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Work to Do Chapter 15
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Shane was a little annoyed with Alice for not stepping up this morning.
Of course Dana is upset. Maybe it would do Alice some good to realize
life moves on speaking of Alice, Shane choked as she spotted the
blonde heading for their table.
Scratching the ‘life moves on’ theory, Shane kicked Dana swiftly under the table.
Dana never broke concentration, that hurt, but she almost had it
“It needs more salt IN the shaker Dana, for balance.” Alice told her flatly.
The shaker collapsed as Dana sat up straight, retracting her tongue.
Gretchen, sensing she should remove her hand from the tennis player’s
inner-thigh, did so.
“Guess I’m late.” Alice ventured, watching Gretchen’s hand slide slowly from her ex girlfriend’s leg.
“Or just in time,” Shane mumbled to Carmen. “Have a seat.” She invited Alice.
Alice looked at Dana a moment trying to read her eyes. It was one of
the rare times she had no idea what Dana was thinking as Dana watched
her back, expressionless.
Alice swallowed. “No. I just ran in to use the restroom,” she excused herself, backing away from the table.
Dana watched her back away, holding her eyes for a moment before
returning her attention to her saltshaker. If Alice had hoped Dana
would follow her into the bathroom, she was disappointed.
Monday morning
Dr. Rudnick had not been surprised to hear from Alice. She was
concerned however to find five messages varying in tone from casual, to
sarcastic to serious and back to casual, ending with an message
apologizing for the number of calls.
“You must think I’m nuts,” Alice fretted when Dr. Rudnick reached her.
The doctor assured her she didn’t, asking her how she could help.
Alice paused. “I’m not sure… Dana and I may have broken up,” she said finally.
Stella thought for a moment. She refrained from the obvious question.
“Do you want to come in? I have 3:00 o’clock open this afternoon.”
Alice jumped on it, relieved. “Thank you.”
Dr. Rudnick’s office
Monday afternoon
Stella studied the photograph of ‘The Chart’ as she listened to Alice.
“So anyway ” Alice’s voice got small, “I don’t mean to get all ‘analytical’ or anything.”
“Heaven forbid,” Stella grinned at her.
Alice half sighed and half laughed. “I’m just really confused. How
could something that meant one thing to me for so long, suddenly
reemerge to represent something completely the opposite? “And it’s not
like the chart changed or anything It’s like I just finally looked at
the stupid thing.”
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I love Dr. Stella, why can’t she be on the show to help out Alice? Oh yeah, she can’t be on the show cause she makes sense. And Drunken Dana, there are no ways to express my glee at that scene! Great update!
Oh Capesquad, how am I going to last a week without knowing what happens next? How did you develop such amazing insight into Alice?
I agree totally with you really knowing what is going on in Alice’s head. I like the explaination of the chart. I can’t wait to see where you go with this. Great update.
Thanks to you, cape, I’m not afraid of watching the stalking Alice now… can you also make sense to the cheating Dane story line?
Please post soon…I can’t wait a week.
I think in such situations, it’s all about you and you alone. Dana can be a trigger, but staying away from her will not solve Alice’s insecurities. Only, they remain hidden and silent but they stay. Beautifully written as always and the inner journey into Alice’s life, heart and past is heart breaking. Thanks a million times – and even more thanks for deciding to post in such a Danish-depressing day.
I’m sure that was slander against Lenore somehow! It must be against all the rules, but I’d love to see Lenore and Alice with Dr Stella . . . I like the outspoken Dr Stella in this update. And dancing Dana of course. I’m staying with your version of S3.
I know I’m late in commenting but I am loving this story more and more with each chapter. Wonderful job.
I love the way stella alway put her points a cross about what she thinks is going on with alice and dana I love it so please post soon so I can see what will happen next with alice and dana
Dr. Stella is baadass. I wouldn’t mind having a seesion with her. I also liked where the idea of the chart originated from. Also since starlai’s requesting, what do you make of the ‘cancer’ storyline and Dana going bald? Please tell me it was an act of revenge brought on by Lara pulling a Lucy, but instead of the torture, she shaved Dana’s head off for dumping her and for riding off into the sunset with Alice? That way, there is no cancer to speak of. Nice update!