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Work to Do Chapter 16
Monday Evening- Milk
Alice arrived at the bar a little early. She was feeling too restless
to sit at home and decided to just go ahead and wait for Shane there.
Spreading her jacket on the seat next to her, she claimed two stools at
the bar. Signaling the bartender, she ordered a beer and couple of
shots for herself.
Therapy that afternoon had been both galling and troubling. She
suspected that Stella had intended for her to feel this way. She was
also pretty sure the good doctor had departed from the therapist’s
handbook.
Alice took in the Monday night crowd. Sparse. She felt a little like a derelict as the bartender served her order.
Shane arched her eyebrows at the shots as she sidled up next to her on
the stool. “That must have been an interesting session,” she commented.
Alice gestured to the same bartender to bring Shane a beer. “No *****,
Sherlock,” she agreed. She downed a shot for dramatic effect and
grinned at Shane.
Shane laughed with her. “Tell Yoda all about it.”
Alice played with her napkin, thinking a moment. What was so upsetting about today?
“Okay, well first off Dr. Stella pretty much called “Bullshit” on me at therapy today.”
Shane tried to hide her smile.
“Really? That must have been intense,” she allowed, giving Alice her most ‘concerned’ look.
Alice scowled at her. “Go ahead and smile Shane, you’re gonna break something.”
Shane grinned broadly.
“What did she say to you, Al?”
Alice rolled her eyes and took the second shot.
Coughing, she told Shane the Doctor found her evasive.
Shane smiled again. “Really?”
“She thinks I hide behind words” Alice peeled at her beer label.
Shane nodded thoughtfully.
“That I’m more aware of my feelings than I express.”
Shane waited. Alice continued to peel the label from her bottle.
“She said I’m stubborn about expressing myself.”
“Alice!” Shane cried, exasperated.
Alice looked at her friend finally.
Sighing she reported, “She said OF COURSE I’m in a relationship with Dana. She wondered why I’m being such an ***** about it.”
Shane gaped at Alice.
“She said that?”
“In so many words! And I don’t think they’re allowed to do that,” Alice added, shaking her head.
A moment passed before they looked at each other. Alice smiled
sheepishly. Shane snickered. They progressed from there to all out
hilarity at Alice getting in trouble with her therapist.
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When do The classes for Cliff Hanger and Teasing 101 end, How many of the writer attend? Dana is so darn cute. Alice needs her in her life. thanks
I love a naughty Dana,lol That was soooo hot. Loved the note…. Please give me more……. Can’t wait for the update. This was excellent!
LOLwhat a nice touch with the note. Ah this was an incredible update! i can’t wait for the next
aw, that is actually quite cute.
I just read this entire series so far and I am hooked! I love how you’ve incorporated the rumors of season three and made excellent efforts to correct all that has been done to our beloved characters. Keep up the great work and please post more soon!!
Very nicely done. I love the “Yours. Truly.” to end the note, great touch. I also love forceful Dana. How I wish we could see something even remotely close to this in S3, but alas I’m sure we won’t. (If the rumors/spoilers are true!) Anyway, great update.
Oh my Ear God, is this where the ‘Wild Danish Sex Ensues’ takes place? Alice may have read the note twice, but I’ve read it more than a dozen times. The kinkyness of Dana is so sweet! I loved it cape, bring on the next chapter!
ok – that note at the end was absolutely hysterical…im still grinning. i had to comment after that…
Yes layla gray, she was evil to leave it there, but that leaves more to our imaginations! ;-)
Wow…….you did it again Capesquad….left with mouth open and brain overloaded with thoughts of next chapter!!!! The note on the bedroom door was genius.
I really don’t know how to comment. My mouth’s dry, my brain’s fuzzy, my leg’s shaky… Horny butterflies in my stomach… :D You served us a combo of sweet and hot Danish. With a promise of a dessert ;)
Sweet intoxicated Dana, *laughs then swoon* The note at the end was a nice touch, she’s right you know, Alice need to stop thinking here ; ) From Alice’s “Don’t go” to Dana’s “I’m not here to talk” it’s a thrill ride of heartache and major swoon action. You’re evil to leave it there.
the note now that was funny I love this story so please post again soon
“Stop thinking Alice!!!” I like that. I hope you’ve given your mother the smelling salts and she’s sitting down . . .