best to not disappoint.
TN1, wkm, simonem, cellphone, bibi, mscully, I’m continuing! Thank you guys for the support! Don’t forget to leave me some comments and love. I’d love me some comments *batting eye lashes*
Peace :)
Ok, you now have me totally hooked on this story and this Tibette! Not to the extent that I will not keep reminding you of Lover in the Dark but ….
Please burn the midnight and post soon.
My twitter broke too!
SG,
I think the riot on twitter has affected you here in LesFan. LOL! Lover in the Dark is Phacey’s work. (Now I just suddenly remembered the scenes in TN1’s “The Dysfunctional..” Hi hi hi
Hahajahhahahha took the words out my mouth Scribe…ummm SG I think you had just about too many Cuppas lol
Oh sweety, here is a little love and hug for you;)
If it makes you update more and faster, i will give it to you freely and a lot more.
I think Eric/Henry is in big trouble and will be out before he knows what hit him.
Jodi, i didn’t like her in the show and she will give Tina a lot off trouble.
Bette, i can’t wait to hear more about her past and how she became ” Vincent”.
I am totally hooked.
Thanky you for the update.
I hope Bette is also under cover, love your story Thx
GM! Great post! I think Bette is either under cover or she is the Big Boss! Why would Bette say you are at the wrong person? Eric/Henry has being lying to the police force. He’s either starting his own side business(which he will be dead also) or he’s double crossing Pulpo. Something just ain’t right! I pray Tina and Bette stay safe. That damn Jobi has being faking all these years. I dislike that bitch so much. She’s going to be MAJOR trouble for Tina. Please keep her safe when she’s around her. PPS
I think it is also bette undercover cop and has better range than kennard
RT,
Yes we miss your “the lucky one” but when you are posting a story we know that we are not just settling for less coz u always make it a worthy one.
Congrats on this new story of your! Cheers!
Love,
Scribe
I too think Bette is undercover and that’s why she knows so much..but the part with Jodi digging her nails into Tina’s arm aarrgghh I was so ready to jump through this screen..and can we all say ewww Chlamydia just nasty Jodi tsk tsk
I am in agreement with the others…doesn’t matter the story, as long as it is from you, it’s a great one! I, too, am really hooked!!! I’m glad that Bette is still all woman (*sighing*)…yes, please explain the name. SG definitely added something special to her cuppa!
it really was a quick update, and I just now catching up to this story. but I loved it!
I’m glad that Bette no tranny, it would has been really bad. I’m sorry that Jodie is ill, but still doesn’t like her. I think she will be a great danger Tina.
I have so many questions, but I don’t want to bomb them to you :D
but please you give me more background Bette past.
I’m looking forward to the sequel!
The plot thickens. I decided Henry/Eric is up to no good and somehow Bette is a good guy. Loved it, thanks
you know I thought the original was pretty good itself, but your adaptation is amazing , more description of their emotions , that’s good,hope you can give us some NC -17,haha,coz it’s a pity the original skipped that.
So good, loving it
I sincerely hope that Bette is not really a criminal.
do not delay with new chapter.
5 stars .