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Work to Do Chapter 12
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“And that’s about all you can understand, right?” Alice sighed. Her lower lip was raw from chewing.
Dana waited.
Alice finally looked up at her.
“Dana.
I would love to have an explanation. I would. I couldn’t be any
sorrier.” She stopped to swallow; her throat was so tight she found it
hard to speak.
Dana was extremely uncomfortable, waiting for Alice to continue.
Alice choked out what she needed to say.
“I’m
not expecting you to forgive me. I just wanted you to know that that
I’ve stopped, ever since the accident Dane. I won’t bother you again. I
promise. I’m I’ve stopped, okay?” Alice gave Dana a moment.
When the tennis player didn’t look up, Alice decided it wasn’t fair to put her in the position of having to be gracious.
Alice stood, taking her coffee and keys, with her.
“Okay, so I guess that’s it.”
As she left, she stopped behind Dana and spoke to her back.
“I’m
going to work hard to be your friend again, Dana. I know I’ve been
pretty much your worst nightmare for a long time. Yet, here you are
when I ask for help. I know I’ve got a lot of work to dobut you’ll
see.”
Dana
listened to Alice’s footsteps as she left the coffee shop. Watching her
run up the street thru the window Dana tried to decide if she felt
better or worse.
Dana’s Condo, two days later
“I got a card from Alice today.” Lara watched Dana for her reaction.
“It was nice, Dana. Very sweet.”
Dana looked up and offered her a mild smile before returning to her paper. “She mentioned she was going to write you.”
“She
did? Did she write you too?” Lara waited for Dana to put down her
newspaper and talk to her. She hated the way Dana always seemed
preoccupied with something when she tried to talk to her about Alice.
“She called.”
Dana looked up when Lara didn’t respond.
“She asked me to meet her for coffee,” Dana elaborated.
Lara’s mouth gaped. “Are you going to go?”
Dana blushed. “I already did.”
“What? When was this?” Lara began to feel uneasy.
“A couple of days ago?” Dana shrugged.
“You
had coffee with Alice and didn’t mention that?” Lara was incredulous.
“Dana. We’ve been looking over our shoulders for two months! Now you
have coffee with her and it’s not supposed to be a big deal?”
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This is one of my favorite chapter, simply because you gave real reasons to the possible spoilers (of course not counting the horrible Dana rumors) and hope that despite the whole situation, maybe they might just be able to work things out. Dana’s reaction to the stalking was painful yet wonderful at the same time. “when someone you love completely abandons you and leaves you wondering if what they had felt for you was real…you take what you can get” –LOVE this line, it summed up how she felt perfectly.It hurts to read the last scene, I feel Alice, fearful and cringing at Dana’s confession of her feelings.
OK capes I have to totally agree with Jac on this one. I don’t know what to say other then, I hate I have to wait for next sunday for your next installment. My chest hurts from feeling all the pain in that chapter. Well done. Deb
You were right about me loving this chapter cape, it’s very heartbreaking to read about Dana’s sincere confessions. I never thought about the radio shows and how cruel Alice can be on air. – I’m loving the fact that you take your time to explain every little detail in the most naked form. Which we won’t be (unfortunately) getting from the real show. – If I ever come across IC, I’ll be making sure she reads this story. :)
wow, is all i gotta say, Dana’s explanation to the whole thing was well written, especially that last line, that was a very nice touch to an incredible chapter, can’t wait for your next post.
This is a great story. Is it really your first? I think you are a really talented writer. Althought I did feel the slight change of style like you said, it doesn’t affect the wonderful insights of the charactors you are delivering. (Is this flattering enough for you to post the next one sooner? :p )
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, not only because of the way you write the ‘stalking’ phase through Dana’s perspective (which, btw sounds better than what they’re actually gonna give us) but you’ve also made me want to head down to Starbucks and order coffee for no good reason. Intentional or not, advertising works. Next I’ll be ordering some sweet Danish to go with that, tip included. So please post soon!
Gotta agree with Jac on this, too. It really helps some of the spoilers/rumors make more sense, and the whole thing is very real. Painful, but real, and I could see it really happening. I, too, loved that last line from Dana. Great job with details. Can’t wait for the next chapter! *cracks whip* Get to it!
Wow, great as always. This is one of the best stories I’ve read so far. Dana’s admitting to ‘liking’ the stalking was… so painful and what a great line! I’ll be waiting for more!
I really love this story. It has felt like Dana has been divorced from her feelings for much of the story. Now I understand why a part of her seemed to turn off, and she appeared to be experiencing things as an outside observer. I liked the guarded interaction between the two of them because it was so real, especially after what they had been through.I was surprised to find that Alice and Dana has seen each other after Alice ran Dana off the road. I always got the impression that the first time they saw each other after the accident was when Dana appeared at Alice’s door.I can’t wait for next week.By the way, I’d never call you Jenny! You’re much too cool for that! :-)
this is great and I hope that they work it all out soon please post soon I love it
i get confused myself about the time line- like 4 and half months between the therapy session on stalking and alice’s apology seemed long- but it’s right-i do have a time line drawn out- it felt supid to post it- but maybe i will. they have seen each other ‘around’ -plus at that party at shane’s when they fought by the pool about 3 weeks before she shows up at her door.
I forgot to add that I liked when Alice used the title of the story when she and Dana were in Starbucks. She does have a lot of “work to do” to regain Dana’s friendship. Both of them do.I’m looking at your timeline, but I have to reread the story first. I’ll email you.
Wow girl, respect, you give to the characters very good explanations to their actions. Beautiful and painful but well writen. Thanks.
hi cape – great job. i think the style is very good. i appreciate that you are explaining situations that won’t be explained on the show. i like the flash backs and then the present day scenes that explain their feelings. i like dana’s outlook on the stalking. i am glad dana is not throwing al under the bus.