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    Work to Do Chapter 8

    It had taken Dana only a moment or two to unscramble her brains enough to grab Alice and kiss her back. Ardently.

    Alice had returned the kiss with equal passion, holding off the chorus of panic and rejoicing in her head.

    Smiling, she looked up at Stella who had sat quietly throughout her
    reverie. “So I guess she mentioned I broke up her engagement?”

    Stella tried but couldn’t stop the hoot of laughter. “Yes. She mentioned that.”

    Alice’s Apartment- Wednesday afternoon

    Alice was anxious to see Dana. After showing up at Alice’s apartment
    last week and their brief romantic encounter in the kitchen, Dana had
    fallen off the planet other than to leave a quick message on Alice’s
    machine about calling Dr. Rudnick’s office for an appointment.

    They were supposed to meet with Dr. Rudnick tomorrow and Alice was
    afraid that Dana had cold feet. If that was the case Alice wanted to
    figure it out now, not in Dr. Rudnick’s office.

    She had left the tennis player a couple of messages on her cell, one
    before her meeting with Stella and one afterwards. Both had been light
    communications, meant only to break the ice after that kiss.

    Alice felt awkward about calling again. Only recently had they begun
    tentative steps toward friendship. Alice certainly wasn’t at the point
    where she was comfortable just calling Dana up to go grab coffee.

    The buzzer disrupted Alice’s thoughts. Regret mixed with relief when
    Alice heard Shane’s voice thru the intercom. She buzzed her in.

    “Hey Al,” Shane greeted her friend.

    “Hey,” grinned Alice, pulling Shane into the living room and depositing
    her on the couch. “To what do I owe this pleasure?” Alice asked,
    curious. They’d seen each other at the Planet only an hour ago.

    Shane smiled sheepishly and admitted she had ulterior motives.

    “Something you said earlier stayed with me. It’s probably nothing.”

    “What was it?” Alice asked. A combination of intrigue and worry played on her face.

    Shane was quick to try and reassure her. “It really is probably
    nothing. But you had asked if any of us had seen Dana lately. When we
    said no you mentioned that she was keeping a low profile.”

    Alice nodded, cautiously, “Yeah? So?”

    “Well, I was just worried something I said, might have upset her,” Shane admitted.

    “What did you say?”

    Making an imaginary trace of her hand on Alice’s coffee table Shane
    heaved an exasperated sigh and took Alice’s hands in hers. “I may have
    given her the impression that you didn’t want to get back together with
    her,” she confessed.

    Wincing, Shane looked up at the silence from Alice.

    Alice looked back at her dumbfounded. “What?” she asked finally.

    Shane hung her head. “So you haven’t talked to her since I have then.” She guessed.

    Alice stared back at her cockeyed, “What the *****, Shane? How did you happen to say that?”

    “You did say that Al,” Shane pointed out in her defense.

    “Shane!”

    “I don’t know!” Shane wailed. “You said you guys were going to couples
    therapy. She said you were sleeping together. I just wondered WHY you
    weren’t getting back together?” she threw her hands up in frustration.
    “I’m really sorry Alice.”

    Alice considered what Shane had told her.

    “It’s okay, Yoda,” Alice assured her with an embrace.

    “We’re kind of tough to read these days,” she agreed.

    “No *****,” Shane smiled sadly. “I am sorry Al.”

    “Hey. How many times do I get to bust on you for gossiping, right?” Alice smiled.

    She walked Shane to the door, offering more assurances that she hadn’t
    caused any irreparable damage. “Certainly not more than anything I’ve
    caused myself,” she thought.

    TBC

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    Comments

    1. I loved it when Alice thought back to her motivations for the 4am kiss. Your reasoning was excellent. I love how fanfic can be used to fill in the blanks that the show leaves.

    2. Good job with Alice’s character! I thought you’ve got it spot on! I loved how you threw in pre-4am scene in there. But you lost me at post-4am scene. You know..because my mind wanders. It’s a problem, I’m working on it. But your witty writing brought me back into it. LMAO at the “I come from Lenore” line, nothing can top that line unless…Go on I dare ya to! My lame attempt to make you post soon…is it working? Please say yes.

    3. In all your chapters there’s always at least one line that totally cracks me up. This week it was “I come from . . Lenore”! Loved it all. And you’ve made me late for work.

    4. “wild sex scenes ensue” your words not mine. Great chapter again! So how long are you going to make us wait for the above scenes? Don’t be such a tease. LOL

    5. I utterly adore that scene between Alice and Dr. Rudnick. It was so true to Alice’s character, the awkwardness, the little jokes and if I ever need a therapist, Dr. Rudnick would be my first choice. That’s what I love about the way you write, witty, funny and emotional at the same time. Hard to accomplish but you do it so well.

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