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Work to Do- The Conclusion (FINALLY!)
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Friday
Dana’s Condo, later that evening
Alice let herself into Dana’s condo in a strange state somewhere
between anticipation and fear. While she was extremely turned on by the
idea of being with Dana again, she couldn’t ignore she was still
fearful of her problems re-emerging.
She and Stella had talked most of Thursday afternoon about how Alice
seemed to lose the qualities that made her uniquely ‘Alice’ when she
was in relationships that mattered.
Yet everything she liked least about herself seemed accentuated when
she was in love. Her abandonment issues, all her fears involving trust,
seemed to be heightened.
I’m like a ‘perfect storm’ of dysfunction’ she thought to herself.
She spotted the large note taped to Dana’s bedroom door. Dana’s
cheerful handwriting was visible from across the room, at the top she’d
written rather emphatically:
STOP THINKING ALICE!!!
I’ve had 3 cups of coffee. I’m showered and
I’ve brushed my teeth. Now please wake me up
and come fuck my brains out.
YOURS. TRULY.
Dana
Alice read the note twice before opening Dana’s bedroom door. Laughing.
The room was silent as Alice closed the door behind her.
Streetlights thru the window lit Dana’s form on her bed. Alice could
see that she was naked beneath the sheets and that she was staring
back at Alice. Despite the darkness they could each make out the
other’s smile
“You’re awake.” Alice whispered.
Dana nodded, reaching out to her.
Alice stared at her for a moment before taking Dana’s outstretched hand. “Dana.”
Dana tugged her into her, pulling Alice’s t-shirt over her head. Not
breaking eye contact, she slipped Alice’s bra off and went to work on
her jeans. Alice laughed shakily.
“So I guess we’re not going to talk about this?”
Dana smirked, sitting up and kneeling for better leverage; she pulled
Alice’s pants and underwear from her. She had Alice naked and laying
before her in less than a minute. Taking in her accomplishment, the
satisfied look on Dana’s face was quickly replaced by hunger.
Alice was in turn flattered and turned on by the change in Dana’s
expression. The soft light from outside highlighted the tennis player’s
beautiful form and features. Observing her, Alice was overcome.
“Okay,’ she finally managed, ‘Your note mentioned something about my
‘fucking your brains’ out? Who’s zooming whom here?” she teased.
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It is with great sadness that I’m writing this comment for the last time. *Sniff* This fic is on my top three favorite fics on this site, so thank you for giving meaning and reason to this ship. Anyway we can convince IC to flim your version of the story instead?
I’m saddened too that this is the end of your fic. This is one of my favorite Danish fics and I’ll miss eagerly awaiting Sunday nights for updates. It’s a great story Cape and thanks for sharing it with us. We’ll hope for the best in S3. I’ll go to sleep tonight with “Has Dana been a naughty girl….” echoing through my head (in Leisha’s voice of course!).
Cape – Absolutely wonderful story, from beginning to end. I can only hope to feel this good in 45 minutes, but alas, i don’t think so. I’ve told you this before, you nailed the characters wonderfully, their mannerisms, insecurities, and just overall characteristics. It was well written, meaningful, funny, sad and bittersweet. Sorry to see it go and hope to see something new from you soon! Thanks for taking the time to write and share it with us!
Awww this was a beautiful story, and I’m wit layla on convincing IC to film your version instead heh, Thanks for the story!!
Capesquad – It’s so wonderful to see you back, but so sad that this is the end of your story. I hope you will continuing writing danish stories. I look forward to reading your next one!
I’ve been waiting for the ending to this great story. I’m only sad that it’s over. I know its one of my all time favorite Danish fics. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks.
Fantastic way to end a great story. Really very realistic portrayal of their issues and yet you kept it funny and sexy! This is also in my top three faves so sorry to see it finish. Thanks for writing it.
awwww what a sweet way to end it. ive loved this story from the start. i’ll miss it. i hope you create something just as fabulous. great job
I can’t believe it’s over. :( I’m sad. Ummm… Can we also visit them now and then? Just drop by, see if they’re doing ok? :) Loved it Cape, thanks for the realistic journey.
You’ve finished it!? Unbelievable! So sad to see it end, just to make me happy I’m going to be in a denial state and still believe you’re going to continue writing this briliant fic. So when are you posting the next chapter :D? Thanks for giving us your insight to s3, desperately hoping it happens.